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    Apogée 16

    Story written on July 17, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61736
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    Alice’s new key and the roleplaying continues, Kit and Bette have dinner. Carmen’s in over her head and Helena’s guilt…oh yeah and the break in begins

    “So, how do we know those people didn’t follow you or put a tracking…something on this shit?” The bartender asked, her hands on her hips looking over all of the equipment laid before her. Not even in the movies had Carmen seen so many weapons in one place. Rifles, handguns, knives…some other shit the bartender didn’t even recognize. Carmen picked up a short lightweight rod and studied it,

    “What is this?” The bartender whispered to herself as Shane entered the room behind her, the assassin taking the rod out of Carmen’s hands and flicking her wrist, sending a very sharp blade out of the other end.

    “Yeah a lot of this stuff might be new to you, so don’t cut your arm off or something…They wouldn’t follow us, I still have one or two trustworthy people who aren’t connected to Kit, I asked them to bring a few things from my storage space…oh sweet,” Shane picked up a very clean black and steel handgun and jammed it in the side of her pants. Carmen looked a little overwhelmed and Shane chuckled,

    “Don’t worry, I don’t use half of this stuff, the guys didn’t know what’s what, so I told them to bring what they could carry.” Shane said simply, searching around the pile for something. She picked up a very small black rifle and handed it to Carmen,

    “Here, this is the second rifle I trained on, it’s light and it doesn’t kickback too bad…but you’re not going to get much distance with it…are you sure you want to do this?” Shane asked, she seemed more relaxed and at ease with all the weapons around, Carmen however was feeling quite the opposite.

    “I’m sure…so what happened to your first rifle?” The bartender asked, Shane chuckling at the memory.

    “Um, well funny story, my first hit was an older guy, I can’t remember his name. I was supposed to go to a short rooftop and pop him from about 100-150 feet away. The guy wasn’t paranoid or anything, actually he was quite dull…I pulled the first one and missed him, and when I went for another shot I found I was out of ammo. You’d think that the guy would be running by now, but no, this guy didn’t even hear the first shot. I reached for another round and saw I’d brought the wrong fucking bullets, so I had to lure him into an alley and beat the hell out of him. I actually ended up hitting him with the rifle I was supposed to shoot him with…It never really worked after that…the impact I guess.” Shane explained, Carmen’s face a mask of unbelief and horror.

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    2. uh oh…dont let anything happen to dana! or alice…ahhh!!! post more SOON pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeee! i feel like a little child begging for candy, but your stories are just that good!

    4. I would just like to say thank you so much for the Danish scene! And, oh, I hope nothing happens to Dana although I think she can kick Mark or Gomey’s ass, but that’s just my opinion. I love your stories and I hope you update again soon:)

    5. Great Update as always CD! Fucking hot scene w/ Dana/Alice…you know I’m a sucker for those two. I also really like Shanes backstory. So anyways, hopefully Dana will be ok. I agree with Geeky that she could kick the shit out of them any day. Great post! Keep it up!

    6. Yes I’m just hating Dunne officially now. I can be slow sometimes…I tend to give people the benefit of the doubt. But I was so wrong, all the signs were there…Dunne is an asshole. I know it now. :) Alice said ‘I love you’ back to Dana, yay! Yep, Danish is still going strong (for now)! :D Again, I liked Shane’s memories of Nikki. They seem to be innocent. Who did Shane ask to get these bags from Kit’s office? Do we know them? I looked at the chart but I couldn’t figure out who it would be (I could mention some names, but they wouldn’t make any sense…). Kit has a problem…Shane wouldn’t get out of her hiding spot because she already has got what she can’t live without…right? And why is Shane in a hurry? Is it out of habit not to stay too long at one spot or is it something else? And if Josh would check out Donuts Catering it will lead to someone, wouldn’t it (I have an idea)? Or am I just wasting my energy on the wrong clues…? You really need me to teach me the skill to project my desires onto my environment. It would make my work environment a whole lot more attractive. :P Nice pics! I would like to jump in that water (is it a lake?) right now, it’s still very hot here (it’s over 90F!).

    7. I loved this update! Excellent job! The Danish scene was my favorite…of course. Very hot. There’s so much going on and I love all of it. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait for more!

    8. Your story will never get boring, sugar… you always have many directions to go and your ideas are always fresh. Dana gives Alice a key, what a big step… too bad it doesn’t work, lol. You write the sex scenes like a pro… does your girlfriend inspire all of them? lol You would write something for me if I asked nicely… this is me asking nicely, Please Closet Dana. Sounds like Bette and Kit have some serious sister issues they need to work out. I love the story about Shane beating the guy to death with the rifle, lol. So why is Carmen wanting to train? And what is Helena’s connection to any of this? Gomey and Mark… what a couple of morons, lol. Who’s the dark-haired woman… Dana? Leaving me hanging? Not cool, lol Hmmm guess I’ll just sit here waiting for you… but I must warn you I’m not very patient, just ask my girlfriend.

    9. It’s about damn time you came back to me!!!! LoL…This is a great chapter!! I love Dana and Alice as always, they’re so great together, but how does Mark know Alice?? I can’t wait for the next chapter!! What does Kit have of Shane? I wonder if it’s NIKKI!!! But I won’t find out until I read the next chapter!!! Thanks again!!!

    10. Ugh…you’re driving me crazy :). Why was Bette in prison? What happened between her and Kit? What does Kit have that Shane can’t live without? What’s in the green bag? Is Alice okay? AND you give us links to your vacation pictures (beautiful btw) and you aren’t in any of them. I think you like to tease us. I love this story and even tho’ B&T aren’t your favorite, you write them very well (well, when you include them–lol). Thank you for posting CD. I will continue to read until you have revealed all the mysteries :).

    12. Woh, Alice and Dana were Hot,Hot,Hot..A cold shower desperately needed, Hmm! Hope they gonna be ok tho? Theres so much goin on in this chapter, i had to read it twice so it would all sink in, lmao. So much anticipation for the next chapter, its drivin me crazy.. Noooo. Pleeeese post soon. Thanks.

    13. Why do I have the feeling that Carmen will be the only one alive at the end? Still hoping for happy TiBette regardless of the outcome. ;)

    14. WOW, that was just awesome, as always!! Very good chapter, I really enjoyed reading it! Especially liked the Shane/Carmen (and the Shane/Nikki) scenes, and actually all other scenes as well ;) Please update soon, wanna read more of my favorite story!! I`m so curious ;) Oh, by the way, those pictures are quite nice! Where did you take them?

    15. I wonder if you are going to find that Marcus was laundring Bette’s stolen money through Helena’s account. Is Hidden money is at the root of this whole mess? Bette is so afraid of loosing Tina and it is beginning to show. I am still wondering what Kit did to make Bette so angry with her. Remind me to never get Shane pissed off at me. Alice and Dana are just so cute. I remember the strap on conversation that A&D shared in the show.

    18. alright… i started reading this a little “iffy”. but the storylines are absolutelty magnificent. now im left here clinging to my keyboard waiting for the next. thank you for the wonderful read and dont worry you have another loyal reader.

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