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    Apogée 13

    Story written on June 21, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61406
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    Alice comes closer to the truth and to Dana. Carmen throws Shane a curveball. Bette schemes to win Tina’s heart

    “Nikki was my best friend at the orphanage and eventually became my first girlfriend.” Carmen nodded knowing there was more to the story, the distress in Shane’s voice when she called for her in the truck it almost scared the bartender. Carmen could remember the assassin’s ragged breathing and mumbled words. The bartender placed a hand over Shane’s silently pleading with her for a little more information. The assassin’s lips pursed and her sentences hurried as she spoke,

    “I used to pickpocket to get us things the orphanage couldn’t, one day I got caught and the guy punched me. I couldn’t stop the bleeding so the orphanage shipped me off to the hospital, one of the new doctors was specializing in blood diseases. She did my physical and diagnosed me with hemophilia, the orphanage couldn’t pay the high medical bills and there wasn’t a couple who could afford to adopt a sick kid. So I went untreated for a long time, until I met someone who offered to train me to run hits. Nikki found out and she left me.” Shane’s story was only partially true and Carmen could tell, based on the way the assassin cried out for this mystery girl and Shane’s reaction to her name the bartender knew there was something else there and although Carmen wanted to know she would have to wait yet again. Shane could only come around in her own time.

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    As they came back into the city Alice swung by her home to grab some clothes and give Dana the tour of her apartment, the agent poking her head in each room as the writer gave her a brief and obvious description.

    “This is the kitchen where I do my cooking…and this is the living room where I usually work.” Alice’s living room was lined with cases of books on criminal justice and psychology books; Dana smiled thinking how fortunate she was to have met possibly one of the greatest analytical minds in California. The agent scanned the room coming to the large whiteboard on the right-hand wall. Dana studied the diagrams and patterns of possible criminal connections, noticing links she thought only the FBI knew about. The agent smiled as Alice shrugged embarrassed,

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    5. Sharmen fan. Can’t wait to see what Carmen’s story is (I have an idea, but I’m probably wrong) but I can’t wait for you to tell it. Love Bette’s crazed personality in your fic. Plz post soon.

    6. I am a big dork Sharmen fan! but you have managed to turn me into a big Danish fan too! I love the danish in your story! And of cuz the Sharmen! Please continue on, I know how this writer’s block thing can be a b*tch. But I am loving every of your updates!

    9. finally an update. i was getting worried. well i loved the update and am a huge sharmen fan so I am dying to see where things go with that. I want to know the rest of shane’s story. well can’t wait for the next update.

    10. Hey, Baby-girl . . . I am the biggest Sharmen fan ever . . . Anyways, your doing an amazing job, I’m lovin’ it to pieces. Um I wanna’ see what Carmen’s hidding now that we’ve hinted a little about what’s eattin’ my girl Shane (even though I would love to know more!!) . . . anyways, I’m still hopping Shane gets better . . . Post soon!!! LYLAS ;-p

    11. I’m actually a Shina fan. =p Okay no seriously you know I’m a big TiBetter. I’m really loving Danish though. I’m sorry but I still can’t get into Sharmen. =/ Maybe I just like older women better. ;) Can’t wait for B&T to rock the bed. >:D

    12. Oh crap I forgot to tell you what a boomwhacker is. Boomwhackers are holow pipes usually made of plastic that are pitched musically. They’re lots of fun for kids to play with in music class and aren’t very loud if they aren’t banged too hard.

    14. I’m still trying to get over the fact that Bette did prison time..lol! Anyhoots if tina finds out, i don’t know how it will work unless you have something up your sleeves. Though not on the TIbette ship on the show, here in fanfic I do very much enjoy thier stores. I like sharmen, not much of a danish fan., but it’s all good. I like the fact that danish is actually a serious couple, not all shits and giggles. loving the take charge dana though!

