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Against All Odds – Chapter 5
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The King pulled his sword from his sheath and held it over Bette’s head, preparing to strike. Jodi immediately released her hold on Bette just in time for the brunette to dodge the attack and roll out of the way. She used the opportunity to speak.
"Your Majesty please!"
The King wasn’t listening. He swung his sword over and over as Bette dodged every attack.
"How dare you touch and-and-and . . ruin my daughter?!"
He swung again and this time he got so close to Bette, she had make her way to her own sword. She used it to deflect the attacks.
"Its not that you think my Lord!"
The King brought down his sword vertically with all his might just as Bette held hers up horizontally and met the King’s halfway.
The King put so much pressure down, his hand and sword were shaking. Bette’s were too, she was too exhausted from her struggle with Jodi’s hold but did her best to keep up.
"Why did you do it?! Why?! I trusted you!"
One of Bette’s shoes were on a wet patch of grass and she was losing her footing. She glanced down to see that it had been wet with Gooru blood. The King’s sword was lowering slowly and Bette knew that if she didn’t push him off, the sword would pierce her skin soon.
He pushed her back easily, damn the slippery grass.
"I asked you a question! Tell me why!"
"B-because I love her" Bette gritted through her teeth, her arms began to burn at the pressure she was putting on them.
She had the power to overthrow him but she didn’t want to hurt the King. Regardless of the situation, she respected him and he was Tina’s father.
"Father stop!"
Bette, the King and Jodi all turned their heads toward the sound of Tina’s voice. Up on a nearby tower stood Bette’s beloved and she was in tears.
"PLEASE! Don’t do this!"
What the fuck? . . I told that useless little shit to kill her.
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Noo don’t leave us there!! can’t wait to see what happens next! I feel really bad for Bette but surely you will find a way to fix all of this, right? ;)
Ohhh, you did not just stop there! Someone needs to come to the rescue, but who? And how? Can’t wait for the next one. Thanks! :)
This story is absolutely brilliant! Edge of the seat stuff! Pps
I hate cliffhangers.
well damn what a place to stop..please give us more maybe later today or tomorrow??? please pretty please lol
🐔🔫 OMG!!!!!!!!
Mother………father! I can’t believe you left us like that! JHChrist! Cruel. Now Jodi must die!(does that mean Bette and Shane would die also??) OH – I…
Would there by any chance be a slow painful death waiting for Jodi in the nearest future?
Fuck that jodi bitch, please someone come and kill her and safe Bette and Tina and the King. Please post more, thanks!
What?! Is this the end of the chapter??!! OMG… How could you Liah?!? :-O … Darn cliffy! :-( ooh!!! Does Jodi take over you also so you can’t post longer?! :-p lol… PPVS! Desperate to read more and hoping there’s a way out from this mess :-)
Oh Dear please let someone come rescue Bette and let her not have killed this king. You will make it right, right? Thank you for this story.
Im hooked! But Bette could’t, she must’t, she wouldn’t..did she? ;)
What a mess,please fix this.Poor Bette.Great story.PPS
OMFG!!!!! 😨 I had to read again to make sure I wasn’t going insane. Nix the Saw idea, let’s start from scratch. Let’s bring back quartering, using horses that is or mules in Jodi’s case. You are the Queen “B” (and I mean this with the utmost respect) of drama. Brilliant everything, loved it and want more. I’m on my knees typing this hoping you feel it. Thank you Miss Liah.