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All I Need (chapter 8)
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Dana, Shane, and Alice sat in front of the TV completely consumed by the events taking place on the screen. “I seriously cannot believe she just did that.” Shane looked at the two women sitting beside her. “I mean who the fuck does that?”
“If he doesn’t get rid of her next time then he has obviously lost his mind.” Dana said while reaching for the remote control.
“I don’t know guys I might keep her around.”
Dana and Shane looked at Alice with horrified expressions etched on their faces. “Dude, you have got to be kidding. The woman just shit on his floor. I don’t know about you, but when I get the urge I head to the nearest bathroom. I don’t just let it go where I’m standing.”
“Yeah, but she totally held her own once it happened. If I was on TV and had an accident like that I would’ve run out of the room crying and locked myself in a closet, but she just kinda shrugged it off.”
“She took a dump on his floor, and I may be cold hearted, but I would not be able to get passed that.” Shane said as she stood up to walk into the kitchen.
Alice looked at Dana, “Come on you can’t tell me you don’t have a tiny bit of respect for the woman.”
“First off the fact that she’s on Flavor of Love means I have no respect for her, and second off I’m slowly losing respect for you for making us watch this crap.”
Alice grabbed a pillow and threw it at Dana’s head, “I will have you know Flavor Flav was an excellent rapper back in the day, and I think he would make a fine catch.”
“Can you even name one of his songs, Alice” Dana asked
Alice fell silent while she tried to think of a response, “That is not the point, Dana. Even if you don’t want to admit it you know that program is entertaining, and if someone came up to you and offered you a show about a bunch of hot lesbians trying to date you, you would do it in a second.”
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shit. i really dont want kerry to get hurt. im not sure how you’re going to fenagle this one…
damn…that was really emotional. and fantastic. i can feel alice’s pain and dana’s desperation. what a situation. can’t wait to see how it plays out, you’re brilliant!
Ouch, that was pretty painful for all three of them, but still such a great update! Also congratulations on the job, I just hope it doesn’t prevent you from updating anytime soon, lol. Please post soon:)
oh my god how could you stop there?? i hope you will post soon… i’m hooked on the lezbo drama! amazing work!
Excellent chapter, keep it up. Its heartwrenching but addictive. Lets hope your new job doesnt get in the way of your posts – congrats by the way xxx
Great update – can’t wait to see what happens next. Obviously my biggest hope if that Alice & Dana get together again and soon.
ahhhh well this is hard to fathom they were back literally where they started…back in the bathroom!!
cana is right if alice had chose to let go them there would still be some pain and she would still be in love with dana but only eought to then be able to love someone else but alice is holding on to dana without thinking about it she has told dana her true feeling for kerry but she has not told kerry yet she needs to take a break from both of them so she can make up her mind of who she really wants please post soon great update
hey, great update! lots of angst – poor Kerry, i admit i’m starting to like her too… but not as much as Danish! Look forward to the next installment, it’s good that Al and Dana have been able to be honest about their feelings but I hope that they can resolve their issues soon :) congratulations on the new job!
Im really likin the way Danish are openly taking about their feelings with each other.. even when they are both hurting!! I feel a bit sorry for Kerry because deep down i think she knows that Dana is Alices true love, but because she is so in love with Alice herself she will try to bury it within and try to ignore it. Great story! keep it up. Oh and congrats on the new job!!
well, what else can I say than: excellent. that’s what it is. excellent. keep writing. please.
I must say Danish 103, your right that cop was bored, that’s a sh*&%%y excuse to pull someone over (on behalf of my profession I apologize), hope ya didn’t get an outrageous ticket. That’s lame. Congrat’s on the job!! This is my first time writitng ya, I’m one of those too busy ‘silent readers’ love your fic though. Well, my thoughts, I do think Alice needs some time alone as well. I think that Dana should not back down, but be cautious of her actions, they tend to push Alice further away. I hope they at least can have one good sexy night together, but I’ll take what I can get. Thanx for the posts!! Cheers! Aidan.
Lovely work. I’m really interested to see how all this Danish tension will be fixed… and I’m grudgingly becoming somewhat fond of Kerry so it will be heartbreaking either way. Congrats on your job as well! After that hell of a day you deserve it!
That was one bored cop! But one good thing came out of all the crap that happened, you’ve got the job! Congratulation.s :D This chapter was funny. Lol@ the scene where AlShaDane were bickering over Flavor of Love and Alice ‘comparing’ Dana to a puppy. (In some way she does have a point, Dana will be following her like a puppy.) Why is love always that complicated? I can imagine the struggle Alice is going through. I loved the role reversal, Dana dropping the line ‘Then come back to me.’ Can’t wait to see how you will bring back my two fav girls together.
Danish and bathrooms a lethal combination! They love eachother so much but they both need their space right now. I do feel bad for Kerry but I think deep down she knows that she will never get all of Alice’s heart. Great update and congrats on the new job.
Wow … I just read all 8 chapters in one sitting & I’m really enjoying this fic … eagerly anticipating another update … hopefully soon. I loved the line “Is this close enough? Can you feel the pain you caused me from this position, because I can’t get away from it.” Something about it just resonated with me. Keep up the good work.