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And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 6
She analyzes everything, Bette laughed, but when you touched me as you left the table, I thought her eyes were going to pop out of her head.
Never mind how Alice felt about that touch, Tina said, what did you think of it?
Made me wonder if they should really be coming over later, Bette smiled as she opened the car door.
Nothing beats a little anticipation, Tina said as a wicked grin teased the corners of her mouth.
Now just what do you have in mind, Bette asked, her curiosity peaked.
They got into the car and Bette turned the ignition. They made their way out of the parking lot as Tina gathered her thoughts before she finally spoke her mind.
Well, you have to admit, a lot has changed for me over the last three weeks, Tina began.
Thats a bit of an understatement, Bette agreed. It had all seemed so natural to her. There were times when she almost forgot that Tina had been dating a man a mere three weeks earlier.
And I process things bytalking about them, Tina continued. And I dont know if Im in a place where I can really talk about this with anyone but you. And of course there are some things I want to hear only from you.
Okay, Bette was still manoeuvring the city traffic on her way to the freeway exit. Once on the 405, her attention could be somewhat less focused on the intricacies of driving.
Before we get on the freeway, do you mind if I drive? Tina asked. There are a couple of places I want to take you to, so rather than give you directions, I would rather just drive you there.
Bette was surprised that she was willing to relinquish control of her vehicle. But she wanted to see where Tina would take her. And not only on this particular afternoon either. She pulled over at the first available opportunity so that Tina could take over.
I used to drive out here to escape right after I graduated and hadnt secured a job yet, Tina stated as she pulled the car into gear. I was starting to become concerned that Id have to move back home if I didnt find something soon, so I took strides to appreciate what time I had left here.
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(30 votes, average: 4.67 out of 5)
This was cute……..thx more really,really soon
Very nice, as always. I can see Alice being early…but Shane should have known better. Still…delightful. And I quite enjoy the term “smitten”, btw. That tends to be my ‘early in the relationship and I really want more’ term.
This made me happy……………
I’m smiling so big right now. A great chapter. can’t wait for the gang to leave them alone……….more soon please.
Great! When is Alice going to notice the scratch marks on Tina’s back?
I loved the car conversation. More please!
Great chapter Fins, I too loved the conversations in the car. Anticipation is the best…like how anticipate your next chapter…
nice- really enjoyed. thanks for the update!
K
That was great. Very hot conversation in the car. You gotta love a southern accent. Can’t wait for more.
really loving this story, pls continue
Love your storytelling. I get so engrossed, great chapter.
Good chapter. The conversation is so freaking hot and let see the acting.
You are the new queen of pillow talk!
More!
I don’t leave comments too often, but you HAVE to continue this story….I become addicted….I’ll need another fix soon. You are an amazing writer, please keep on going :)
you make me smile…*sweet* love this update! Thk God that was Shane in the kitchen..LOL,if it would be Alice…God knows what will happen!LOL. Great update!!! do post soon..can’t wait!!!!!
God your story is sooo sexy, it’s the weight of your writing that does it. I am captivated, anyone who writes with such mature and sweet lust filled skill, must mirror their creation. Wonderful – Thank you
Oh the anticipation… I can barely contain myself. Nicely written.
I just read up on all of the chapters of this story and I LOVE it!!!! Please post soon!
Hey I love this chapter. THanks I’m just getting caught up this morning and wow what a treat. Thanks so much