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Another Beginning…. chapter 9
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But seeing Dana’s clothes and tennis equipment gone, was too much for her to bear.
She walked into the living room and curled up on the couch, and fell asleep sobbing.
She awoke to the sound of her cell. It as Shane checking on her. She explained that she needed to be alone, and had things to think over. But would come back to Bette’s later on in the day.
After she hung up, she walked to the kitchen and got her self a glass of water…..
The answering machine was blinking, she had missed that the night before.
She pressed the button…
Answering machine: “you have 1 new message”
It was Dana…: “Alice it’s me, I’m so sorry…..” there was a long pause.. “I miss you, I thought I could do it, but I can’t your in my mind and heart always….” another pause “I’ll understand if you don’t want to wait for me, or if you can’t forgive me for leaving you…. I er… Alice I love you, and I need you…. I will have my cell on if you want to call…. Either to tell me you feel the same or to tell me to piss off”
Answering machine: “end of message”
Alice listened to the message over and over for about an hour…
She picked up the phone and dialled the number she knew from heart…
Two rings and it was answered:
Dana: “Al?”
Alice: “hi Dana”
Dana: “I am so so sorry….please”
Alice: “I love you Dana…”
Dana: “ you do?”
Alice: “Always..”
Dana: “does that mean….?”
Alice: “yes I’ll wait for you… now go train your cute arse off, and hurry home”
Alice could hear Dana sobbing on the other end of the phone.
Alice: “Dane, it’s ok.”
Dana: “ I love you Alice…. I’ll call when I can ok”
Alice: “ok darling, I’ll be thinking of you always”
Dana: “ me too”
Alice hung up the phone, a huge smile plastered across her face….
Then she remembered what she had heard the night before…
Alice: (Shit what to do? )
She got showered and changed, and headed out the door…
Back at Bette’s………
Bette was still sitting by the pool smoking, when Alice appeared at the back gate.
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hey i love this story… so glad tina didn’t go… now lets hope helena doesn’t show up at bette opening… hmmmm… now that could be good… with tina on her arm… and watching helena steaming… PPS… later babe
Bette was right in not telling Tina to stay. It’s Tina’s choice and she has to see the light of day as she makes it…which she did!
Is it selfish of me to think she should have went? In some ways 6 months is not that long a time…Bette would have been able to visit in NYC. Tina had the opportunity to make alot of money (I know money is not everything) but these days financial security is very important to have. I know she would not stopped working because she loves this work…but she could have broadened her company with that money and got more help. They love each other and she wasn’t attracted to Helena anymore…it could have been done. I say keep this story going I really like it.
I tell you this is not the end and this is not as far as this story can go! There are so many facets to this story! Bette’s show; Tina’s expanding company; Alice and Dana’s long distance relationship; Shane needing to find the love of her life; Bette & Tina have just announced that they love each other…but you have to take the cigs away from Bette permanently – they just cause too much damage, and Bette is too damn beautiful to ruin herself like that! It’s milk that does a body good…not cigarettes! And no matter how smokin’ hot you are, it’s no fun for your lover to kiss you when you smell and taste like an ash tray! Yeuuucch! Another great chapter Tilly! Please don’t stop!
yeah I see what u mean…it is kinda a natural conclusion BUT if u want carry on…I’ll read on…so addicted to B & T am I!!! Lmao, at least its not addicted to G & T (Gin and Tonic) Mother’s ruin!!! U could have some drama with Helena arriving on the Peabody Jet and Peggy insisting on Tina…but NO MATTER WHAT, they are made for each other.
I hope you continue…
No this can’t be the end. The real story is just beginning. I need to kow what is going to happen now that Dana is back in Alice’s life and now that Bette and Tina are going to be together I’m sure there is a story to tell there. What about the big gallery exhibit w/ Bette’s work being seen for the 1st time, I’d like to know how that turns out. So no they story isn’t over! Please continue to write this great fan fic, Thx.
You know that you should not have to ask whether we think that you should continue. OF COURSE YOU SHOULD CONTINUE! Glad that Tina turned down Helena and hopefully she will have enough work to keep her busy and in the money. Dana and Alice those two are a hoot so I am glad that they are back together. Just like Alice said now all there is left is Shane and a woman for her.
Yehh Tina not going and happy for B&T and now let see some hot love of B&T. Shane is good and Alice is funny. OK post soon please, thanks!
excellent
Ofcourse you should continue with this story…theres always more!..lol..i may not always comment but always read enjoy this!…
Hey Lez! I’ve been a silent reader, but I’ve got to tell you I love this story. I think you should keep it going. I want to see how Helena reacts. I’ll try to comment more. Later!
Please keep this story going it is just GREAT!!!!! You write it so well. Thank you This Chapter was GREAT!!! PPS
There is so much more for you to write. I’m sure many of us can cum up with sum if you need any.Here is a few. Sex for a few chappys,bettes art show,and of course more sex!
definitly you should continue this story, now that B&T will be together there are a lot of things to write! and you have the talent to do it!