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Apogée 13
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“Well, it’s definitely a fixer-upper.” Dana tapped on the torn steel screen, and waited as a flurry of footsteps came closer to the door. A pretty caramel skinned girl opened the door, and stared at them. Dana spoke first grabbing her badge and holding it close to the still closed screen,
“Hi, my name is Agent Fairbanks and this is Agent Bell, we’re here to see Mrs. Mercedes Morales.” The young girl rolled her eyes yelling into the house behind her,
“Abuela someone is here for you.” She never opened the door, Alice smirking to Dana over the warm greeting. An older Latina woman walked up to the screen, an unreadable look on her face, the writer spoke up recognizing this woman as Carmen’s mother from the file.
“Hi Mrs. Morales, I’m Agent Bell, we spoke on the phone earlier, and this is Agent Fairbanks.” Mrs. Morales’ face lit up in excitement and she opened the door quickly, directing the two women in and offering them a seat in the small, but clean living room.
“I’m sorry for my granddaughters rudeness, the young people here aren’t too kind to law enforcement…how can I help you Agent Bell? You said you had questions about Carmen is she in some kind of trouble with the law?” Alice shook her head,
“No, she’s not in any kind of trouble with the law Mrs. Morales, but I do have a few questions. Have you by any chance seen the reports on the news?” Mrs. Morales shook her head ‘no’, her eyes becoming confused. Alice swallowed slowly and Dana spoke up not wanting the writer to have to bite the bullet for her.
“Mrs. Morales, about a week ago Carmen disappeared. We’re looking for information that might lead us to her.” Mercedes covered her mouth with her hands, gasping slowly and murmuring something Dana couldn’t quite translate in rapid Spanish. Mrs. Morales closed her eyes for a moment, trying to pull herself together. Alice waited a moment before continuing, showing Mrs. Morales a small tape recorder questioning Carmen’s mother with her eyes. Mrs. Morales nodded that it was ok and Alice turned it on,
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Another great chapter. Getting alittle scared for Bette though, but I am still rooting for her and Tina’s happiness. Please work it out.
I am a Tina Bette fan but am enjoying your story
I am loving your story and am a big sharmen fan keep up the excellent work, look fwd too more updates very soon.
What can I say, I love my danish, and you write them oh so well, I only hope Alice returns Dana’s intense feelings.
Sharmen fan. Can’t wait to see what Carmen’s story is (I have an idea, but I’m probably wrong) but I can’t wait for you to tell it. Love Bette’s crazed personality in your fic. Plz post soon.
I am a big dork Sharmen fan! but you have managed to turn me into a big Danish fan too! I love the danish in your story! And of cuz the Sharmen! Please continue on, I know how this writer’s block thing can be a b*tch. But I am loving every of your updates!
Great update! I am a Tibette fan. I am into your story. Please continue.
sharmin all the way! woot!
finally an update. i was getting worried. well i loved the update and am a huge sharmen fan so I am dying to see where things go with that. I want to know the rest of shane’s story. well can’t wait for the next update.
Hey, Baby-girl . . . I am the biggest Sharmen fan ever . . . Anyways, your doing an amazing job, I’m lovin’ it to pieces. Um I wanna’ see what Carmen’s hidding now that we’ve hinted a little about what’s eattin’ my girl Shane (even though I would love to know more!!) . . . anyways, I’m still hopping Shane gets better . . . Post soon!!! LYLAS ;-p
I’m actually a Shina fan. =p Okay no seriously you know I’m a big TiBetter. I’m really loving Danish though. I’m sorry but I still can’t get into Sharmen. =/ Maybe I just like older women better. ;) Can’t wait for B&T to rock the bed. >:D
Oh crap I forgot to tell you what a boomwhacker is. Boomwhackers are holow pipes usually made of plastic that are pitched musically. They’re lots of fun for kids to play with in music class and aren’t very loud if they aren’t banged too hard.
Total Danish fan right here. I love this story! You write all the characters so well. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
I’m still trying to get over the fact that Bette did prison time..lol! Anyhoots if tina finds out, i don’t know how it will work unless you have something up your sleeves. Though not on the TIbette ship on the show, here in fanfic I do very much enjoy thier stores. I like sharmen, not much of a danish fan., but it’s all good. I like the fact that danish is actually a serious couple, not all shits and giggles. loving the take charge dana though!
