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And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 16
She smiled in anticipation as she answered.
"Hi Tina," said the familiar voice on the other end. "It’s me."
Tina felt a bit deflated.
"Hi, Eric," she responded, trying to remain light. "How are you?" It was meant more as a social greeting than an actual question and she hoped he wouldn’t begin to tell her of his woes, as he did the first week after she broke up with him.
"I’m okay," he replied. "Sharon called me yesterday afternoon and I just wanted to make sure she tracked you down."
"Thanks for calling Eric," Tina replied. "Yes, we did manage to find each other." He was a nice enough guy; checking to make sure she was okay evidenced that characteristic about him. But he was no Bette Porter.
"You’re doing well?" he asked. The hurt still came through in his voice.
"I am, thanks Eric," she replied. Now was not the time to sound too jubilant. She actively repressed the sound of elation that had characterized her tone the past few days. "I have a few things I need to pick up at your place. And I want to drop off the keys, as well."
"I’m in court toward the end of the week, so anytime you want to drop by is fine, I just won’t be there," Eric said. "Late nights doing prep and all, you know. I can get the keys anytime. Unless you want to drop by tonight. I’m home tonight," he finished hopefully.
"Thanks Eric, it’ll have to be later in the week." Tina thought it best that she put an end to any thoughts he had of reconciliation.
They said their goodbyes and Tina hung up only to lift the receiver and check her voice mail.
"Goddamnit!" There was a message. She punched in the code to retrieve it.
"Hi Tina," the familiar voice this time was the one she had hoped for when she actually heard the phone ring. "I’m just stepping into a meeting myself, so I’ll try to catch you this afternoon." There was a pause in Bette’s message. "I’m thinking of you."
Tina smiled and quickly realized she should call Sharon with her order for lunch.
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(25 votes, average: 4.60 out of 5)
Another great chapter. Glad I caught it before I leave work. Tina’s friend Sharon kind of reminds me of Kate Capshaws friend in “A Girl Thing”, she’s too funny. My best friend is just like that, has to know everything. Looking forward to your next chapter.
The part with sharon was pretty funny:) congrats on the award. I enjoy reading your story!
Congrats, great chappy, keep them flowing……..
Congrats on a well-deserved award! I always look forward to your posts.
now i hope eric isn’t going to be a problem… love your story…please continue
CONGRATS ON YOUR AWARD
aka Just Once
First a big congrats on your award – very deserved!!! Love the story so very much!
Second – so are you kidding me … correlation coefficients and p-values… so the next time I have a question about cross-correlation or auto-correlation values… can I give you a call? only kidding. By the way what do you do for work?
Again I so love your story and the missed phone calls and messages between these two- it is so fun to read. Thanks so very much for taking the time to write!
Because it’s you, I have no fear that Eric will turn into a craxed killer.
I am curious though, doesn’t Eric know that Bette is a lesbian???? This could get awkward…
Thanks for posting another chapter!
And I hope the ‘confiding in Sharon’ thing doesn’t come back to bite Tina in the a**!
Congrats on your award!
I so love your work. Congratulations…I just found out about your award! I must tell you…You’re one of my top 3…If I had to pick a position for the 3 of you in my mind, I couldn’t. Let’s just say I’m batting 1000%…And I don’t even care much for baseball. Your writing has overwhelmed me over and over.
This line alone should keep ink flowing in your new award pen. “That little piece of skin that attaches your tongue to the floor of your mouth,” Sharon said. “You said it was sore after all the action you got this weekend.” Now, that was priceless. Congrats.
And…Oh, I forgot…WTF are correlation coefficients and p-values? I have a B.A. in journalism, but I’ve never hear of these things in relation to writing (or whatever) in my life. Jeez. You really do rock!
Congrats on your well deserved award and thanks for another excellent chapter!
You are smokin’! You’ve got seriously witty dialogue and great plot going on. I love this fic!
Great chapter! I truly enjoy reading your story! Congrats on the award too! :)
Congrats! You definately deserved the award. Another excellent chapter. I wonder how Tina is going to react when she finds out Eric asked Bette on a date hmm I can’t wait! Please post soon
love the banter. the love story. sharon was great. im thrilled everytime i see youve posted. know something good is coming my way.
congrats on the award. you deserved it.
Eric just needs to go away. Thanks for a wonderful chapter and congrats on your award.
Hey Congratulations on your Award your really Deserved I’m Still catch up I Love it the Story It’s Beautiful as Always Thanks.
wow! i just maneged to read all of the previous chapters… very well written with lot of details, i wish this stuff would have been in the show! or at least more of it in “Looking back”
keep it up and pls update asap
Hope I’m not too late to comment on this wonderful chapter. :) I’m glad Tina and Bette finally connected after they kept missing each other. Too bad Eric was lurking around! Brilliant though, having him ask Bette out. ;) Great chapter, as always. I am patiently waiting for the next.
Good chapter. Sharon is funny and glad Tina have a friend like that. Ok something is wrong, wonder why Eric didn’t know Bette is gay or he know and he know that Tina break up with him for Bette and now he want to play game with Bette and Tina. Post soon, thanks!
COngrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! on your FanFicAwards..woo hooooo~ ooo,correlation coefficient and the p-values..don’t really like them,i’ve studied them for a while..hee. Hmm..didn’t Tina told Eric about Bette when they broke up?? Can’t wait for the next installment!
The card was so romantic ! …. lol ….. “many a true word is said in jest”, I believe is the saying. Your writing is quite lovely, extremely engaging, I thank you.
hey, I want to congratulate you on your award.good job!I read every chapter, just havn’t commented for awhile.
Felicitaciones on the award..and great chapter.
Great Scotts…I didn’t see that one coming. Very amusing!
Hey a big high five for you as congrates for your award. It’s so well deserved. Woopie I am so happy for you and the wonder story you put worth for all of us to enjoy.. Thanks
getting conflicty here… good to see an update. congrats for the award!
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Great chapter, Congrats on the award. Love this.
Just wanted to say congrats on your award, you deserve it.. And I have been reading your stories from day one, just not big on commenting, but now since I am trying to take a crack at my own story, I see where comments make your day.. Stroke of the ego, lol.. Keep it up and post soon..
Congrats swim. I also hope Eric won’t be a problem. Tina never told Eric about her and Bette?I can’t remember.
Congrats, great chapter but I think that something is up with Eric. His ego may not want to take this sitting down. Please continue.