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Apogée 12
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Shane laid next to Carmen, the Latina curling up next to her and tracing patterns on the assassin’s stomach. Shane sighed her voice breaking the comfortable silence they’d sat in,
“We didn’t really have great doctor’s where I grew up, so they didn’t understand…” Carmen’s brow furrowed in confusion that she quickly masked when she realized what Shane was trying to tell her. The assassin spoke slowly moving away from the bartender and staring at the ceiling,
“I always bruised easily, but as I got older it got worse, the nurses never believed that I wasn’t hurting myself so they’d send me to the psych ward. It wasn’t until I was twelve that anyone recognized I had a real problem, I’d get angry and my nose would bleed. I’d lose so much blood I’d have to be rushed to the hospital. My foster parents wouldn’t approve a blood transfusion, so they sent me back. Like I was broken or something,” Carmen reached over and grabbed Shane’s hands intertwining their fingers and pulling them to her lips. The assassin looked over to the bartender, her courage to finish fading, Carmen saw it in Shane’s eyes, finishing the assassin’s thought in hopes that Shane would continue.
“Blood disorders in women are so rare, even when I was trained as an EMT I was told it wasn’t possible.” Shane nodded agreeing, taking a deep breath to conclude her story,
“I know, I went to the hospital on the orphanage’s insurance, all of their doctors said the same thing. They couldn’t afford treatment anyway, so I stole enough money to see a specialist who diagnosed me.” Carmen nodded squeezing Shane’s hand and whispering the word the assassin wouldn’t,
“You were diagnosed with hemophilia weren’t you?” Shane nodded slowly, turning over to stare out of the window, and Carmen knew they were done talking for the night.
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Tina sat against Bette in the larger than life, California king size bed, having breakfast. Tina chuckled as Bette fed her a spoon of yogurt remarking,
“We’ve had breakfast in bed almost everyday for a week you realize that?” Bette shrugged smiling, thinking about the six days they’d spent together. Plays, movies, dancing, art galleries. Bette wondered if they’d done everything there was to do in West Hollywood…well she knew of one thing they hadn’t done. The brunette also thought about the hundreds of calls she sent to voicemail, and the mail piling behind the door of the office she hadn’t entered in almost a week. Bette pushed that to the back of her mind, right now she couldn’t give a flying fuck about Franklin or James or any of that front company bullshit.
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i like this story-looking forward to tuesday-to read the next post
00 L word… What an Awesome Fic you got here CD! Danish here is soo hot! lol Cant get over how the heck i missed this! :slaps self: no more, consider me hooked for sure :)
I want to curl up with my blanket and read your story. I’m not leaving… even if you beg me to. I’m all yours, so be gentle, lol. I hope Dana doesn’t get herself in trouble for lying to Dunne. Alice/Dana make such a good pair..professionally and as lovers. I like how you’re drawing out the Bette/Tina thing.. it will make it that much steamier. I know what it’s like to wait and it only adds to the hellish tension. I see they both like to lick their lips.. I do the same damn thing, it’s such a bad habit. Thank you for finally revealing Shane’s problem.. I was wondering. Not a huge fan of Sharmen but you make the sex well worth reading. I’m feeling the slow burn with Bette and Tina… hope you make their time special. What you write in your chapters makes me want to get lost in the pages. You’re my escape, ClosetDana. So close but still too far away… hopefully that will change. Great chapter… looking forward to more.
I remember when I was a sophomore my biology teacher gave us a family tree of some royal chick and she had hemophilia. Somehow she had quite a few children and this wasn’t anytime in the past few decades. It was maybe a couple of centuries ago. Freaky shit I tell ya. Anyway, the TiBette stuff is hot as always but I hope Bette knows what she’s doing. Danish is cute and sweet, and even the Sharmen was pretty good. Dunne needs to be fwapped upside the head with a boomwhacker or something. Just enough to get him to chill out and not be a jackass.
I right there with brteyes! Nice! OMG josh..will henry be making an appearance?lol
Don’t worry ClosetDana yourliving up to the The Maestro’s expectations :)Another great chapter and another 5 stars
Thanks. I thought this story could not get any better, but I was wrong. Terrific job, and you are doing fine with Bette and Tina. I do agree now that you mention it that they rarely seemed happy, BUT the illusion was there and that is the ILLUSION we fell for and LOVE to READ. Have a wonderful and safe vacation!!!!!
