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All Shook Up, Ch. 4
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It was as Kit reached toward where the entrance once was that she found an arm with a pulse that was sticking out from under a board. Clearing away the area, she found an unconscious Helena. “Wake up, girl,” Kit begged, patting at the women’s cheeks. There was no response.
Kit pulled Helena free and dragged her away from the dangerous debris and checked her pulse again. It was there, but weak. Attempts to wake the woman still failed. Carefully, Kit raised Helena’s eyelids with her fingers. Her pupils were dilated, with only a tiny ridge of blue present around each pupil. Kit wasn’t sure what that meant, but it couldn’t be good.
She could hear voices nearby, and then a loud siren and the squawk of a radio. “Help! Help!” Kit screamed, hoping someone could hear her.
“Over here!” she heard a voice call, as she saw several paramedics running toward her from the distance. Kit pulled Helena’s head into her lap and waited, just grateful to have found someone else who was alive.
Shane and Carmen plunged toward the earth. As they neared the ground, Carmen closed her eyes tightly, waiting for the pain and blackness she knew was coming.
It didn’t come. The pair, still holding hands tightly, landed safely into a nylon net.
Carmen opened her eyes as she felt the netting behind her. Two firemen, their faces scratched, tired, and dirty, stood on either side holding the net up. As they helped Shane and Carmen out of the net, Carmen grabbed the nearest one and threw her arms around him. “Thank you, thank you, thank you,” she gushed. “You saved our lives.”
The firefighter blushed. “You two got lucky. We assumed this place was empty until we noticed the Jeep outside. We ducked in and saw you two hanging there, so we rushed in with out net.”
“Thank you so much, man,” Shane told the other fireman. “You don’t know what this means to us.”
“Just doing our job, ma’am. Now if you can hold on a second, the paramedics will be in here to load you up and get you both to a hospital.”
Shane sighed with relief, leaning heavily against Carmen. “I thought we were dead. My whole life flashed before my eyes.”
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gertrude and herbert sound german :-)
nice update!
This just keeps getting better, can’t wait to see if Dana survives. Great update!
it’s a blood bath. first lara, now it doesn’t look good for jenny…or helena…LOL! could you wipe out Betty while you’re at it?
oooooooooooo i wonder what’s going happen next, can’t wait!! totally agree with capesquad…a little betty justice would do us all good!!
love ya CAPESQUAD
this story needs MEDICFROMHELL stat!!! god, are you trying to do what IC is doing slowly, getting rid of people. hahaha. this is good. keep it coming.
Shit everything is crazy and bad, this is sad!
Is Bette so bad that they want to get rid of her, Lets get Jenny and Helene back . Shane and Carman is so lucky. and Alice and Dana is on the way to the hospital. This is a very interesting story. LET SEE MORE. THANKS