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And it Started with a Phone Call Chapter 7
Does anyone want to bar-b-que some salmon? I have some in the freezer that wont take long. Bette suggested.
Id love to have some salmon, Tina agreed. I can get a couple of salads together for us as well.
Sounds perfect, said Dana. Ill pop out and grab a couple things too. Might as well make it a feast.
I never noticed your accent before Tina, Alice remarked.
There are times when its a bit more conspicuous, Tina admitted. She and Bette shared a knowing smile at Alices remark. They both made their way to the lounge chairs by the pool to enjoy the end of the evening sun before getting dinner underway.
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Well, Im going to head inside and get some food going, said Bette as she rose from the lounge chair.
Tina began to stand as well when Bette stopped her.
Its okay, I can handle it, just relax, she suggested. Perhaps jump in the pool for a swim.
Youre sure I cant help? Tina offered.
Ill help, Dana interjected. Ill run out and pick up a couple of salads, then we dont have to worry about making anything but the salmon.
Just as well, Bette admitted. I dont really have a lot of ingredients in the house
Glad to hear some things never change, retorted Alice.
Dana retrieved her purse from the patio table and exited by the side gate. Bette made her way inside to get the fish from the freezer while Alice and Shane continued to sip at their beer. The sun slowly made its way to the horizon as afternoon transitioned to evening.
I think I am going to go for a swim, Tina liked the sound of that after having spent some time in the sun. Itll cool me off a bit.
She made her way to the stairs at the end of the pool and slowly descended into the shallow end. Alices eyes grew wide as she noticed the nail marks on Tinas upper back. She glanced over at Shane, who was leaning back with her eyes closed, enjoying the sun. Alice reached over and poked Shane in the arm. Shane jumped slightly and spilled just a bit of beer down her top.
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(24 votes, average: 4.67 out of 5)
I’m sending in my membership request to the justkeepswimming fanclub. Really enjoying your writing. Also like to add I don’t mind Alice causing trouble because I already know enough good things about Alice to even it out. Thanks!
i´m glad the thuth show up in time..great chapter post soon
hey now. i am not a silent reader. *mumbles* just because i don’t comment all the time and tell you to post again soon doesn’t make me silent. i know others will do the work for me, and seeing as i’m a lazy ass, i quite enjoy that knowledge. besides, if i found anything off about your stories, i would let you in on it, be assured. 99% of the time, your stories are more than fine.
so post again soon. *smirk*
Good chapter. Alice is crazy and she just uh I don’t know what to said about her. Post soon!
Hey JKS, great chapter! Love the pace just the way it is, and Alice is a perfect antagonist for the time being. :)
love the pace.. love the story..please post soon :)
I’m glad you like the comments… because honestly… sometimes it is hard to come up with something original to say. ;-) But then there is the old standard… nice update.
Warm and charming, as always. Thank you ( Bette’s gonna have to be careful though, with those nails ! Tina may have tears in her eyes rather unexpectedly !! )
I disagree with Bette…she doesn’t “have” to tell Alice anything about her personal life.
Nice to see an Alice theory causing it’s usual mischief, however. Also glad to have Bette keep things to minimum-assy and not drive Tina off.
Once again we can always count on Alice for drama.
Wonderful chapter. your moving at a good pace. And sometimes drama is not needed. good job.
I think a story without a designated antagonist is refreshing. Life itself and the process of becoming one will throw enough at them. I’m enjoying the pace you’re setting!
P.S.: more of you “lack of details” sex would be just fine with me.
K
Love it as always. I like your pace. Glad things didn’t get out of hand. Love it.
you actually had me scared for a minute
I’m all smiles. That was a magnificent chapter!
jks, No rush…I actually love the pace. Please continue! Thanks
phew..that was close! yup,love the pace as well..do post soon jks! :)
Hey Fins, I personally like the pace. I like the little things and conversations going on between everyone. Looking forward to the next installment…
I just caught up with all our chapters and thos is a great story. please contine with it.
Nice chapter. Just a bit of drama and a happy ending to it. Now let Bette make up to Tina for being a bit cold. ; )
Phew…close call! If only Alice could engage her brain a little faster and her mouth a little slower!!! Your pace is perfect with is funny, intelligent and well written story. Thank-you.