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All Shook Up, Ch. 4
“Babe, what’s happening?” a soft groggy voice asked.
Bette’s face lit up. “Tee! You’re awake!”
“My legs really hurt, Bette. What happened to me? Where’s the baby?” Tina asked, struggling to hold her head up.
“Shhh. Don’t worry about that, sweetie. We’ll talk about it later. Right now Jenny and I need to get you out of here,” Bette told her, tears of relief escaping her eyes. She once again grabbed Tina’s arms. “Now I’m gonna pull. If you can, try and push towards me.”
As Bette pulled, everything suddenly began to move again, the remains of the house rattling around them. Bette gave another tug, falling back as Tina came free, both of them tumbling back, Tina lying across Bette’s lap.
There was a threatening rumble overhead as the aftershock caused what was left of the wall to collapse, sending the roof with it. The last thing Bette and Tina’s horrified eyes saw before the debris fell was the terrified look in Jenny’s eyes as she scrambled to get out from under the refrigerator.
The wreckage rained down, landing with a crash as it completely buried the appliance with Jenny still under it. Boards and plaster bounced off Bette’s back as she hurried to shield Tina with her body.
Then it was over, and there was silence. Bette sat in disbelief, a sobbing Tina in her lap, as she stared at the spot where she had just seen Jenny. “Oh my God,” she murmured, her hand flying to her face.
Then everything was quiet, except for Tina’s weeping and the sound of sirens approaching from the distance.
Dana and Alice fell to the grass in a heap as the aftershock hit, knocking them both off their feet. They lay there until the shaking stopped, Dana’s arm thrown protectively over Alice.
“I can’t take much more of this bullshit!” Alice shouted at the ground, pounding it with her fist.
“Al, honey, I don’t think that will help,” Dana told her, standing up unsteadily and reaching to help Alice.
Alice flung her arm back over Dana’s shoulders and they began their slow, awkward trek once more. “Well, I’m pretty ***** pissed at Mother Nature right now, and I want her to know it. That ***** ruined my day!” Alice replied, waving her good hand around on Dana’s shoulder, smacking the brunette in the jaw.
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(29 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
gertrude and herbert sound german :-)
nice update!
This just keeps getting better, can’t wait to see if Dana survives. Great update!
it’s a blood bath. first lara, now it doesn’t look good for jenny…or helena…LOL! could you wipe out Betty while you’re at it?
oooooooooooo i wonder what’s going happen next, can’t wait!! totally agree with capesquad…a little betty justice would do us all good!!
love ya CAPESQUAD
this story needs MEDICFROMHELL stat!!! god, are you trying to do what IC is doing slowly, getting rid of people. hahaha. this is good. keep it coming.
Shit everything is crazy and bad, this is sad!
Is Bette so bad that they want to get rid of her, Lets get Jenny and Helene back . Shane and Carman is so lucky. and Alice and Dana is on the way to the hospital. This is a very interesting story. LET SEE MORE. THANKS