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And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 21
"Could you pass me the shampoo," Bette requested.
Instead of giving up the bottle, Tina squeezed a generous amount into the palm of her hand and, turning to face Bette, ran her hands over the surface of her hair, distributing the soap as the water continued to run in rivulets down her own back. Tina’s elbows leaned on Bette’s shoulders as her fingertips worked the soap deeper, towards the scalp. Bette adored the attention, not only of Tina’s hands, but the occasional brush of her *****, as they contacted her own. The water contributed to reducing the friction between their bodies, allowing them to move over each other effortlessly. The innocence of their interaction was quickly washing away.
"Do we have time?" Bette asked, as she smiled. Her voice was already thick with desire.
"I don’t have to be at work until 10," Tina replied. "Do you have time?"
"I’ll make the time," Bette replied. They met to kiss, the water rushing down over their faces as they both hungered for a taste of the other’s mouth. Bette then encouraged Tina to position herself so that she could lean her back against the side of the shower wall. Bette ran her right hand down Tina’s side, over her waist and past the curve of her hip, traversing slowly lower toward the bend in her knee. She trailed kisses down Tina’s chest as she moved. She tucked her hand in behind Tina’s knee and lifted it so that her foot left the floor of the shower.
"Rest your foot behind me," Bette requested.
Tina assisted Bette’s intent by lifting her leg and placing her sole on the edge of the bathtub. Bette began to move back up, pressing her body into Tina’s, invigorating both of them as she progressed ever higher. She looked into Tina’s eyes as she finally made contact with the slick sensitive skin of her, already pulsing with want.
Tina’s delicate flesh contrasted with the aggressiveness of Bette’s contact as her hand and fingers moved nimbly over her moist heat.
"All I want this morning is to make you come, right here, as I move my hand over you," Bette said quietly as she continued to look into Tina’s eyes. "Tell me what you’re feeling."
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Another beautiful chapter! As they say.. absence makes the heart grow fonder, so after 2 1/2 days apart god knows what they’re going to do at the party lol I’m looking foward to the next chaper as always :)
very nice- can’t wait for fri night…
I’m with techgal, the sleeping scene was the greatest. they slept so lovingly. thanks for the update.
That was glorious. I loved them in bed, shifting and drifting until they were connected again. That’s what makes new relationships so sweet, we sometimes forget about those beginnings when we couldn’t get enough of each other’s touch…even in sleep.
Tina’s pep talk to herself about taking Bette to her bosses dinner was nicely addressed. As was her need for reassurance that she was not spending too much time with Bette. They both needed to know that they are on the same page.
Friday night should be both interesting and fun.
“I am ready for this,” she said to herself. “I am.”
If anyone had overheard her assertion, they would not have been convinced.”
Perfect! I want to see Tina struggle with coming out. It is one of the most intense struggles of our lives, and I think we tend to gloss it over because we don’t want to re-live the agony it can cause. Not everyone is going to greet Tina and her date with open arms on Friday night. Even if they are smiling on the outside, you can bet that a few margaritas will have them twittering and pointing and making tuna fish jokes. Opps, sorry, your story. Do what you want!
Can’t wait for the next chapter. M.
It was beautiful how you described them sleeping..that is love. : ) Just an all around wonderful chapter
This a fabulous story and you have captured each character perfectly. I think chapter twenty (20) has been my favorite, really nice job. Can’t wait for chapter twenty-two (22) and the Friday night dinner with Tina’s co-workers. Will it be a good thing or???
Thanks for writing “early days” of Tina and Bette.
What a great chapter, you can really tell how strong this relationship is developing, and two and a half days, that is like 134 dog years! Maybe Tina can stop over after work…please.
LOL, I’m an Sagittarian Aussie what more can I say? I tend to call a spade a spade (for better or worse)! So to quote Tina “Oh God, don’t stop,”
yeah, things feel long in a blossoming relationship. intense and rather fast paced but I guess it’s kinda common in such relationships. good job.
K
Another excellent chapter, and hot too. Can’t wait for the work event, hope it goes well.
I am just off to shower before I go to work ….. umm …. What shall I ponder upon ?!?!? ……………..
Beautiful, tender, romantic chapter, you have a way of describing not just physical intimacy, but physical interaction so astutely, one feels like a voyeur. It is a pleasure Swim, thank you.
I think I might actually like the R chapters better than the NC-17’s. LOL. This was sweet and wonderful and very well paced. More please, whenever you have the time. :)
OMG!! i just love this story u have a great gift for writing and it makes me look foward to reading ur stories. thanx for posting u made my night mayb tonite ill actually be able to sleep LOL. POST SOON!!!!
dont know what to comment on first. this had me giggling tho. you wrote “her movements were patterned and meticulous.” for some reason that struck me as funny. i could totoaly see bette doing that. sorry. what a way to go to bed. with a smile on my face. thanks for being a detail whore. it feeds my addiction. post soon please.
I forgot to say kiitos…mista pain maailmaa olet kotoisin?
what a nice pleasant to start a day with.. hee.. :) great update!!
The sleeping scene was the greatest. The excite of the newness of their love is very authentic and palpable. Finding that new ‘other’ in the night, so different from sleeping alone.
This story is great!
This was a very nice chapter and made me blush a bit. Hopefully Tina won’t regret taking Bette to the barbeque on Friday.
Wow! You must really care about your readers…why else would you find a nice sentence like that in Finnish. It’s not like it is a very common language =)
Another great chapter can’t wait to see how the party turns out!!!
So glad I decided to check in one more time before going to bed, not that sleep is going to come easy after reading this. Definitly know my morning shower is not gonna go that way, and I would have been late to work, one does have priorities. Bette will charm them on Friday. Can’t wait for the update.
You’re right, it is too far away.
Post soon…..
When I read your story I feel happy. What a gift it is to create and convey such a strong emotion.
Hey JKS great chapter. love how they find each other while sleeping. cant wait for the party. maybe B&T will slip away for a quickie during the party. LOL post soon
WHOA! Still Wonderful Story Whoa! very Sexy LOL! I hope the party is smooth With Bette Thanks Please continue post soon.
Good job slowing things down a bit!!! But, please don’t go too slow!!! Post soon.
That was GRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEAATTT!
Wow.
I never knew that simple communication could be so hot. What are your feelings towards writing R rated chapters?lol
p.s- I may not comment for a while…school starts soon…so no more fan fiction for me. Thanks for brightening up my summer days with your wonderful chapters.
-special out-
“We’ll see what Friday night brings.” Bring it on!
SIMPLY DELICIOUS!! Yet another perfect blend of love, lust and emotion….it’s hard to believe that you struggle with the “R” chapters…everthing flows so naturally!
“It camouflages the fact that their lives have no meaning.” Remarkable observation…Remarkably phrased. But then, I’m not surprised…you’re remarkable! Justkeepwriting, Swim, and I’llkeepreading. I have a weakness for quality craftsmanship.
Wow that was hot and awesome, love it. Ok let see about Friday!