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Apogée 16
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“Okay Kit, you win, I know you want to talk about what happened, go ahead talk.” Bette finally snapped, firing daggers into Kit’s eyes. She loved her sister, but she hated her at the same time. Kit sighed staring at the table a moment then back to her sister, Kit really didn’t mean for things to get so tense between them. Their relationship had gone from estranged to business acquaintances to the loathing that Kit saw in her sister’s eyes.
“I didn’t invite you here to corner you Bette…” Kit said the brunette interrupting her,
“Well, you could’ve fooled me.” Bette scoffed as the waiter bounced up to the table, Kit cutting off her explanation as the oblivious waiter worked for his tip.
“Welcome to Pier 12, my name is Steve and I’ll be your server tonight. Can I start you off with drinks or an appetizer?” The waiter said smiling cheerily, Bette giving a very weak and insincere smirk.
“Actually we’re ready to order, I’ll have a Grey Goose Martini to drink and the Pecan Crusted Salmon, but I’d like asparagus instead of your vegetable medley.” Bette slid the menu to the side of the table waiting for Kit to order,
“And I’ll have the a Cosmopolitan and the Summertime Fiesta Salad, Raspberry Vinaigrette dressing and a side of walnuts.” The waited nodded grabbing the menus and hurrying off, Kit locked her fingers and rested her chin on her hands thinking of how to approach her sister.
“Bette, I think deep down you know I didn’t invite you here to corner you, and if I want talk about what happened in the past it’s only to work through it and hopefully work toward you forgiving me. We’re still family, and I love you…I can’t force you to talk about it but I would like to have a meal with you, and see how you’re doing.” Kit said in a soft but firm voice that reminded Bette of the way her father used to speak. The brunette looked away, a little embarrassed at her behavior.
“I’m…I’m actually doing alright Kit, the business has had it’s bumps the past few weeks but I think things will work out…We do need to talk about this kid you’re looking for, McCoutchen right?” Bette asked as the drinks were delivered to the table, Kit’s eyebrows shot up for a moment as she took a sip of her drink.
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Gosh, I don’t want Bette to lose Tina. Totally love Dana and Alice in this fic.
uh oh…dont let anything happen to dana! or alice…ahhh!!! post more SOON pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeee! i feel like a little child begging for candy, but your stories are just that good!
Hope Bette not lose Tina. Oh please don’t let anything happen Alice or Dana. OK post soon please, thanks!
I would just like to say thank you so much for the Danish scene! And, oh, I hope nothing happens to Dana although I think she can kick Mark or Gomey’s ass, but that’s just my opinion. I love your stories and I hope you update again soon:)
Great Update as always CD! Fucking hot scene w/ Dana/Alice…you know I’m a sucker for those two. I also really like Shanes backstory. So anyways, hopefully Dana will be ok. I agree with Geeky that she could kick the shit out of them any day. Great post! Keep it up!
Yes I’m just hating Dunne officially now. I can be slow sometimes…I tend to give people the benefit of the doubt. But I was so wrong, all the signs were there…Dunne is an asshole. I know it now. :) Alice said ‘I love you’ back to Dana, yay! Yep, Danish is still going strong (for now)! :D Again, I liked Shane’s memories of Nikki. They seem to be innocent. Who did Shane ask to get these bags from Kit’s office? Do we know them? I looked at the chart but I couldn’t figure out who it would be (I could mention some names, but they wouldn’t make any sense…). Kit has a problem…Shane wouldn’t get out of her hiding spot because she already has got what she can’t live without…right? And why is Shane in a hurry? Is it out of habit not to stay too long at one spot or is it something else? And if Josh would check out Donuts Catering it will lead to someone, wouldn’t it (I have an idea)? Or am I just wasting my energy on the wrong clues…? You really need me to teach me the skill to project my desires onto my environment. It would make my work environment a whole lot more attractive. :P Nice pics! I would like to jump in that water (is it a lake?) right now, it’s still very hot here (it’s over 90F!).
I loved this update! Excellent job! The Danish scene was my favorite…of course. Very hot. There’s so much going on and I love all of it. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait for more!
Your story will never get boring, sugar… you always have many directions to go and your ideas are always fresh. Dana gives Alice a key, what a big step… too bad it doesn’t work, lol. You write the sex scenes like a pro… does your girlfriend inspire all of them? lol You would write something for me if I asked nicely… this is me asking nicely, Please Closet Dana. Sounds like Bette and Kit have some serious sister issues they need to work out. I love the story about Shane beating the guy to death with the rifle, lol. So why is Carmen wanting to train? And what is Helena’s connection to any of this? Gomey and Mark… what a couple of morons, lol. Who’s the dark-haired woman… Dana? Leaving me hanging? Not cool, lol Hmmm guess I’ll just sit here waiting for you… but I must warn you I’m not very patient, just ask my girlfriend.
It’s about damn time you came back to me!!!! LoL…This is a great chapter!! I love Dana and Alice as always, they’re so great together, but how does Mark know Alice?? I can’t wait for the next chapter!! What does Kit have of Shane? I wonder if it’s NIKKI!!! But I won’t find out until I read the next chapter!!! Thanks again!!!
Ugh…you’re driving me crazy :). Why was Bette in prison? What happened between her and Kit? What does Kit have that Shane can’t live without? What’s in the green bag? Is Alice okay? AND you give us links to your vacation pictures (beautiful btw) and you aren’t in any of them. I think you like to tease us. I love this story and even tho’ B&T aren’t your favorite, you write them very well (well, when you include them–lol). Thank you for posting CD. I will continue to read until you have revealed all the mysteries :).
Great chapter ClosetDana, I really can’t wait to read what happens next..5 stars
Woh, Alice and Dana were Hot,Hot,Hot..A cold shower desperately needed, Hmm! Hope they gonna be ok tho? Theres so much goin on in this chapter, i had to read it twice so it would all sink in, lmao. So much anticipation for the next chapter, its drivin me crazy.. Noooo. Pleeeese post soon. Thanks.
Why do I have the feeling that Carmen will be the only one alive at the end? Still hoping for happy TiBette regardless of the outcome. ;)
WOW, that was just awesome, as always!! Very good chapter, I really enjoyed reading it! Especially liked the Shane/Carmen (and the Shane/Nikki) scenes, and actually all other scenes as well ;) Please update soon, wanna read more of my favorite story!! I`m so curious ;) Oh, by the way, those pictures are quite nice! Where did you take them?
I wonder if you are going to find that Marcus was laundring Bette’s stolen money through Helena’s account. Is Hidden money is at the root of this whole mess? Bette is so afraid of loosing Tina and it is beginning to show. I am still wondering what Kit did to make Bette so angry with her. Remind me to never get Shane pissed off at me. Alice and Dana are just so cute. I remember the strap on conversation that A&D shared in the show.
Well, well, well . . . long time no read . . . LMFAO!!! Anyways, I’m lovin’ my sharmen gurls, please continue and soon!!! LYLAS ;-p
ok al and dana r hotttttttttttt, funny you have to have a happy b&t now please longer
alright… i started reading this a little “iffy”. but the storylines are absolutelty magnificent. now im left here clinging to my keyboard waiting for the next. thank you for the wonderful read and dont worry you have another loyal reader.
Don’t tell me Alice is related to that idiot Mark. Great chap.