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    Apogée 18

    Story written on July 25, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61834
    Author Notes:

    The break in goes further south, Tina is so uncomfortable, Bette is struggling to keep those skeletons in the closet, Shane’s making a kiss or kill decision

    Ok guys here is the new chapter, I’ve been on cloud nine recently so writing has been getting much easier. This chapter is dedicated to brteyes who always takes the time to comment with impeccable detail and loving care. If I didn’t already have a girlfriend I was in love with it would be you love, (and I hope my girl doesn’t take offense to that.) To everyone else lol thanks so much for reading and the positive comments.

    Much love,

    ClosetDana 

     

     

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        …She was falling, Dana’s shoulder was pushed backwards hard, and the agent had to take the fall to prevent a serious injury. Dana rolled smoothly from the ground to a crouching position, the agent tried to get a good look at the guy who pushed her but she only spotted the back of his head as he ran.

        Dana’s arms burned from the sudden stretch and the contact with the floor, she moved to follow the guy that pushed her but shifted her concern to Alice. Dana was afraid that something had happened to the writer and knew that if something went wrong she would never be able to forgive herself.

        Dana heard more movement in the office and turned the corner slowly, peering toward the desk were she originally thought she saw Alice. Just as her body turned the corner Mark’s fist connected cleanly with the agent’s right eye.

        Dana’s body jerked with the sudden contact but her reflexes kept the agent moving and Dana had decided she’d had enough mystery abuse.  The agent’s eyes adjusted quickly to the darkness and as the assailant wound up to throw another punch Dana smiled to herself. She grabbed the Mark’s left hand and twisted hard, hearing at least two bones break. He yelped loudly, his hand curling awkwardly as Dana drew back and stuck him across the cheek so hard that sent him tumbling to the desk nearby. 

        Mark slid out of consciousness as he tumbled to the ground, pulling a lamp and other items on the desk crashing onto the floor with him. Dana flexed her hand painfully, her knuckles throbbing from the extremely sudden contact. The agent turned around, looking for Alice quickly, becoming more concerned. Dana looked behind the door finding the writer knocked out clutching a file in her hands. She propped Alice up against the wall, moving the hair from the writer’s face.

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    2. uh oh! i seem to be saying that alot when it comes to this story! drama drama drama, cliff hanger cliff hanger cliff hanger! and i cant say im complaining yet! now i dont feel so bad about bette being with tina because it seems she has a dark past we have yet to discover! im sure you’ll show us the light though, wont you? amazing update as always!

    4. Go, Dana! She totally hauled off and knocked Mark into next week. I wonder what deal with Marcus’ books is and if Tina really knows anything about them. Josh needs to die. Bette can off him and look like a hero because no one messes with Bette’s woman.

    8. Argh… I don’t believe you! how could you not finish what you started with the Shane and Carmen scene before cutting to the next. Or at least come back to it after the flashback… You are a tease. And who says I didn’t wait long. Any day I wait is a day longer in hell since I check in 3 times a day just for your story. Thanks for the fix for this addicted girl. Great Update!

    9. We’ve been totally sucked in by this Tina! She was the power behind Marcus’ throne all along, and then some. (Am I right?) If so, you have only touched the Tibette iceberg! A worthy adversary or a worthy partner? Which will it be? Thanks for writing?P.S. Jennifer Lopez and John Travolta? What would Miss Ellie say?

    10. Thanks for the dedication sugar… I’m honored and loving your attention. I hope that doesn’t get me in trouble with your woman. No sex scenes…. not even one for your brteyes? aww.. thats not fair. Uh oh Dana with a black eye, lol… thats not going to be pretty. Glad both Alice and Dana made it out alright. I’m surprised the comment about Bette’s other woman remained a secret after how your last chapter ended. Poor Alice getting pushed out the window…. and by Dana no less, lol. I like the Shane/Carmen chemistry… it’s seems so forbidden, lol. I like how you change gears.. going back in time with Nikki. Damn… this Josh sounds like a real sleeze ball… watch out Tina. I loved this latest chapter. Hey, it sounds like I have a chance here… if your girlfriend ever changes her mind.. do I have a chance? Hmmm… hope I don’t get in trouble here… better go. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter… and your answer.

    11. What the hell is up with this Joshua guy? Anyways, I’m loving Shane and Carmen as always..Danish, just wonderful and a lil’ bit of comical relief. But why the fuck was “Agent” Dunne following them for? I just hope that goes smoothly with Bette at the mansion..POST SOON!!!

    12. Lol, I’ll admit it, I’m cheating. But that doesn’t mean I can’t keep guessing…I’m still clueless on lots of parts of this story. :D I knew it, Dana can kick some ass, yay! And Dunne came to their rescue?! ;) It made me laugh that the door was the reason that Alice was knocked out…it’s just so adorable. ;) She didn’t even get to see Dana in action. :P Only Bette can stay cool and collected (at least for others) when her world is falling apart. Still loving Nikki/Shane (even more so than Sharmen…but then again, I like your Sharmen much more than on the show). Erm…was Josh suggesting what I was thinking or are we talking about a real deal here? Talk to you later!

    13. Great update. I loved it…as usual. Dana beating the crap out of people rocks. Totally hot! Now that Dana has a black eye and Alcie has a bump on her head they both need a little TLC. Maybe a little doctor play is in order? I hope that Alice was able to get what she needed in that file. I’m personally in favor of the good guys in this fic. Imagine that! I’m on the Danish side! Who would have thought? Keep up the great writing. I’m enjoying the other storylines too. I can’t wait for more.

    14. Yes! Awesome update. Shane should just let Carmen into her heart! I can’t help but find Kit also very funny as to the role she’s playing in this story. I can just she her getting all worked up and the faces she has with that lol!

    15. Okay just what is Tina into that she too has secrets? This is getting really good with all that is going on. All these couples together but not together. Hopefully what ever is hidden in both Bette’s and Tina’s background will not hinder their new relationship. I hope that Dunn gets his ass kicked and it would cool if Dana or Alice is the one to knock him down a notch or two. Post when you can.

    18. Yay! I just turned on my computer for the first time in a while and the first thing I did was read this update. (I’m glad that I did, too.)I don’t really skip over sections, but damn it, sometimes I just have faves:)Anyways,I can’t wait to find out what happens next, so please post soon!

    19. Ok, I know you are probably tired of hearing this, but I loved this chapter, yet again. You’re writing is so dead on, even though the characters are different from the way they are in the show. This is an excellent story, and it’s a great mix of Danish, TiBette, and Sharmen (even though I dont like the latter two, you even have me interested in what happens to them!) Please post again soon! I’ll be waiting impatiently. Oh, and I would love to read your Alias fics! I loved Alias!

    21. So I read your entire story all the way through as I was getting a bit lost trying to piece it all together bit by bit and I have to say, well done. You’ve done a truly remarkable job and it’s turning out to be a great story.

    23. Me thinks Tina has been a bad girl…or..not..LoL great as always keep it up, highlight of my day really, something about ready a great story after getting teeth pulled makes me smile…LoL

    24. Wow! I have to say with every update this story gets just better and better! Did I mention that this is my favorite story before?? Well, yeah, I think I can remember me telling you that for about 20 times… but I just can`t say it enough! ;) You`re so good and this is such an awesome story! Liked the Sharmen scenes, as always (and, of course, the Shane/Nikki ones)! Please continue soon… ;)

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