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Apogée 17
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No more than a minute into the writers search, the window began opening quickly. Alice grabbed the files, flicked off her flashlight and ducked down against the cabinet, holding her breath until she could feel and hear her heart beating painfully in her chest. The writer swung her head around the corner slowly trying to catch a glimpse of the dark figure’s face. Alice noticed him fishing through the papers on the desk and wondered how he could see anything, the room was pitch black, the writer could barely see her own hand in front of her face.
Alice watched intently as the dark figure fumbled through the drawers in the desk looking for something specific. The doorknob turned slowly and Alice was contemplating running and leaving this guy to handle whoever was coming through the door. The door opened and the dark figure jumped behind the desk, the writer moving a little further from the cabinet into the shadows. Alice realized she still had two or three feet until she was completely unnoticeable and the writer was looking for her opening to move away from being caught, any chance she could get. Alice wasn’t sure what these guys were capable of, and as the first robber began whispering quite loudly, slapping the other on the head, the writer decided this was her chance.
In a few moments, they would discover the cabinet and if they flashed the light over this side of the room she would the first thing they saw. Alice moved silently to the other side of the room near the door, but as she moved her weight from off of the steel cabinet a large popping sound resonated through the room, gaining the robbers attention and giving the writer a near heart attack. One of the robbers said flashing his light where Alice was standing,
“What was that?”
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Dana relaxed at the bar watching the hallway where Alice had disappeared, the agent had her doubts about this little “rogue mission” but the writer hadn’t been wrong yet and Dana could pull something out of her ass if something went terribly wrong. The agent noticed Kit from the corner of her eye and thought the club owner looked familiar.
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Dammit what happened to Dana?! I need to know! lol awesome chapter, post again soon and next time don’t be such a tease ClosetDana! -x-
Haning in there with u. I know it’s “sick” of me to want Bette and Tina to be together after what Bette did, but I really want them to end up “together”. Yea, is Dana and Alice okay?
Well your girlfriend must be something else if you can write such great sex scenes. I bet you have your hands full with her, lol. She must be pretty lucky to have you. So what happened to Dana… hmmm? You really freaked me out with Bette’s dream… I really thought that Tina shot her, lol. I like the background that you’re giving on Shane… it’s always nice to know more about the characters. This story just keeps getting more intriguing…. I can tell your creative juices are flowing. So I can’t wait to find out if the agent is going to tell Tina anything about her last woman… or will Bette stop the conversation, hmmm. Now I have to wait again… damn. At least you post sooner then I do. I’d be honored if you dedicated the next chapter for me, even though I know the sex scenes are for your girlfriend… I’ll just pretend they are for me, lol. You’ve got such a good story here… I hope you keep the edge and your inspiration. You are the best, sugar! I’ll be anxiously waiting for you and the next chapter. Hugs and Kisses!
nice update man longe they can never be long enough
I think this story is great. I can totally see Bette as a master criminal..being brilliant, beautiful and BAD…it could so be her, and is so hot!!! You had me going to though cos I thought Tina shot her for real. Shane is well cast as hitman and Mark and Gomey as a couple of blundering wannabes. Jenny as an agent?? Sorry, can’t see that!! Please post soon and give a hint as to what Bette has in her holds..what is her crime of choice? gunrunner, drug dealer, stolen goods..bootleg copies of Flashdance??
I have been waiting so long for this story… this is one of the best at the moment. And the tension! ooh~ What happened to Dana and Alice~ I can’t wait for the next chap. Thanks for the great update.
Love this story esp. B/T! Good comic scenes too with M/G and D/A. Almost had me with the bette confession, but then Bobby Ewing jumped out of the shower. Thanks for writing!
Hey babe! Sorry I didnt get to a chance to comment on your previous chapter before you posted this one, but I loved that one! And I loved this one even more! I hate cliffies, but I’m so used to watching shows like Alias and 24, that when it comes to this story, a little cliffy is nice! But don’t do it too often! Great job on all the characters! Your writing really impresses me with every new chapter! I’m happy that you have a new girlfriend, and even happier that it’s inspiring you! Can’t wait to see what happens! Love ya babe!
