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Apogée 16
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“Do you mind? I know you have a key but I haven’t had the chance to use mine and it’s kind of a big deal for me.” Alice said shyly, Dana had surprised her with the key last week, but every time the writer was in a position to use it the agent always beat her to the door. Dana reached her hand in front of Alice bowing slightly in a theatrical motion to go ahead, the writer stood at the door key ready.
“Okay this is the first time I’ve ever been given the key to anyone’s house or apartment so this is a special moment for me…” Alice pushed the key in the lock and turned the knob slowly. The door remained locked, and as the writer began struggling Dana couldn’t help but chuckle, moving to help Alice.
“Maybe you need to jiggle it like this,” Dana punctuated her statement by playing with the doorknob, wiggling the keys and pushing helplessly on the door. The agent finally gave up leaving Alice to struggle again,
“You know I should take this as a bad sign, you giving me a key to your place then changing the locks.” Alice smirked as she pulled on the door one last time; Dana finally pulled out her key and easily opened the door to the house.
“Well at least we found out it doesn’t work now, I would hate to come home to you sitting on my doorstep like some doorbell baby.” Dana quipped walking into the house and sitting on the couch,
“So how much time do we have until we do this thing?” Dana asked as the writer disappeared in the large house, the agent taking the time to relax. Alice yelled from a back room,
“Um…the club opens around ten so we should probably go around twelve.” Alice appeared in the living room in a short black leather skirt and a very revealing pink top. The writer strut into the room in her high heels pumps and struck a pose, while the agent stared wide-eyed and gawking. Dana sat forward spreading her legs so Alice could stand between them, the agent had to crane her neck to see the writer’s face. Alice smiled,
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Gosh, I don’t want Bette to lose Tina. Totally love Dana and Alice in this fic.
uh oh…dont let anything happen to dana! or alice…ahhh!!! post more SOON pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeee! i feel like a little child begging for candy, but your stories are just that good!
Hope Bette not lose Tina. Oh please don’t let anything happen Alice or Dana. OK post soon please, thanks!
I would just like to say thank you so much for the Danish scene! And, oh, I hope nothing happens to Dana although I think she can kick Mark or Gomey’s ass, but that’s just my opinion. I love your stories and I hope you update again soon:)
Great Update as always CD! Fucking hot scene w/ Dana/Alice…you know I’m a sucker for those two. I also really like Shanes backstory. So anyways, hopefully Dana will be ok. I agree with Geeky that she could kick the shit out of them any day. Great post! Keep it up!
Yes I’m just hating Dunne officially now. I can be slow sometimes…I tend to give people the benefit of the doubt. But I was so wrong, all the signs were there…Dunne is an asshole. I know it now. :) Alice said ‘I love you’ back to Dana, yay! Yep, Danish is still going strong (for now)! :D Again, I liked Shane’s memories of Nikki. They seem to be innocent. Who did Shane ask to get these bags from Kit’s office? Do we know them? I looked at the chart but I couldn’t figure out who it would be (I could mention some names, but they wouldn’t make any sense…). Kit has a problem…Shane wouldn’t get out of her hiding spot because she already has got what she can’t live without…right? And why is Shane in a hurry? Is it out of habit not to stay too long at one spot or is it something else? And if Josh would check out Donuts Catering it will lead to someone, wouldn’t it (I have an idea)? Or am I just wasting my energy on the wrong clues…? You really need me to teach me the skill to project my desires onto my environment. It would make my work environment a whole lot more attractive. :P Nice pics! I would like to jump in that water (is it a lake?) right now, it’s still very hot here (it’s over 90F!).
I loved this update! Excellent job! The Danish scene was my favorite…of course. Very hot. There’s so much going on and I love all of it. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait for more!
Your story will never get boring, sugar… you always have many directions to go and your ideas are always fresh. Dana gives Alice a key, what a big step… too bad it doesn’t work, lol. You write the sex scenes like a pro… does your girlfriend inspire all of them? lol You would write something for me if I asked nicely… this is me asking nicely, Please Closet Dana. Sounds like Bette and Kit have some serious sister issues they need to work out. I love the story about Shane beating the guy to death with the rifle, lol. So why is Carmen wanting to train? And what is Helena’s connection to any of this? Gomey and Mark… what a couple of morons, lol. Who’s the dark-haired woman… Dana? Leaving me hanging? Not cool, lol Hmmm guess I’ll just sit here waiting for you… but I must warn you I’m not very patient, just ask my girlfriend.
It’s about damn time you came back to me!!!! LoL…This is a great chapter!! I love Dana and Alice as always, they’re so great together, but how does Mark know Alice?? I can’t wait for the next chapter!! What does Kit have of Shane? I wonder if it’s NIKKI!!! But I won’t find out until I read the next chapter!!! Thanks again!!!
Ugh…you’re driving me crazy :). Why was Bette in prison? What happened between her and Kit? What does Kit have that Shane can’t live without? What’s in the green bag? Is Alice okay? AND you give us links to your vacation pictures (beautiful btw) and you aren’t in any of them. I think you like to tease us. I love this story and even tho’ B&T aren’t your favorite, you write them very well (well, when you include them–lol). Thank you for posting CD. I will continue to read until you have revealed all the mysteries :).
Great chapter ClosetDana, I really can’t wait to read what happens next..5 stars
Woh, Alice and Dana were Hot,Hot,Hot..A cold shower desperately needed, Hmm! Hope they gonna be ok tho? Theres so much goin on in this chapter, i had to read it twice so it would all sink in, lmao. So much anticipation for the next chapter, its drivin me crazy.. Noooo. Pleeeese post soon. Thanks.
Why do I have the feeling that Carmen will be the only one alive at the end? Still hoping for happy TiBette regardless of the outcome. ;)
WOW, that was just awesome, as always!! Very good chapter, I really enjoyed reading it! Especially liked the Shane/Carmen (and the Shane/Nikki) scenes, and actually all other scenes as well ;) Please update soon, wanna read more of my favorite story!! I`m so curious ;) Oh, by the way, those pictures are quite nice! Where did you take them?
I wonder if you are going to find that Marcus was laundring Bette’s stolen money through Helena’s account. Is Hidden money is at the root of this whole mess? Bette is so afraid of loosing Tina and it is beginning to show. I am still wondering what Kit did to make Bette so angry with her. Remind me to never get Shane pissed off at me. Alice and Dana are just so cute. I remember the strap on conversation that A&D shared in the show.
Well, well, well . . . long time no read . . . LMFAO!!! Anyways, I’m lovin’ my sharmen gurls, please continue and soon!!! LYLAS ;-p
ok al and dana r hotttttttttttt, funny you have to have a happy b&t now please longer
alright… i started reading this a little “iffy”. but the storylines are absolutelty magnificent. now im left here clinging to my keyboard waiting for the next. thank you for the wonderful read and dont worry you have another loyal reader.
Don’t tell me Alice is related to that idiot Mark. Great chap.