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All For Believing – 3
Laying on bed is supposed to be fun, calming and
relaxing, but at this very moment, I’m feeling none of these, what’s
wrong with the time, it’s passing too slow, or maybe it’s that damn
alarm clock that is not working properly, I glance at my watch and it
shows the same time.. uuurrgghh I close my eyes again, and keep
listening to the breeze hitting the pool water.. Oh I’m so not ready
for any visitors, who would be knocking at my door at this time? I’m
not in the mood to put the Happy Tina mask on.. I won’t answer, maybe
they’ll get the message and leave… Yup they got it, the knocking
stopped.. I glance at my watch again, only 5 minutes passed, damn time
is going too slow tonight… I hear the front door open, thank god
she’s back, but what do I have to do now?? I get off the bed, and go to
the living room..
T..?? Tina??
It’s
not her, it’s Alice, what is she doing here? And why the ***** did she
let herself in? I mean, she must have seen my car in the drive way..
Hey Al, what’s up?? what brought you here?
Oh my god T, are you ok?? sorry i let myself in, but I was worried that something might have happened to you and –
Alice, what is wrong? what are you talking about??
She
looked worried, concerned and her voice and eyes showed that she was
trying to be as careful as she could when she first saw me.. but now
all signs of confusion are all over her face..
uumm,
well Bette called me and she sounded real upset, she asked me to check
on you and Angelica, which led me to the conclusion that something
might have happened between you two..
What?? Bette called
her to check on us? why would she do that? I see Alice’s mouth moving,
I know she is still talking but I can’t understand a word she says.. my
face falls suddenly, I feel a heat rise up to my face, my heart starts
beating so fast that it might get out of my chest and my hands start to
shake.. What is this feeling that suddenly got over me.. Am I finally
seeing things clearly, I spent an hour on that bed, thinking about how
much time passed since she left the house, but just now i realized that
she left ME too with the slamming of the door..
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(51 votes, average: 3.61 out of 5)
Oh, my gosh, now you gotta give us another one today!! You can’t leave us like this?? :(
continue please…please…please…I like it…I hate begging but for you it’s an exception
im glad Tina make the move and i hope Bette will accept her apology…great chapter post soon thanks :o)
thank god, girl, last chapter about killed me…now i’m wiping the sweat of my forehead and getting all relaxed and happy again…thanks
I felt my throat’s tight when I read it. I felt like crying, but couldn’t let out. You know the feeling? It’s so moving… I love it. You’re a genius.I know you’re writing thesis on MB, but dunt forget to update the story soon. ^_*
hey you’re back! I would like to think the PM I sent you today helped you to find some inspiration to continue. THANK YOU! this is a great story. pls continue. I am glad Tina reached out to Bette. pls let these 2 fix this.
Please continue. Great story!! :D
I love your writing. I’m too proud to beg for more but can say please continue ASAP.
Damn this is so fucking excellent and you make me cry on this chapter, and please let them talk and work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I just felt compelled to drop a line and tell you how much I enjoyed “All For Believing”… beautiful, moving, sensitive, human, moral! Don’t stop now… “keep the faith” … :)
Good to see a post from you, Fa6Fa6, and glad to see that you want to continue with your writing. You really should. I’m liking where you’re going with this. I too hope that Tina’s attempt at reconciliation will move B&T’s healing along. Love the last line: “This is where I want you to be.. I’m sorry.” Hope to see the next chapter soon.