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Against All Odds – Chapter 18 ((Final))
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Shane blinked as she saw more change in Dana, her heart began to beat even faster than it had been earlier. It filled with so much hope as she looked down into the confused eyes of her lost friend.
"Dana . .?"
Dana blinked, a wave of Jodi’s spell overpowering her and she swung her sword wildly in the air. Shane quickly dodged the attack and kicked the sword out of Dana’s weak hand, kneeing her on the cheek to still the soldier. Dana’s head whipped to the other side and coughed out in pain, a small trickle of blood falling from her lips as she heard her friend cry. Yes, that’s what Shane was. Her friend.
Dana slowly turned her head to look at Shane once more and felt a huge force lifted from her body. Another memory filled her mind, one of her sparring with Shane. Bette was watching from a distance with approval, coaching them both from the sidelines. Shane was too eager, she had attacked head first and Dana was easily able to dodge the attack. Shane slipped on mud and fell to the floor with a loud crash. She looked up to Dana and Bette with confusion in her eyes and there it was . . the reason for their laughter.
Dana blinked the memory away however much she loved it and saw Shane slowly raise a sword over her head. There were tears falling from her eyes.
"I-I’m sorry Dane . . I tried, I really did . . please forgive me"
Dana’s eyes widened in realization at what Shane was about to do. She tried to move but her body was too weak, she was fading in and out of consciousness from Shane’s latest blow. Dana struggled to move her lips, she nearly died as she felt them tremble. Her tongue moved freely around, tracing over her teeth and at last licking her dry lips. Dana had control over mouth again.
She opened her mouth to speak just as Shane began to slam down the sword onto her body, everything seemed to be moving in slow motion.
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aww so sweet thanks liah for this wonderful tibette story I loved it.. hope to read much more from u soon..
Thanks for the story. I really enjoyed it.
Yay!!!!!! 😍 for the awesome ending and oh no!!!!!! 😭 for the awesome ending. You did it again Queen B, you rocked my world. Can’t wait for you to do it again. Thank you 😘
That was one of the best stories I have ever read thank you so much!
I love happy endings.Thank you very much for this story and please come back soon.
Fantastic Story! Wonderfully Written. And Thoroughly Enjoyed!
I loved this story I hope you have more. Thank you for posting.
Wow!! Thanks Liah for the wonderful story! I do enjoy reading it since the beginning :-) I hope you won’t be away for too long ;-)
This story was such a lot of fun, very imaginative and I completely enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it and I hope you’re back with another soon. Cheers :)
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for such a wonderful story, I loved it ;D can’t wait to read your next one.
That was just one of the best tibette stories I have read. Was just absolutely awesome. Thank you.
That was awesome and wonderful, love it. Love the happy ending and thanks for sharing this story with us. Hope to see you soon with a new story, thanks!
Wonderful. Please don’t stay gone long
Great Story! It was very well written and I enjoyed reading it thoroughly! I wish it didn’t end. I would love a sequel if possible or maybe some snippets atleast! Thanks Liax would love to read more from you in future. :D
Thoroughly enjoyed that because was it was a completely different storyline than I’m used to reading.
Fantastic tale and I loved the ending! Can’t wait to read what you next pull from your imagination. Thanks for sharing your talent!