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All I Need (Chapter 9)
Standing only inches away from Alice, Dana gently tapped the writer on her shoulder.
Alice jumped at the sensation of someone’s fingers lightly grazing her arm. Losing her grip on the phone, Alice helplessly watched as it bounced onto the neatly trimmed grass next to her foot. The writer swiftly turned around to face Dana, “You are so lucky that didn’t land on the cement.”
Dana shrugged her shoulders at Alice’s outburst, “It’s not my fault you’re clumsy.”
“Clumsy is when you walk into a wall, not when someone sneaks up on you, and causes the mishap.” Alice explained while poking Dana’s shoulder.
“Hey, I’m not the one lurking around someone’s house in the middle of the night.”
“Well, if someone understood the concept of picking up their phone I could have found out when you would be home, and then I wouldn’t have had to sit out here for an hour.”
“I was training.” Dana said while walking passed Alice. Reaching her front door, she turned around expecting the blonde to follow her inside, but Alice’s feet were still firmly planted on the bottom step. “You going to come in?”
Alice shook her head; “I think it would be better if we talked out here.”
Taking her hand off of the doorknob, Dana joined Alice on the last step. Alice gave Dana a grateful smile, and then gestured for her to sit down. “First I want to apologize for what happened at the planet. I shouldn’t have let my emotions get so out of control.”
“I’m the one who should be apologizing. I promised you I wouldn’t push, and instead I acted like a complete asshole.” Dana said, a tiny frown crossing her lips.
“I guess we both have reasons to be sorry.” Alice took a deep breath and watched the headlights of a car driving down the street. “I have a lot of shit bouncing around in my usually empty head right now, and all the clutter has started to make me feel a little crazy, so I’ve decided to leave town for awhile
Dana turned her head to look at Alice’s silhouette, “how long?”
“I’m not sure.” Alice said, turning to look Dana in the eye. “I rented a cabin, so I could have all the peace and quiet I needed to figure things out.”
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Well, it’s nice to see that you’re back, even if it’s just temporary because this chap more than made up for the long wait:) So emotional yet so well written. Can’t think of anything better! Hope that your work hours get re-adjusted and post more when you can!
Great update. I really enjoyed reading it. You had me on the edge of my seat there a few times. I was yelling at Dana to go after Alice, and then I was yelling at Alice to stop Dana from leaving. I was glad that Alice at least called her though, so Dana wasn’t left thinking that she didn’t have a shot. I can’t wait for more.
omg this story is fantastic. please please post more soon. would like to see who alice chooses. awesome story
i dont think u rearranging my anatomy is good my heart was in my throat there!! but u still got me hooked lady
i usually dont comment here! silent lurker – yup thats me. BUT!!! Theres a big BUT. i just want to tell u that u are mean. u write stuff like that and then u disappear for months… Please prove me wrong :$ that was brilliant! i need my danish!
That was way too long to wait for an update, but it was a damn fine update. More please & quickly!
I just love this story and I really have missed it. I can understand that Alice has to has some thinking to do….but maybe she can just do it by driving around for a couple of hours and then somehow ending up at Dana’s house. ;)
Love the story so you cant leave it so long next time!!!!!