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    All The Fallen – Chapter 8

     

    “NO!”  She begged,
    shaking her head
    .

     

    “I’m going.  You can’t stop
    me! What is wrong?  Someone needs to put
    that bitch in her place” 
    Dana
    stomped her foot and Lara looked pained, her
    whole body in some sort of turmoil over this.

     

    “Dana? please?
    Wait until you’ve calmed down.”  Lara
    begged, really wanting to say ‘wait until I’ve gotten the balls to tell you
    that I was doing my best Susan impression’.  She didn’t say that.  Instead she added.  “At least let me go with you?  I have to go get my purse in the other room,
    wait for me?”  Dana nodded.

     

    Lara moved through the crowd
    quickly, heading to the office.  The
    instant she was out of eyesight, Dana moved to
    the door.

     

    “Sorry Lara,
    but I have to do this alone.”  Dana
    said to herself, throwing her last twenty at the cashier and walking out.

     

    ~*~*~*~*~

     

    Alice
    was still feeling overwhelmed from her first encounter with Susan.  She leaned against the Domme for support, and
    Susan  Alice
    sighed contentedly.  She’d had no idea
    how intense something like that could be, know she knew.

     

    They were crossing the main room to the hallway leading to the offices
    when
    Dana blew down the
    stairs, across the room, and swung a vicious forehand blow at Susan
    that barely missed.

     

    “YOU CUNT!!!!!!!!!” She screamed her voice deeper than usual.

     

    Alice
    pulled in on herself, and huddled at Susan‘s
    side.  Hiding yet not, she had never seen
    such rage in Dana before.  The subs in the Consortium either headed
    straight to the protective arms of their Dom/mes or into each other’s arms for
    safety.  Dozens of wide eyes watched the
    scene unfolding.

     

    Susan raised herself up and
    glared at Dana who was throwing havoc into her
    usually quiet club.  “That was not a
    smart thing to do here, Miz Fairbanks.”  Alice
    shook her head at Dana, knowing that Susan
    was going to ream her a new one the instant she got the chance.

     

    In that moment between the first missed blow and the second one she
    intended to throw,
    Dana 
    Alice,
    with Susan. 
    Her lips moved soundlessly as she tried to form the question “What
    the fuck?”

     

    She took another step toward Susan,
    who moved Alice
    behind her to keep her out of harm’s way. 
    It was in instinctive move, but one that didn’t fall on blind eyes to
    either Dana or Alice.  Dana

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