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All Time Love
Catching up with the quickly retreating doctor, James placed his hand on her arm to attract her attention.
"Bette…Bette… wait," the secretary spoke as softly as he could whilst running, "It’s alright… it’s nothing bad…"
Many a times Bette had tried to hide the anguish that could be hers even if it was only on rare occasions; those times where a particular tough case had drained her of all her energy or a tragic outcome had robbed her of her belief in the good her skills were capable to administer.
But the level of despair which was now painted on the usual calm, collected and self-assured features took James by surprise; so he had run after her just to help alleviate some of the distress which was plain for all to see.
She was pale almost grey from lack of sleep and internal torment. James had never seen her like that, at least, not since Tina had disappeared from the surgeon’s life.
Bette did not say anything, instead she gave a half-hearted smile which spoke of her gratefulness at James’ attempt to assuage. Still without a word she moved on, leaving James behind, to hurry towards her destination.
The surgeon hesitated for a second before pushing open the frosted glass doors of the recovery room. She had ignored until now the inquisitive stares of the staff in the intensive care unit. She had been under scrutiny the second she had arrived in ICU. Furtive looks exchanged, slight nudge of an elbow and discreet murmurs followed her as she crossed the room on her way to where Tina was being held.
As she made her entrance, the attending nurse turned from what she was doing to approach the doctor and hand her a chart. Bette’s enquiring eyes did all the talking for her and the nurse spoke immediately.
"She has started to wake up. We thought… you might have wanted to be here…" the nurse informed gently, avoiding eye contact.
Bette did not know whether to be pleased or not by the fact that the nurse did not look at her. She was finding it hard to remain unaffected by the vision in the single bed in the middle of the room.
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My eyes adore the words you write.
So love this story
Wow, anxious for the next chapter.
What went wrong with these two?
Oh, you are TOO MUCH with these cliffies. The hell with sipping tea… I’m going to have to bust out the Jamesons at this rate.
What?! 😱what is wrong with my phone?! Seems like the chapter is being cut short or not fully downloaded?! How come it ends in the middle of this tensing moment?! … Kins, i wonder … do you have any idea about this?! 😳 .. 😉anyway, thanks for the update K! But … But… Why do you keep us on the edge and causing this internal torment?!😓 hope to see more update soon 😁 longer if possible 😉hehe… PPVS! And thanks again dear Kins!! 😊
Oh K, I think I may know what had happened to Tina but will keep my mouth zipped for now 😳 I’m so excited. Thank you for the beautiful update.
Sunshine on my shoulders makes me happy and so do your words.Kins, please post soon or I will be drowning in the amber liquid and it’s not the tea that you speak of in the author’s notes. Slntrdr, pour me a shot will you.
What Merlion said! Ditto!
Wth…Amnesia?!…..I really, really wanna ask you what happened?..did she cheated, [Tina] ..why did leave?…are they married?.. …Soo many…but I know it will spoilt the plot of the story…… with a heavy heart I will say… …”I will just wait for your next update”…
i agree with the others… so many questions… but we will wait for the answers.. great start… pps
Love this story. Please post again soon. I’m anxious to find out what has been going on with Tina for the last 2 years.
What to say that hasn’t been said already? Amazing as always, I couldn’t take my eyes off the story. I even hoped that buy clicking the next page button, I would actually get another page to read :P can’t wait for what’s to come !
Im so excited to see that there is some really great stories on this ff now. You are one of my favorites. Im so excited to read the next chapter. I read just before i got to bed every night and i look for my favorites. Good night. PPS.
Oh no
I can’t wait for your next update. Your stories are complex and interesting.
Wow! That was a fantastic update. Thank you
Yes, I’m done with tea and onto beer and pacing. Damn you write a good story but these cliffhangers… really? Argh! Thanks for the update.
What happend with our girls ?Great story,great update.PPS
As with everybody else I definitely need a stronger drink than the twinings everyday I have beside me (Uncannily!) but I am a teetotaler so I’ll just have to wait for you to fix this kins40. ;P
OMG!!!! I’m loving all this angst and drama! More please you tease who keeps leaving us hanging to dry with all these cliffhangers, WAAAHHH!