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All you need is love – chapter 49
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The whole idea that Helena could be scary tickled Dan so much that he was still laughing when Helena picked him up and dumped him in the water again to the delight of everyone else – he stood up still laughing
“You are too silly to be a bully “ he said but wisely stood in the middle of the pool so she couldn’t reach him again.
“Good to see them all playing so nicely “ Tina said to Bette smiling
“They are- hey I thought you were determined to get the manuscript finished today ?”
“I am – Hannah came in – she said that Maddy pushed her “
“She did and I told her off “
“She’s getting a temper “
“She’s frustrated because of the plaster “
“It should be coming off this week “
“Good – she was telling me something the other day and nearly whacked me in the face “
Tina looked at her girlfriend – they had been lovers for four wonderful months – the time had flown by and now the kids were back at school in a couple of weeks and then it would be fall and then Thanksgiving and Christmas. She was looking forward to so much about the coming months – big winter meals, long family walks in the snow – it was going to be terrific sharing everything with Bette. They were all becoming a big family which thrilled Tina.
“If I get some peace I might get it done in about an hour “
“How many more words do you want ?”
“Well I’m over my words limit by a couple of thousand so another thousand shouldn’t be that bad. I would like to be able to met Peggy tonight without feeling that I haven’t finished my contract with my current publishers “
“You have more than fulfilled your contract – have they offered you a new deal yet ?”
“Yeah and its not that good “
“They should be really making an effort – seems they take you for granted my sweet “
“My mind is made up – I want to get a deal with Helena “
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Allye, thanks for this update, I was missing it. Really do love this story. Tina and Bette get along so well in this one and you let all the love shine through. Great job. AllyE you are wond fantastic writer. You should have made your stories into a book, especially this one. I must tell you, we had already gone up to the middle 20’s chapters when I suddenly realized the title of the story was the title of a Beatle’s song. Sometimes slow on the uptake. Thanks for posting. Love all your stories.
Hello Ally, Great to have you back posting this tale of love and understanding. LOved that Ollie was finally getting his shot together. I guess everyone getting on to him finally sank through. Again, you crafted a beautiful scene as Tina emmerged from a cocoon as a butterfly. And a damn hot one at that. Being in love suits her. I just love the complexity of this tale; apparently hidden by the luxurious flow of words. Ally, you are the mistress of magical moments; conjured up by the simplest of scenes. The romance of this tale oozes out. Thank you so much for coming back to it. Your Loyal Fan.
Yay, new chap! The idea of B&T looking drop dead gorgeous yet still wobbling around on their heels strikes me as hilarious. And at last, Ollie’s learned some manners. I hope Bette’s plans for Christmas don’t bring the old Ollie back. But hopefully he’s learned to ask “How high?” when Bette and Paul say jump. Thanks for the chapter, ally! cheers
Welcome back Ally, I have missed this story real bad…Its is one of your finest and I agree with Dainty that you should turn your stories into a book, as I would be one of no doubt many who would buy a copy !!!.Thanks for giving us another chapter of this and I look forward to the next one …
Dainty, this isn’t the first time Ally has used a Beatles song for a title. :) “The Long and Winding Road.” ;) Anyway I’m sure Tina will charm Peggy endlessly, and now I have to see “Some Like it Hot.” LOL
This story is great. Its so… fun. They both have already had too much shit thrown at them in their lives for this not to be a happy story. Otherwise, it would just be like kicking them when they are down. Thats what I like out it. Its a fun, happy story about discovering something beautiful in another person.
after the drama of TLWing that was a lovely respite and this Tina likes an Alpha Bette!!! that’s so cool. Even Ollie was nice. Very realistic portrayal of the moms’ lives. Thx.
Thank You Ally, I’m with akalittlered I just love AYNIL I like your other stories but this one just strikes a cord in me. I love the romance between these two women they love each other unconditionally and thier families blend so well. I’m glad Ollie has finally come to his senses Bette probably doesn’t fully trust him but at least it’s a start.
Great chapter Ally! I have a thing about shoes too. Glad Ollie isn’t being an ass anymore…..well, so far! PPS!!
I love this story, but I can’t help the feeling that the last sentence of this chapter sounded a little ominous! You are a drama queen, so I can’t help the feeling that the other shoe is gonna drop on this relationship soon. That just means it sensational writing! You’re the best!
Thanks for writing this. Love this story.
I absolutely love this story! Thank you for posting.
dungaree dyke??? thats just sweet!!! i would never wear those shoes, i would kill myself. thanks.
I really love this story and you write it so well
I absolutely love love love this story. Thanks for another great post.
You are such a sweetheart to listen to your fans and post this update! Big Hug for you! PS.
Ally: Wow! Major “A” Plus! This chapter really rocked!! All the emotions were in the palm of your hands and even further! Even when trecelovinit call you “a drama queen”, that did not justice to you… This is just outstanding and full of entangling feelings that, they just get to your guts and you just lay absolutely bare, with no words to speak! But, you are talking about the true nature of being in love and no words can describe that special moment, when you are swept off your feet and that special someone makes you feel like you are special and out of this world! Tks for giving us back that wonderful feeling about how thrilled we are when we feel so deep in love!
A great chapter indeed Ally!
awesome, awesome writer! thank you for sharing with us your stories..
I love all your stories, but this one to me is the BEST!!!! Thank you so much Ally.
With the ample amounts of grease that Bette and Paul have applied, it seems Oily has finally pulled his head out of his ass. Here’s hoping it won’t slip back in. Hope nobody gets injured tottering around on those heels. I will refrain from a diatribe on their ability to harm and subjugate women. But I’m sure Tina will be getting the kind of contract she’s looking for.
That was awesome and love it!