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Angel Fire – 21
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“I have to speak up better,” said Stacy without prompting. “I shouldn’t expect Jely to guess what I’m thinking and then get angry at her when she doesn’t do that.”
“Anything else?” Even though Shane said this to wrap up their talk, she said it in a way that if someone wanted to say something else that they knew that Shane was perfectly willing to listen.
“I need to stop being a horse’s ass,” said Angel ruefully.
“Jely, I love you and your ass is just great.”
“Well, time to finish,” said Shane, wanting to extricate herself from the sweet talk that was beginning. “Ok, listen up.”
And the girls broke their gaze with each other and looked at Shane.
“One last word,” cautioned Shane, “you’ll have to keep reminding yourself over and over to do these things. You’ll tend to forget and fall back in to old ways. Maybe you should write it down where you can refer to it every day. It’s easy to say these things now, but it’s much tougher to remember then and do them.”
Stacy and Angelica nodded seriously.
“Now, before I tell you to go home, I want to talk to each of you privately. Then go home,” Shane smiled at the girls.
The Planet
When Shane got to the Planet, Dana had already arrived. She joined Alice and Bette and Tina and they had one for the road.
“Shane said they had gone back to the condo,” Tina said as she negotiated the car through traffic.
“I hope so.”
“Do you have something on your mind?” Grinned Tina.
Before Bette could answer that question they pulled up at their house.
“Both cars are gone,” said Bette with pleasure. “Happy days are here again.”
They walked into the house and checked Angel’s room just to see sure.
“Alone at last,” said Bette. “I thought she’d never leave.”
“Baby, she was just here two nights.”
“When you’ve brought home the good stuff,” Bette said referring to the wine she had purchased two days ago, “you want…the good stuff.”
“Hmm,” said Tina. “Want to be noisy, knock over some lamps and scream each other’s name?”
“Let start with that wine,” leered Bette as she tried to open it and grab Tina at the same time.
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Love this story hopefully the girls stick to what they talked about…and Bette and Tina acting like they are in high school…too cute and sexy! Please post soon.
WOW!IM THE FIRST ONE MIRACLE.LOL GREAT STORY PANCHA,JELLI IS MORE/MORE LIKE BETTE EACH DAY….PLEASE POST SOON AND ITS TINAS TURN NEXT???????
Great story! Love your writing.
Seems like Shane got the short end of the stick. Everybody else got to go home and make love. Shane got to sit howe alone. I’m sure the satisfaction of providing the girls guidance, which she did very well, is some consolation.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm….love this B and T………and the little ones r quite too………….
umm ….is this the same white nightie in their honeymoon? lol
Excellent writing, pancha. B & T are so in love and they are familiar w/each other body and what pleases the other. Perfect!
lol I was thinking the same thing smiley was thinking. See, this is what I want for myself someday. Like right now I’m pretty much sleeping but I’d love to have a fulfilling love/sex life even if my partner and I aren’t as active as 20 years or so earlier. I honestly can’t think of anyone my parents’ age that still have sex frequently enough to qualify as having a sex life. And yay Angel and Stacy got through their first major discussion without having a meltdown. perhaps next time they won’t need a mediator.
YEAH, Dana’s alive! She is still with Alice and speaking out about being a cancer survivor !! I have tears in my eyes after reading just that little bit. I love Shane helping these gals communicate, but it seems kinda of weird considering she left Carmen at the altar? Tina and Bette Sex is always the best. Post again soon.
Hey… like mother(s) like daughter
The old folks still got it!!! …Wonderful contrast between the young and the old. Hopefully, Stacy and Angie will get there someday. Thank you!…BTW, Angie had very able tutors right there under her roof. They’ve got it all, your B&T. Thank you!
i couldn’t wait for angie to leave either, about time B&T had some time alone…Shane is awesome, let’s hope that angie and stacy will remember what they have to do
Damn thats hot and awesome, I agree with B&TForever, and let ses whats next, thanks!
I should have read this chapter before i ate those oreos. well two sweet treets in one day i’m spoiled.In your next post do we get to see angelica and stacy make up? please post again soon =).
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so fucking hot and sweet at the same time, I love it. You write very beautiful Pancha :o)) I truly hope you’ll come up with a new B&T story, with them crazy in love and very very happy. Thanks you for this amazing one!!!
the last part is VERY romantic. Great job!
B & T sex is always good; but this time, it’s not what moved me the most. Previously we watched Bette having to accept that her “baby” is growing up and moving on. Just the whole concept of Angie wanting, and Bette knowing she was going to eventually have sex meant that Angie would always be her baby, but wasn’t a baby any more. So it was kind of ironic, not to mention funny as hell that Bette couldn’t wait for Angie to get her ass back to the condo. It will be interesting to see what Angie and Stacy do with the advice they have been given.
SWEET !!!!! Love Shane’s part. Was great ! And the two of them… Well, that is very sweet. Excellent writing (as always !!)
I hope that the youngsters DO write down the target points that Shane has made because we can all loose our way sometimes or fall back into bad habits. Ahhhh the old girls still have it, please call before you come over or knock before entering (hee, hee). Loved this chapter and love this story more :o)
sweet and romantic. woohoo~
I thought the NC-17 rate was for the young couple! lol, it’s good to see that B&T still got it. PS: If I could read After loving you then I’m prepared for your next break-up story.
Nothing like Shane dispensing the wisdom and B&T sharing the good stuff. : )
Pancha, Wonderful to see that Sahne still has a the gift. It was fabulous to have Angel and Stacy realize their shortcomings and actively seek to overcome them and work on their realtionship by being open and communicative. Something that took Bette and Tina years and a lot of heartache to conquer. Mind you the finale show just how far they have come and can come again and again. It was written with such tenderness and romance. I salute your talent and desperately want more. Thank you. Your Loyal Fan.
Jell and Tace pass their first fight i hope they will better for the next time, they will grow up together and make their bond stronger. What can i expect for Angelica if her moms are so hotties! very good chapter!
Angelica and Stacy are so much like Bette and Tina. Angelica becomes more like Bette every day. I hope that she learns from Bette’s mistakes and is able to love Stacy as much as Bette loves Tina. I loved the B&T special time. I can never get enough of those two. Shane is so Yoda and always knows how to handle the situation.