I am a BIG TiBette fan
: does the Danish wave: Da….NI….sh! lol you knew that. :rolls on floor: for sure 00 L word strikes again. I love the mafia.. soprano vibe from bette. Your whole story line between all the characters rock… lol but back to the main attraction the hottest Agents Alice and Dana so sweet! :) Keep it coming! love, your number 1 00 L word fan lol Oh ps: tnx for updating TLWY, writers block be damned! ya still always pull through with awesomeness! :)
Definitely Danish – and you do it brilliantly, keep it coming.
Wait, wait, wait. Let me get this straight. So, what I’m hear – er – reading is that you’ve seen a limited amount of the show?! HOLY COW! Ok… so… wow… well, personally, I think s1 is a must for Tibette-age. Regardless, love your story, and keep my Tibette coming! (and please, please, PLEASE don’t let Tina find out!)
SHARRRRMENlove.though i am greatly intrigued by the danish s/l tooi like that shane’s condition makes her almost innately vulnerable no matter how strong she wants to be. making carmen seem that much stronger… almost to a point where it seems that shane needs her. the couple compliments each other very well.
TiBette, always
i dont comment much but i do love the sharmen story you have going here. thanks for writing!
I love how this mystery seems to ever change before my eyes.. there is always something new and exciting about it. You have a true talent for capturing my attention with all aspects of this drama. Even though Alice and Dana got nothing from Mrs. Morales, they still walked away with some knowledge. You know that Bette and Tina aren’t my favorite couple of the story but I love that their relationship is turning into this great possible romance… going from lusting to greatly caring. Alice and Dana… wow, they have something really special and you can feel it when you read the words. It’s about love-making versus the quick fix… there are true feeling here. Thank you for the great chapter… thank you so much. Looking forward to more as I curl up with my blanket.. I know it sounds funny especially since it’s so hot, lol.
Wow! I loved the last scene. It was extremely well written. It’s a great change, having Dana tell Alice that she loves her first. I hope Alice is able to return those feelings. I have one of those big ole’ grins on my face…again. I kind of feel like I did when I got my wisdom teeth pulled…no that’s not a bad thing. The laughing gas they gave me made me loopy and smile like the Joker. The pain didn’t come until after the laughing gas wore off. That’s the great thing about this story though…no pain after…right…? Alice love’s her right (hint hint)? Danish is definately my favorite. In the word’s of Paris Hilton…”loves it”! Great update. I can’t wait for more.
really amazing story. okay heres how it should end though. they all meet, become instant friends, and its a very happy ending! oh wait, i forgot, this is based off the L word, so there is no such thing as a happy ending for anyone! oh well…i love your story and hope you post again soon!
I am a big B&T fan and love this story. Post soon please, thanks!
Tina and Bette fan thanks
Huge TiBette fan, but you have piqued my interest in both danish and sharmen. Sorry about your vaca. Great post :).
Danish!
My heart belongs to Bette and Tina but I do enjoy Alice and Dana. I am so pissed at IC for destroying both couples. Can we just kick IC’s ass to the curb and have her do Bette’s time in jail. Maybe put her on death row for screwing up so badly.
No, I really have no idea where you’re heading. So yes, you can suprise me. :) Carmen’s intentions with Shane are good ones, right? She doesn’t have a hidden agenda or something (oh, I’m so naive)? I see you mentioned Nikki again. She must have been really important to Shane. I’m curious what really happend to her. Also wondering what the trial was about, does it have to do something with the empty baby room? Carmen says not to worry with the cops being around her mother’s place, but she doesn’t know who the cops are…agent Fairbanks and agent Bell! You can run, but you can’t hide from them! :P But seriously, she doesn’t know how many people are looking for Shane…all for different reasons. Somebody is going to track them down, sooner than they think. Bette has a hard job to do, keeping herself out of jail and hiding it for Tina. I really like the fact that the Danish-relationship is trouble-free, they’re just being happy (and on the side solving a big case). Love that Alice has a chart with criminal connections. Btw, I would like it if you write a comedy on Betty in the style of a True Hollywood Story…because that means you got to finish TLWY! :P
Tina and Bette fan. Good Story.
aw, I love the Danish, so cute! This is an amazing story, please continue soon!
Great Chappy…I just hope that Shane opens up more to Carmen and tell her the real deal..I really hope that Tina doesn’t get her heart broken by Bette bc of her husband’s death, but I feel like that will happen…Dana and Alice are amazing together…So much chemistry for our girls…I hope that their relationship last if the “job” doesn’t get in the way..But anyways, thanks for the fast post and I hope to see more from you soon!!!
totally love the characters in this fic, I’m a big fan of your writing, and you write Danish so well, To Live Without You one is of my favourite stories so I’m always pleased to see that you’ve updated! look forward to reading more soon… long live Danish!