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“Fuck, Dana.. just go away,” Alice said from her spot on the sofa. She was grumpy, and annoyed, and just didn’t want to deal with anything.
“Whatt? Comee onn you know you need my advice right now!” came the reply from the kitchen. Alice looked up to see Dana now sitting down on the chair. “Whoa, what happened to the chart? Jeez, now that I think of it.. isn’t it kind of tacky to have a big chart of all of you and your friends relationships in your living room?”
“Fuck you, the chart is a masterpiece,” Alice mumbled. She flipped on the couch, now facing Dana, who was smirking. It’d been a long time since Dana had visited her. Wait, no it wasn’t. The misery she’d experienced when Tasha was being shipped out was accompanied by a few talks with Dana.
“Yeah, sure, anyway, I come bearing wisdom. First of all, don’t listen to Shane. Shane should be revoked of her status as Yoda. No Yoda walks out on that many good women. Second..the trial had EVERYTHING to do with you. She told the fucking army she loves you!” Dana said, a bit angrily.
“Yeah, I never actually bought that, but it is my human right to be happy right?” Alice replied, quoting what Shane had said at the party. She had been thinking about this long and hard, coming up with no easy answers. A little help from Dana wouldn’t hurt.
“True… so you’re not happy?” Dana asked, getting a little confused. “Seems like you wasted a lot of fuckin’ time crying when Tasha was gone, then.”
“Maybe I fell out of love. Hey, you’re one to talk. The name Lara ring any bells?” Alice said, narrowing her eyes.
“Alice.. we’ve talked about that before, and I’m just trying to help.”
“Whatever Dane. Tasha and I are fighting over trivial crap nowadays. It doesn’t feel right anymore. It’s more about our relationship being bad than Clea,” Alice sighed. “Hey Alice, I just joined another dangerous job where I’m in danger of being killed, you don’t have any problems with that, do you? P.S. it’s the LAPD. I know you hate them and all, but, DOMESTIC PARTNER BENEFITS!”
“Well why didn’t you say something if you didn’t like it?” Dana asked, holding in her giggles.
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For a few minutes, it was like everything was right again and Dana was back with us. I liked this a lot, and I really enjoyed how you had Dana talking Alice through some of her behaviors and choices in season 5. Hope to see you writing more.
that was great and I hope there is more to the story if there is I can’t wait to see what will happen next but I think that tasha and alice are meant to be they just need to learn to talk to each other pps I love it
Well, I’m certainly in for the ride. This was a really good start and I hope to see you posting more of the tale. Thanks and keep writing!
Welcome!! Always thrilled to see new Danish writers. This is a great first effort. I love how the story gave Alice a chance to explain her actions and feelings in S5. You handle the banter between the two very well. Thank you so much. I hope we see more stories from you.
Welcome, tunafish!! Great name that reminds us how in love they were at Pride in S2. I can’t help but lol when I saw your name. This plot is excellent. I wish IC & Co, had brought her back for S5. DAANNNAAAAAA!! (sorry, I lost it.) I am also glad that you addressed the change in A’s character and also her appearance including the non-flattering hairstyle and clothing on S5. I hope this is not a one post story. imo, D could easily hang out all the time to help out A. Their conversation was well written. So please consider continuing with it. Thank you very much.