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All Shook Up, Ch. 2
Shane peered over the edge of the second-story floor to see a terrified Carmen dangling in the air, nothing supporting her from a horrible plunge except for Shane’s grip.
Carmen was slowly swinging back and forth. Shane tried straightening her own arm, attempting to stop the movement and keep Carmen’s weight from jerking her arm around.
“I’ve got you, honey,” Shane said, her voice strong and steady despite the fear she felt and the slightly woozy feeling in her head.
Carmen looked up at her and their eyes locked. Blood trickled down from Shane’s nose and a drop fell through the air, landing onto Carmen’s shoulder, staining her white shirt.
“Sorry,” Shane apologized, immediately feeling like an idiot after doing so.
“You’re hurt,” Carmen said, sounding dumbstruck.
“I’m okay,” Shane promised, not sure if that was even true. Regardless of her other injuries, her arm was killing her and sweat had begun to slide down her back. Her hands were also beginning to become sweaty, making it difficult to keep her hold on the dangling Carmen. Shane spied a wooden pool nearby and shifted her weight somewhat, managed to inch across the ground on her stomach until she reached it.
Feeling the movement, Carmen called up worriedly, “Shane, what are you doing?”
“Trying to get to this pole for support,” Shane grunted, managing to wrap her free arm around it. She wished she could switch arms, but she knew that if she did, she could likely lose her grasp and send Carmen tumbling down to the ground beneath them.
“What’s below me, Shane?” Carmen asked.
“Why?” Shane asked, trying to ignore the fact that Carmen was worried about what she might land on should she fall.
“Just tell me,” Carmen demanded, trying to look down but only pulling on Shane more, causing more beads of sweat to pop out on Shane’s forehead.
Shane glanced down below them. “A lot of debris and rubble. Boards and stuff.”
Carmen paled visibly. “Sharp?”
Shane nodded in reply, trying to keep the grim expression off her face.
“So, basically, if I fall, I die? If the impact doesn’t kill me, then one of those boards could stab through me,” Carmen stated.
Sweat was dripping into Shane’s eyes, stinging them, and mixing with the salty tears that had begun to form. “Or get very seriously injured. But that’s not going to happen. I’ve got you.”
“Shane, I’m going to fall,” Carmen said simply, fear in her dark eyes.
Shane grunted softly as she felt a pop in her shoulder, sure it had just went out of place, or possibly dislocated. Her arm hung nearly useless, yet she fought the pain and her sweaty grip remained tight, somehow keeping Carmen from plunging toward the floor.
“Your shoulder, Shane. I know it’s hurt.” Carmen took a deep breath and a tear escaped from one eye, making its way down her cheek and sliding off her chin, falling silently to the ground below. “You have to drop me, Shane. Just let me go. Save yourself.”
Tears nipping at her eyelids and her nose running from the effort of keeping the tears in, Shane resolutely replied, “No.” Speaking again quickly over Carmen’s protests, she said, her voice cracking, “I’m never letting you go, Carmen. If you fall, I fall.”
Kit was singing along softly with the music drifting through her headphones and signing her name to a form when her office began to rattle around her. Dropping her pen to the desk, she ripped off her headphones as the furniture and floor began to noisily wobble.
“Earthquake!” Kit shouted to herself as items from her desk began to fall over, some hitting the floor with a clatter and some landing in her lap. With a small gasp, she got down on the floor and crawled beneath the large mahogany desk. Crouched in the small space, Kit closed her eyes tightly, clasped her hands, and began to pray.
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(33 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
One of my biggest fears are earthquake’s, so this story is freaking me out!! Great update!!!!
I love this! Completely different and gripping. Great update!
mahahahah. *evil laughter* right there with ya. but ya shoulda have IC there getting the ride of her life gf. hate earthquakes. lived thru enough of them. thanks.
As I sit in Southern California, reading this chapter…my stomach is in knots, and I have to keep reminding myself to breath!!!
*gasp* woohoo! drama!! yay!
damn what was that 8.0?? or bigger??
yep nothing like waking up to a earthquake but gotta love cali anyways!!!
I have to agree with everyone else living in Southern California, its very scary but interesting.
Dayum the girls got rawked!! Oh man have you ever had to move a fridge – those things weigh a ton. T’s a gonner for sure. Oh the cliffhanges – gotta love ’em with action packed storied like this one. Great writing – can’t wait for the next chapter.
Earthquakes are not fun, but living here in So.Cal you get use to them..EXCITING CHAPTER THANKS
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Whoa! that was really intense OMG! Please continue post soon Thanks!
WOW. Not too big tho California hasn’t gone for the island option OR is there more in the pipeline LOL Poor Tina and Ang slept thru it! Nice chapter.
Damn this is bad and so sad, drama coming on the way and earthquakes is scrazy and don’t like earthquake. Hope Tina is ok, post soon please, thanks!
Hey FF,
Great to see you back and in such fantastic form.
This story is completely absorbing and I am hooked.
Please continue real soon as I await your next post.
A Loyal Fan
PS – More “Broken” will be fine with me.
wonderful update. i have never seen an earthquake around me but i was scared and imagined what to do for my family or lover in that same emergency reading your story. i believe that all of characters gonna be alright. thanks for another great chapter.