    16. : does the Danish wave: Da….NI….sh! lol you knew that. :rolls on floor: for sure 00 L word strikes again. I love the mafia.. soprano vibe from bette. Your whole story line between all the characters rock… lol but back to the main attraction the hottest Agents Alice and Dana so sweet! :) Keep it coming! love, your number 1 00 L word fan lol Oh ps: tnx for updating TLWY, writers block be damned! ya still always pull through with awesomeness! :)

    18. Wait, wait, wait. Let me get this straight. So, what I’m hear – er – reading is that you’ve seen a limited amount of the show?! HOLY COW! Ok… so… wow… well, personally, I think s1 is a must for Tibette-age. Regardless, love your story, and keep my Tibette coming! (and please, please, PLEASE don’t let Tina find out!)

    19. SHARRRRMENlove.though i am greatly intrigued by the danish s/l tooi like that shane’s condition makes her almost innately vulnerable no matter how strong she wants to be. making carmen seem that much stronger… almost to a point where it seems that shane needs her. the couple compliments each other very well.

    22. I love how this mystery seems to ever change before my eyes.. there is always something new and exciting about it. You have a true talent for capturing my attention with all aspects of this drama. Even though Alice and Dana got nothing from Mrs. Morales, they still walked away with some knowledge. You know that Bette and Tina aren’t my favorite couple of the story but I love that their relationship is turning into this great possible romance… going from lusting to greatly caring. Alice and Dana… wow, they have something really special and you can feel it when you read the words. It’s about love-making versus the quick fix… there are true feeling here. Thank you for the great chapter… thank you so much. Looking forward to more as I curl up with my blanket.. I know it sounds funny especially since it’s so hot, lol.

    23. Wow! I loved the last scene. It was extremely well written. It’s a great change, having Dana tell Alice that she loves her first. I hope Alice is able to return those feelings. I have one of those big ole’ grins on my face…again. I kind of feel like I did when I got my wisdom teeth pulled…no that’s not a bad thing. The laughing gas they gave me made me loopy and smile like the Joker. The pain didn’t come until after the laughing gas wore off. That’s the great thing about this story though…no pain after…right…? Alice love’s her right (hint hint)? Danish is definately my favorite. In the word’s of Paris Hilton…”loves it”! Great update. I can’t wait for more.

    24. really amazing story. okay heres how it should end though. they all meet, become instant friends, and its a very happy ending! oh wait, i forgot, this is based off the L word, so there is no such thing as a happy ending for anyone! oh well…i love your story and hope you post again soon!

    29. My heart belongs to Bette and Tina but I do enjoy Alice and Dana. I am so pissed at IC for destroying both couples. Can we just kick IC’s ass to the curb and have her do Bette’s time in jail. Maybe put her on death row for screwing up so badly.

    30. No, I really have no idea where you’re heading. So yes, you can suprise me. :) Carmen’s intentions with Shane are good ones, right? She doesn’t have a hidden agenda or something (oh, I’m so naive)? I see you mentioned Nikki again. She must have been really important to Shane. I’m curious what really happend to her. Also wondering what the trial was about, does it have to do something with the empty baby room? Carmen says not to worry with the cops being around her mother’s place, but she doesn’t know who the cops are…agent Fairbanks and agent Bell! You can run, but you can’t hide from them! :P But seriously, she doesn’t know how many people are looking for Shane…all for different reasons. Somebody is going to track them down, sooner than they think. Bette has a hard job to do, keeping herself out of jail and hiding it for Tina. I really like the fact that the Danish-relationship is trouble-free, they’re just being happy (and on the side solving a big case). Love that Alice has a chart with criminal connections. Btw, I would like it if you write a comedy on Betty in the style of a True Hollywood Story…because that means you got to finish TLWY! :P

    33. Great Chappy…I just hope that Shane opens up more to Carmen and tell her the real deal..I really hope that Tina doesn’t get her heart broken by Bette bc of her husband’s death, but I feel like that will happen…Dana and Alice are amazing together…So much chemistry for our girls…I hope that their relationship last if the “job” doesn’t get in the way..But anyways, thanks for the fast post and I hope to see more from you soon!!!

    34. totally love the characters in this fic, I’m a big fan of your writing, and you write Danish so well, To Live Without You one is of my favourite stories so I’m always pleased to see that you’ve updated! look forward to reading more soon… long live Danish!

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