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All I Need (Chapter 7)
The grin that tap danced across Alice’s lips only lasted for a few seconds before a more somber expression took over, “I want to apologize for how I acted the last time I saw you.” Alice fell silent for a few moments before continuing, “I’ve been doing a lot of thinking lately, and for once it’s doing me some good. I found out that I have more issues then I thought, and I’m going to try to work through them, rather then running in the opposite direction.”
“I guess we both have more insecurities than we’d imagined.” Dana said as she reached for her cup, “and I wish I had seen them before they blew up in both of our faces, but before you say anything else I hope you’ll let me tell you that I’m sorry I let mine get in the way of what we had.”
Listening to Dana’s apology, Alice realized for the first time since Dana had left she could actually feel the sincerity in her words. “It feels really good to hear you say that, and I know you’ve said those words before, but now I’m actually ready to accept them.”
Alice let her eyes wander around the café before her gaze returned to Dana. “It’s important for you to understand that my reaction to us breaking up had a lot to do with my past, and when you left the pain I felt ignited all those emotions I had learned to bury, so even though you hurt me my breakdown isn’t entirely your fault.”
“If you’ll allow me to help you, I’ll do anything you need me to.”
Alice reached out and placed her hand on top of Dana’s, “I want your help, but I’m not sure if I’m ready to let you get that close again. As far as I’ve come, a part of me is still scared to death that you’ll walk away. I know you’ll tell me that you won’t, but the irrational side of me says you did it once, so you’re bound to do it again.”
Dana looked down at their clasped hands, and for a second she allowed herself to enjoy the feeling of Alice’s touch. “As long as somebody’s there for you I’ll step aside until your ready to reclaim our friendship.”
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kerry is a lil cocky it seems
great post. i love that it’s more realistic then most stories. it’s only natural (usually) that we don’t trust people, no matter how much we loved them, once they’ve hurt us down to our cores. you’ve done a wonderful job portraying that. and it was nice to see dana stand her ground with kerry and let her know that she wasn’t going to back down or step outta the way.
Love it – can’t wait to see where you are leading us.
Great fic! Wow Alice has two women in love with her.. mmm good or bad? I can understand both Dana and Kerrys reaction to each other cos they are both frightened of losing Alice. I like the slow rebuilding of the Danish frienship, and it would be good to see Alice getting more and more self confidence back and making her own decisions.
I agree. It’s good to see more natural stories out there where Dana’s advesory isn’t a “bad person” who is also fighting for Alice’s affection. And this is coming from some one who is a fan of the supernatural verse. I do hope Alice and Dana get together in the end.
Great update! I want to like Kerry very much but I don’t think my Danish heart could take it. But it’s good to see a nice person fighting for Alice. But in the end Dana and Alice just belong together. But good for Kerry to keep trying that makes the Danish reunion that much sweeter. Keep it up! Looking forward to the next chapter.
a very nice read, and a very natural story..
can’t wat to see what will happen next please post soon i love it
Excellent story. Keep up the good work, but i gota say i hope that Danish is back together soon xx
I also agree with what all the others said about this story being more realistic. I’m so glad to see thatKerry has a backbone. I hope Alice will be stronger soon (although she already seems more self-confident). It’s going to be hard for her when both women are going to put up a fight for her (well, not an actual fight…more of throwing in all the charms they’ve got to win Alice). She is the one who needs to make a decision in the end.
Great job! I’m loving it. I’m hoping for an awesome Danish result. I can’t wait for more.