When Tina shot Bette I was thinking, “How the hell is this slightly better than what I was thinking?” LMAO You shouldn’t joke and tease. You might get a thumb jab in the ribs from me. =p
Oh dammit I almost forgot. I laughed when Bette said “ding dong.” That’s so 2nd grade. lol
Whoa!! I can’t wait to see what happens between Bette, Tina and agent Copeland..What happened to Bette’s interest? As for Shane and Carmen, is Shane falling for her or is she trying to get rid of her? Dana and Alice as always: AMAZING!!! I hope that they don’t get caught by Kit…As Always, great chapter!!! PLEASE POST SOON!!!!
Wow, I was glad to see that you posted so soon, but I’m still trying to wait patiently to see what happens to Alice and Dana. I’m also not much of a B/T fan, but this story has got me hooked to find out what happens to them next! So, please post more soon:)Loved it!
uh oh my dana! damn these cliff hangers! must i beg? ah well…i wonder what bette did…i almost feel sorry for her, but in this fic, shes not a very good person! i look foward to your next update. (notice house i didnt beg? im gettting better i think!)
Damn! Bette is in some deep shit. She better give Tina a quick explanation before the feds give their version. Is Kit holding Nikki hostage? & Shane knows this thats one of the reasons why Shane won’t let Carmen get close to her? Luv how everything is unfolding. Great update.
I hate being left in suspense … but I love this fic … so I forgive.
This is getting more excited !!!!!!!
My mouth dropped open when Bette told Tina she had Marcus killed, I gasped when Tina admitted she already knew, I thought ‘WTF?’ when Tina shot Bette, and then breathed a huge sigh of relief when it was all a dream. Its a testament to your writing that you can evoke such emotions in people. Wonderful chapter. Can’t wait to see how you get Alice, Dana, Bette, and Tina put of their respective messes. Thanks for posting.
Super sweet sweetness . . . lovin’ how Shane’s story is unfoldin’ . . . slowly, but surely. Anyways, post soon and keep it up!!! Like always LYLAS ;-p
Thank you for another great chapter.I hope there is a lot more chapters to come. =)
Omg.. whats happened to Dana..and wheres Alice? Not looking good for them both is it.. or are you just teasing us closetDana? hmmm. Another cliffhanger to deal with! but it was a great chapter so i will let you off lol. Post soon. Thanks.
Damn Bette keeps getting into hot water. Those two dick heads can not seem to figure out how to do anything except for hitting people upside their head. I hope that both Dana and Alice are okay. So Ivan saves the day without even knowing it. I liked the flash backs of Shane’s life. Maybe Bette should come clean but hopefully the ending will be different than her dreams. What exactly did happen to her last lady friend?
I’m glad I’m not wasting my time on the wrong clues. :) I thought the bags were from Kit’s office. Shane then still needs what Kit can give her. Will she be lurking around Kit’s office in the near future? Right now it’s already a bit crowded there. :D Dana was what??? She was…feeling dizzy, but with the last strengt in her she hit a person really hard, before she fell to the floor…?! :D What (or actually who) will Kit find when she arrives to her office? Are Mark and Gomey already gone? Will Alice be able to hide herself a little bit longer? Bette’s nightmare may have ended, but in real life a nightmare seems to be starting for her! Bette needs to do a bit of explaining to Tina, a little bit earlier then she anticipated herself. And something tells me Shane and Carmen won’t be getting up in time to practice. :P
Hi, this is the first time I’m reading this story, read all the chapters up until now. I must say, I’m very intrigued and anxious for more. For the record, I’m a Shane-fan, and secondly a Sharmener. Keep up the good work and update soon!
You are amaziing, this is such an awesome story. It`s my favorite – you know that already, but I can`t say it enough ;) Liked the Shane scenes, as always. Can`t wait what is gonna happen next, wanna know where this Nikki thing is going. So please post soon!
good as always!!