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All For Believing – 4
I hear someone breathing in my neck… oh no, I
didn’t.. Ok I shouldn’t freak out, what the ***** am I thinking, I mean
I have a wife; it’s no one but her.. But what if it’s not? We haven’t
slept this close in ages; lately we’ve been sleeping as far from one
another as we can.. Oh *****, just now her lips brushed my neck, but
it’s got to be my wife, I will hate myself forever if it’s not.. Who
else would it be? Ok Bette think, think, let me review the previous
night.. Me and Tina had a fight, I went for a ride, came back to pack
and leave but Tina asked me to stay and…. yes I stayed, I’m sure I
wasn’t drunk, I don’t even have a hang over, and all these things did
happen..
I open my eyes slightly, ’till they get used to the
sunrays that are covering the whole room, in a blissful way, I look
down at the hand on my waist and it is Tina’s.. I sigh in relief, I
still doubt myself, that one day I might wake up in another woman’s
arms, and ***** up like I did before.. I know Tina trusts me, but I
don’t trust myself, not after last night, after deciding to leave, but
I wanted to do what is best for her, I wanted to give her what she
wanted.. Damn, I was really going to ***** off this time, and leave Tina
and our baby, wasn’t I?? Tina is shifting more into my body, she is
getting as close as she can, I turn my face to look at her, as she
buries her face more in my neck, at that moment, our lips kind of meet,
but I back off a bit, I try to shift my body a little without waking
her up to be able to look at her face, I do and she groans slightly as
our bodies lose contact for a little bit..
I can see her face clearly now, her eyes look tired
although they are shut, that shows how exhausted she’s been lately, I
know she’s been more emotionally exhausted than physically.. And last
night proved how much she was, I couldn’t look her in the eye when I
came back, she looked vulnerable, as I felt I did but couldn’t care if
she saw me like that, I just didn’t want her to know that she was
transparent to me at that moment and I was able to see right through
her, that I was seeing how much she hurt, was she hurting for hurting
me? Or because I hurt her?
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(46 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
great..if they have faith and love they have everything ..BUT they have to talk and clear their thoughts..cant wait for more thanks :o)oh and Alice could be more funnny?..lol..
okay so your story has me captivated with each post…my only issue is, you post too far and few between!!!!! AND THAT’S NOT NICE!!! WHAT HAS TO BE DONE 4 U 2 POST MORE OFTEN????????
Why my/our/whatever Bette seems so miserable? She didn’t even get a chance to talk to Tina. Must Tina be strong enough to face everything after a complete outburst from Bette?
girl, where have you been? i missed this story and then you present something so sad and captivating at the same time…why two people who love each other can’t talk? but i think i can understand…thanks for the update
Oh my God, what more can I say? I am dizzy…
your story has mad me cry i love it and i hope you keep writing its amazing thankyou
Good chapter. Well they need to talk and work thing out before its get worst. Ok post soon please, thanks!
They love each other but Tina is no where near over the pain that Bette caused her. They need to make the time to talk and work things out. Please post soon.
I believe in them too…and you to give us more of this story very soon. Thanks for the wonderful chapter and I can’t wait to see where you take our girls.
Yes, they need to talk…”Tina, you know I’ll give you whatever you want, anything you want…”, but “Not now, it’s not the right time..”. However, “I believe in us…”. I’m hoping that you will take them/us there, eventually, where they will be able to deal with their pain. You’re doing a great job, Fa6Fa6. Please keep it up.
oooh great chapter. I like this story a lot. It’s sad, but theirs hope. even if it’s the slightest bit. keep writing. I’ll be reading.
okay — that nearly made me cry – gotta go and read the rest of the story but i really liked this — great stuff