I hope that Dana and Alice doesn’t get caught by Inspector Dunnefuck! LoL…I wanna see more from Carmen and Shane…They’re my favorite couple of the show…As for Bette and Tina, lets hope that things work out for those two..And what will happen when Tina finds out that Bette got her husband killed?? The shit will hit the fan!! KEEP IT GOING!!! I want to read MORE!
All Tina needs to do is kick all those people to the curb and head back to Bette’s. Sounds like things are starting to unravel for Bette with her business. Hopefully if and when Tina finds out there will be a very good reason for her husband’s death. That Dunn dude is an ass. He needs to be shown up Dana and Alice. Alice is so a Bond girl now. Special Agent Alice to the rescue. Blood disorders are very hard to deal with especial when not treated. Hopefully with Carmen’s help Shane will get better. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
Things are moving right along! Interesting about Shane. Only knew women could carry the hemophilia gene. So what’s the one thing B/T haven’t done in W. Hollywood? Have a fantastic weekend. Thanks for writing!
Things are moving right along! Interesting about Shane. Only knew women could carry the hemophilia gene. So what’s the one thing B/T haven’t done in W. Hollywood? Have a fantastic weekend. Thanks for writing!
LOL @ the box comment! :D Actually I do know what you’re talking about. ;) I guess slang doesn’t know any boundaries (in a literal and figurative way). We use the term here too (ofcourse in the Dutch translation).We even use it as a nickname, we say it to women who are really dumb (it’s not really flattering when someone says that to you). Anways, totally getting off topic here. :) Great update as always! So many things to remember with this story. The readers sometimes might be ahead of you, but we don’t know were you’re heading. So some small detail, we forget (or at least I forget), can be very important later on. So, Shane is opening up to Carmen. She must feel vulnerable right now (ofcourse physically, but more emotionally), but I’m sure Carmen is a person who she can really trust and will stick with her till the end. As I can see Helena has a great timing. Bette knew how to hide her frustration. If she only knew…this was probably her last chance (at least for a while) for getting with Tina. Do I smell trouble in TiBette-paradise? Nothing new to say on Danish, except for I love them…as always (am I getting repetitive? :) ). Btw, will Betty show up for our own musical pleasure in this story? Singing the new themesong for this Bond-story for example? ;)
You have a hell-of-a-good time on vacation!!! Hope Dana and Alice don’t get caught. HAHAHAHA!!! I’m so proud of my girl Shane for opening up . . . I think Carmen is really the one for her in her time of need. NOW, lets find out what’s the problem with Carmen. LMFAO!!!! Anyways, you’re doin’ an amazing job, and due continue!!! LYLAS ;-p
I loved the update! I really hope that Dana and Alice can pull a fast one on Dunne. I think that they are intelligent enough to out-smart him. I love Danish! Uh…not the pastry…uh, nothing against the pastry…I like the pastry too but,…oh, you know what I mean.It has been an absolute pleasure reading your fic, and I can’t wait to read more. I think that I was able to identify the chart because you write the characters so well. It just fit, and for me it was clear. You should totally be proud of being able to pull that off. I’m really glad that you were able to get me to stop lurking and to actually comment. It makes the story so much better. It kind of makes it more personal. So…thank you. I also see that more people on the site are using the drive-by comment…that’s really funny.Update soon. I can’t wait!
Have wonderful time on your vacation. Try not to think of us poor saps pining away for your story :). Great as always. Can’t wait until the perfect storm of drama hits these ladies. Thanks for posting.
I love Dana and Alice together both professionally and as girlfriends. You do them justice. Thanks for this update and have a nice trip. See ya!
LOVE IT. Ok, I have NO clue why you worry about writing for your Bette & Tina… You do an amazing job.
im really enjoying this story, i love it, you write really well as always fan bloody tastic. and yes you do need to post again lol, only kidding. enjoy your vacation have fun :-)
Awesome as always. Can’t wait for more.
ah! It was longer than the others! It was really good too. I had to leave in the middle of reading to go to work and the first thing i did when i got back home was finish reading, lol. I’ll be waiting for more!
Thank you for the sharmen loving… this is getting intense! and while I am rooting Danish to uncover the mysterious of Shane, I am also really apprehensive as to what you have install when Alice and Dana finally finds Shane! This story totally rocks!!! you rock!!! I love how everything is linked, and everyone has a part in this whole fic! great JOB! I LOVE YOU!
This is getting more excited and love it!