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Against All Odds – Chapter 5
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Bette’s eyes snapped to Jodi, her thoughts invading her mind.
The King woke up from his trance and used the distraction to bring his sword down and cut into Bette’s left shoulder.
"AHH!" Bette cried out.
She stumbled back and gripped her shoulder with her right arm as blood trickled down her arm, covering her fingers.
"Bette!!"
Bette winced in pain and looked up to Tina, "I’m okay! Stay there!"
"How DARE you?!"
Bette whipped around and looked at Jodi, her face flushed with anger as she glared at the King. He looked as confused as ever.
"You don’t get to hurt her!"
Bette could have laughed at that contradiction but the matter was much too serious. Jodi moved in as if she was going to attack the King but Bette stepped in between them. Jodi stopped and looked betrayed, clearly not expecting Bette to protect the King after that attack.
She backed off, rage filled her eyes.
"Kill him"
Bette’s eyes widened, "What? Fuck no"
As soon as she spoke, she felt her heart sink. She knew what would happen.
Jodi smiled that twisted smile, "I said. Kill. Him"
Bette’s body stiffened, she gripped her sword tight in hand and faced the King. She took a battle stance as her heart began to thump hard against her chest.
"Jodi don’t do this! Please!"
Knowing her words wouldn’t be headed, Bette cried to the King in desperation.
"Your Majesty please! Get out of here!"
He held his sword stubbornly in hand, "What is this?! Stand down Caretaker!"
Bette inched forward him, her eyes glancing up at Tina still watching from atop of the tower.
"I-I can’t stop . . please just get away!"
"That’s enough out of you. Shut up and get the job done already" Jodi spat.
Bette was about to call out to Shane to disable her movements but she couldn’t speak, Jodi controlled her mouth once more. As Bette approached, the King took a step back and held up his sword ready to strike.
"I said stand down Caretaker!"
"Bette, what are you doing?!"
Tina’s voice from above broke Bette’s heart to pieces. She was crying through her words and the Bette was unable to do anything. Tears fell effortlessly from the brunette’s eyes, streaming down her cheeks, everything unfolding so fast Bette felt like she would pass out. She fought with all her might, the struggle in a way seemed to work but only very little. Her body simply slowed somewhat but never stopped its movement.
Jodi . . please don’t do this. I’ll go with you. I’ll go with you!!
Jodi ignored Bette’s pleas, it was too late to bargain.
"I said kill him!!"
The King realized that Bette wouldn’t stop so he swung his sword only for Bette to dodge it before she thrusted her own, the sound of Tina’s scream piercing through her mind.
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Noo don’t leave us there!! can’t wait to see what happens next! I feel really bad for Bette but surely you will find a way to fix all of this, right? ;)
Ohhh, you did not just stop there! Someone needs to come to the rescue, but who? And how? Can’t wait for the next one. Thanks! :)
This story is absolutely brilliant! Edge of the seat stuff! Pps
I hate cliffhangers.
well damn what a place to stop..please give us more maybe later today or tomorrow??? please pretty please lol
🐔🔫 OMG!!!!!!!!
Mother………father! I can’t believe you left us like that! JHChrist! Cruel. Now Jodi must die!(does that mean Bette and Shane would die also??) OH – I…
Would there by any chance be a slow painful death waiting for Jodi in the nearest future?
Fuck that jodi bitch, please someone come and kill her and safe Bette and Tina and the King. Please post more, thanks!
What?! Is this the end of the chapter??!! OMG… How could you Liah?!? :-O … Darn cliffy! :-( ooh!!! Does Jodi take over you also so you can’t post longer?! :-p lol… PPVS! Desperate to read more and hoping there’s a way out from this mess :-)
Oh Dear please let someone come rescue Bette and let her not have killed this king. You will make it right, right? Thank you for this story.
Im hooked! But Bette could’t, she must’t, she wouldn’t..did she? ;)
What a mess,please fix this.Poor Bette.Great story.PPS
OMFG!!!!! 😨 I had to read again to make sure I wasn’t going insane. Nix the Saw idea, let’s start from scratch. Let’s bring back quartering, using horses that is or mules in Jodi’s case. You are the Queen “B” (and I mean this with the utmost respect) of drama. Brilliant everything, loved it and want more. I’m on my knees typing this hoping you feel it. Thank you Miss Liah.