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Another Beginning…. chapter 9
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Alice: “ Bette”
Bette turned to see her friend standing next to her…
Alice could see Bette had been crying….
Alice: “ hey what’s going on?” she sat next to Bette and took the cigarette from her and took a deep pull off of it.
Bette struggled for words: “I er………. I” She started to cry again…
Alice held her what like seemed an age… Stroking Bette’s back, making cooing sounds, trying to calm her friend.
Eventually Bette calmed down, she lit another cigarette..
Alice: “ so you gonna tell me what’s going on?”
Bette: “I think I’ve lost her Al”
Alice: “ what Tina? How? Why?”
Bette: “I didn’t tell her to stay”
Alice: “why where she going?” (so Tina told her then! Phew)
Bette: “ New York, well she will….. If I don’t….”
Alice: “What?”
Bette: “She said the ball was in my court, that she wouldn’t go if I asked her to stay”
Alice: “ well tell her to stay”
Bette: “I can’t do that Alice….”
Alice: “ Why? Do you not want her to stay?”
Bette: “of course I do….. It’s just that this is a big opportunity for her, and I don’t want her to hate me later, when she realises what she missed out on, and she would be working with her ex, and what if they are meant to be, and I stand in the way, and then a few months or even weeks down the line we don’t work out, then I would have ruined it all for her”
Alice: “Have you even thought that maybe you 2 are meant to be together, and if you don’t tell her how you feel, and then let her decide then you could be losing your soul mate?”
Bette looked at Alice: “ Al come on, do you really think I have a soul mate, I have never been one for relationships, what makes this different?”
Shane appeared at the door….: “coz I’ve seen you two together Bette, and if you let her go, you’ll be making the biggest mistake of your life”
Bette and Alice turned to see Shane standing behind them..
Alice: “ how long you been there?”
Shane: “long enough”
Bette: “I would have thought you of all people Shane, would understand where I am coming from”
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hey i love this story… so glad tina didn’t go… now lets hope helena doesn’t show up at bette opening… hmmmm… now that could be good… with tina on her arm… and watching helena steaming… PPS… later babe
Bette was right in not telling Tina to stay. It’s Tina’s choice and she has to see the light of day as she makes it…which she did!
Is it selfish of me to think she should have went? In some ways 6 months is not that long a time…Bette would have been able to visit in NYC. Tina had the opportunity to make alot of money (I know money is not everything) but these days financial security is very important to have. I know she would not stopped working because she loves this work…but she could have broadened her company with that money and got more help. They love each other and she wasn’t attracted to Helena anymore…it could have been done. I say keep this story going I really like it.
I tell you this is not the end and this is not as far as this story can go! There are so many facets to this story! Bette’s show; Tina’s expanding company; Alice and Dana’s long distance relationship; Shane needing to find the love of her life; Bette & Tina have just announced that they love each other…but you have to take the cigs away from Bette permanently – they just cause too much damage, and Bette is too damn beautiful to ruin herself like that! It’s milk that does a body good…not cigarettes! And no matter how smokin’ hot you are, it’s no fun for your lover to kiss you when you smell and taste like an ash tray! Yeuuucch! Another great chapter Tilly! Please don’t stop!
yeah I see what u mean…it is kinda a natural conclusion BUT if u want carry on…I’ll read on…so addicted to B & T am I!!! Lmao, at least its not addicted to G & T (Gin and Tonic) Mother’s ruin!!! U could have some drama with Helena arriving on the Peabody Jet and Peggy insisting on Tina…but NO MATTER WHAT, they are made for each other.
I hope you continue…
No this can’t be the end. The real story is just beginning. I need to kow what is going to happen now that Dana is back in Alice’s life and now that Bette and Tina are going to be together I’m sure there is a story to tell there. What about the big gallery exhibit w/ Bette’s work being seen for the 1st time, I’d like to know how that turns out. So no they story isn’t over! Please continue to write this great fan fic, Thx.
You know that you should not have to ask whether we think that you should continue. OF COURSE YOU SHOULD CONTINUE! Glad that Tina turned down Helena and hopefully she will have enough work to keep her busy and in the money. Dana and Alice those two are a hoot so I am glad that they are back together. Just like Alice said now all there is left is Shane and a woman for her.
Yehh Tina not going and happy for B&T and now let see some hot love of B&T. Shane is good and Alice is funny. OK post soon please, thanks!
excellent
Ofcourse you should continue with this story…theres always more!..lol..i may not always comment but always read enjoy this!…
Hey Lez! I’ve been a silent reader, but I’ve got to tell you I love this story. I think you should keep it going. I want to see how Helena reacts. I’ll try to comment more. Later!
Please keep this story going it is just GREAT!!!!! You write it so well. Thank you This Chapter was GREAT!!! PPS
There is so much more for you to write. I’m sure many of us can cum up with sum if you need any.Here is a few. Sex for a few chappys,bettes art show,and of course more sex!
definitly you should continue this story, now that B&T will be together there are a lot of things to write! and you have the talent to do it!