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Apogée 16
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“I’m sorry baby, I’m just scared, and you don’t seem to be.” Nikki said kissing Shane’s hand as she spoke, Shane looked into Nikki’s eyes and pulled her face close kissing her lightly on the lips and whispering.
“I am,”
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Shane had somehow arranged a weekend away from the orphanage, Nikki wasn’t sure how the black haired teen had done it but she wasn’t going to ask unnecessary questions. Shane got a motel room with a fake I.D. and some of the extra money she’d brought for the weekend. They got comfortable in the room, Shane stretching along the bed and Nikki assuming her regular position on top of her. Nikki looked into Shane’s blue eyes and smiled,
“So we’ve got this room to ourselves huh?” Nikki smiled her fingers sneaking under Shane’s shirt, the black haired girl smirked.
“Yeah,” Shane husked, she and Nikki were close but she was always careful not to push Nikki. The Latina’s fingers traced patterns dangerously close to Shane’s breast, she held her breath grabbing Nikki’s wrist gently and looking into her eyes.
“Are you sure?” Shane said swallowing hard, this would definitely be the furthest they’d ventured and the furthest Nikki had ever gone. Nikki smiled, kissing Shane slowly and moving the tip of her finger along Shane’s breast. Shane had never allowed anyone to touch her the way she allowed Nikki, and as things got more and more heated Nikki became more curious. She pulled Shane’s shirt off and began kissing along the dark haired girl’s stomach, Nikki kissed from the hem of Shane’s pants to the teen’s mouth.
“Make love to me Shane,” Nikki said very seriously. The young Latina had once said she was saving sex for the person she was in love with and didn’t understand how others could be so free with something so personal and life changing. Shane waited for Nikki to change her mind, she wasn’t sure she could handle the responsibility of being the one to take her love’s virginity. Shane waited in vain as Nikki turned them, the dark haired teen now poised over her.
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Gosh, I don’t want Bette to lose Tina. Totally love Dana and Alice in this fic.
uh oh…dont let anything happen to dana! or alice…ahhh!!! post more SOON pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeee! i feel like a little child begging for candy, but your stories are just that good!
Hope Bette not lose Tina. Oh please don’t let anything happen Alice or Dana. OK post soon please, thanks!
I would just like to say thank you so much for the Danish scene! And, oh, I hope nothing happens to Dana although I think she can kick Mark or Gomey’s ass, but that’s just my opinion. I love your stories and I hope you update again soon:)
Great Update as always CD! Fucking hot scene w/ Dana/Alice…you know I’m a sucker for those two. I also really like Shanes backstory. So anyways, hopefully Dana will be ok. I agree with Geeky that she could kick the shit out of them any day. Great post! Keep it up!
Yes I’m just hating Dunne officially now. I can be slow sometimes…I tend to give people the benefit of the doubt. But I was so wrong, all the signs were there…Dunne is an asshole. I know it now. :) Alice said ‘I love you’ back to Dana, yay! Yep, Danish is still going strong (for now)! :D Again, I liked Shane’s memories of Nikki. They seem to be innocent. Who did Shane ask to get these bags from Kit’s office? Do we know them? I looked at the chart but I couldn’t figure out who it would be (I could mention some names, but they wouldn’t make any sense…). Kit has a problem…Shane wouldn’t get out of her hiding spot because she already has got what she can’t live without…right? And why is Shane in a hurry? Is it out of habit not to stay too long at one spot or is it something else? And if Josh would check out Donuts Catering it will lead to someone, wouldn’t it (I have an idea)? Or am I just wasting my energy on the wrong clues…? You really need me to teach me the skill to project my desires onto my environment. It would make my work environment a whole lot more attractive. :P Nice pics! I would like to jump in that water (is it a lake?) right now, it’s still very hot here (it’s over 90F!).
I loved this update! Excellent job! The Danish scene was my favorite…of course. Very hot. There’s so much going on and I love all of it. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait for more!
Your story will never get boring, sugar… you always have many directions to go and your ideas are always fresh. Dana gives Alice a key, what a big step… too bad it doesn’t work, lol. You write the sex scenes like a pro… does your girlfriend inspire all of them? lol You would write something for me if I asked nicely… this is me asking nicely, Please Closet Dana. Sounds like Bette and Kit have some serious sister issues they need to work out. I love the story about Shane beating the guy to death with the rifle, lol. So why is Carmen wanting to train? And what is Helena’s connection to any of this? Gomey and Mark… what a couple of morons, lol. Who’s the dark-haired woman… Dana? Leaving me hanging? Not cool, lol Hmmm guess I’ll just sit here waiting for you… but I must warn you I’m not very patient, just ask my girlfriend.
It’s about damn time you came back to me!!!! LoL…This is a great chapter!! I love Dana and Alice as always, they’re so great together, but how does Mark know Alice?? I can’t wait for the next chapter!! What does Kit have of Shane? I wonder if it’s NIKKI!!! But I won’t find out until I read the next chapter!!! Thanks again!!!
Ugh…you’re driving me crazy :). Why was Bette in prison? What happened between her and Kit? What does Kit have that Shane can’t live without? What’s in the green bag? Is Alice okay? AND you give us links to your vacation pictures (beautiful btw) and you aren’t in any of them. I think you like to tease us. I love this story and even tho’ B&T aren’t your favorite, you write them very well (well, when you include them–lol). Thank you for posting CD. I will continue to read until you have revealed all the mysteries :).
Great chapter ClosetDana, I really can’t wait to read what happens next..5 stars
Woh, Alice and Dana were Hot,Hot,Hot..A cold shower desperately needed, Hmm! Hope they gonna be ok tho? Theres so much goin on in this chapter, i had to read it twice so it would all sink in, lmao. So much anticipation for the next chapter, its drivin me crazy.. Noooo. Pleeeese post soon. Thanks.
Why do I have the feeling that Carmen will be the only one alive at the end? Still hoping for happy TiBette regardless of the outcome. ;)
WOW, that was just awesome, as always!! Very good chapter, I really enjoyed reading it! Especially liked the Shane/Carmen (and the Shane/Nikki) scenes, and actually all other scenes as well ;) Please update soon, wanna read more of my favorite story!! I`m so curious ;) Oh, by the way, those pictures are quite nice! Where did you take them?
I wonder if you are going to find that Marcus was laundring Bette’s stolen money through Helena’s account. Is Hidden money is at the root of this whole mess? Bette is so afraid of loosing Tina and it is beginning to show. I am still wondering what Kit did to make Bette so angry with her. Remind me to never get Shane pissed off at me. Alice and Dana are just so cute. I remember the strap on conversation that A&D shared in the show.
Well, well, well . . . long time no read . . . LMFAO!!! Anyways, I’m lovin’ my sharmen gurls, please continue and soon!!! LYLAS ;-p
ok al and dana r hotttttttttttt, funny you have to have a happy b&t now please longer
alright… i started reading this a little “iffy”. but the storylines are absolutelty magnificent. now im left here clinging to my keyboard waiting for the next. thank you for the wonderful read and dont worry you have another loyal reader.
Don’t tell me Alice is related to that idiot Mark. Great chap.