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Apogée 17
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“You’ll rarely get into a fight where you don’t get hit, and I’m sure in your lifetime you’ll get your ass kicked…more than once. If you can’t take a punch you’ll always be afraid of it, today was about breeding the fear out of you, that way when I swing…” The petite threw a punch directly across Shane’s head protector; the teen’s jaw feeling like it was breaking into a million pieces. Shane groaned a bit turning back to look into her instructor’s eyes.
“…You won’t run…sometimes you have to take a beating to win the fight.”
The petite had to admire the teen’s fire, Shane had taken a hell of a beating and it seemed as if the teen was ready for more. The petite held out a card with a number scribbled on it,
“Call this number and ask for Krystal, that’s me, we’ll set up a regular time to train.” Krystal said, putting her hand under Shane’s chin to inspect the damage.
“You’ll be ok,” the petite said and Shane nodded as Krystal walked out of the empty gym, her face still throbbing.
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Bette arrived at the hold five minutes earlier than she planned, the brunette swung her car up to the gate in front of the two government vehicles that were parked and ready out side of the heavy chain fence.
“Can I help you?” Bette asked tensely as a young man stepped forward revealing his badge,
“Yes I’m Agent Roberts, I’m here to do a warranted search of your holds,” The young agent explained handing Bette the warrant. The brunette inspected it quickly, moving in front of Agent Roberts as he attempted to proceed.
“This warrant Agent Roberts, gives you clearance to search my properties. These holds are property of Porter Global Trade, which is in Kit Porter’s name not mine. You’re not authorized to be here and I think that you know that as well, do not come back here again Agent Roberts.” Bette said simply, she had a different speech in her head but she really didn’t have the energy to chew him out at that moment.
Her nightmare was still fresh in her mind and the last thing she needed was more stress on top of the mounting problems she already had to solve. Agent Roberts still looked a little wounded, despite the brunette’s sympathetic restraint. The young agent smirked,
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Dammit what happened to Dana?! I need to know! lol awesome chapter, post again soon and next time don’t be such a tease ClosetDana! -x-
Haning in there with u. I know it’s “sick” of me to want Bette and Tina to be together after what Bette did, but I really want them to end up “together”. Yea, is Dana and Alice okay?
Well your girlfriend must be something else if you can write such great sex scenes. I bet you have your hands full with her, lol. She must be pretty lucky to have you. So what happened to Dana… hmmm? You really freaked me out with Bette’s dream… I really thought that Tina shot her, lol. I like the background that you’re giving on Shane… it’s always nice to know more about the characters. This story just keeps getting more intriguing…. I can tell your creative juices are flowing. So I can’t wait to find out if the agent is going to tell Tina anything about her last woman… or will Bette stop the conversation, hmmm. Now I have to wait again… damn. At least you post sooner then I do. I’d be honored if you dedicated the next chapter for me, even though I know the sex scenes are for your girlfriend… I’ll just pretend they are for me, lol. You’ve got such a good story here… I hope you keep the edge and your inspiration. You are the best, sugar! I’ll be anxiously waiting for you and the next chapter. Hugs and Kisses!
nice update man longe they can never be long enough
I think this story is great. I can totally see Bette as a master criminal..being brilliant, beautiful and BAD…it could so be her, and is so hot!!! You had me going to though cos I thought Tina shot her for real. Shane is well cast as hitman and Mark and Gomey as a couple of blundering wannabes. Jenny as an agent?? Sorry, can’t see that!! Please post soon and give a hint as to what Bette has in her holds..what is her crime of choice? gunrunner, drug dealer, stolen goods..bootleg copies of Flashdance??
I have been waiting so long for this story… this is one of the best at the moment. And the tension! ooh~ What happened to Dana and Alice~ I can’t wait for the next chap. Thanks for the great update.
Love this story esp. B/T! Good comic scenes too with M/G and D/A. Almost had me with the bette confession, but then Bobby Ewing jumped out of the shower. Thanks for writing!
Hey babe! Sorry I didnt get to a chance to comment on your previous chapter before you posted this one, but I loved that one! And I loved this one even more! I hate cliffies, but I’m so used to watching shows like Alias and 24, that when it comes to this story, a little cliffy is nice! But don’t do it too often! Great job on all the characters! Your writing really impresses me with every new chapter! I’m happy that you have a new girlfriend, and even happier that it’s inspiring you! Can’t wait to see what happens! Love ya babe!
When Tina shot Bette I was thinking, “How the hell is this slightly better than what I was thinking?” LMAO You shouldn’t joke and tease. You might get a thumb jab in the ribs from me. =p
Oh dammit I almost forgot. I laughed when Bette said “ding dong.” That’s so 2nd grade. lol
Whoa!! I can’t wait to see what happens between Bette, Tina and agent Copeland..What happened to Bette’s interest? As for Shane and Carmen, is Shane falling for her or is she trying to get rid of her? Dana and Alice as always: AMAZING!!! I hope that they don’t get caught by Kit…As Always, great chapter!!! PLEASE POST SOON!!!!
Wow, I was glad to see that you posted so soon, but I’m still trying to wait patiently to see what happens to Alice and Dana. I’m also not much of a B/T fan, but this story has got me hooked to find out what happens to them next! So, please post more soon:)Loved it!
uh oh my dana! damn these cliff hangers! must i beg? ah well…i wonder what bette did…i almost feel sorry for her, but in this fic, shes not a very good person! i look foward to your next update. (notice house i didnt beg? im gettting better i think!)
Damn! Bette is in some deep shit. She better give Tina a quick explanation before the feds give their version. Is Kit holding Nikki hostage? & Shane knows this thats one of the reasons why Shane won’t let Carmen get close to her? Luv how everything is unfolding. Great update.
I hate being left in suspense … but I love this fic … so I forgive.
This is getting more excited !!!!!!!
My mouth dropped open when Bette told Tina she had Marcus killed, I gasped when Tina admitted she already knew, I thought ‘WTF?’ when Tina shot Bette, and then breathed a huge sigh of relief when it was all a dream. Its a testament to your writing that you can evoke such emotions in people. Wonderful chapter. Can’t wait to see how you get Alice, Dana, Bette, and Tina put of their respective messes. Thanks for posting.
Super sweet sweetness . . . lovin’ how Shane’s story is unfoldin’ . . . slowly, but surely. Anyways, post soon and keep it up!!! Like always LYLAS ;-p
Thank you for another great chapter.I hope there is a lot more chapters to come. =)
Omg.. whats happened to Dana..and wheres Alice? Not looking good for them both is it.. or are you just teasing us closetDana? hmmm. Another cliffhanger to deal with! but it was a great chapter so i will let you off lol. Post soon. Thanks.
Damn Bette keeps getting into hot water. Those two dick heads can not seem to figure out how to do anything except for hitting people upside their head. I hope that both Dana and Alice are okay. So Ivan saves the day without even knowing it. I liked the flash backs of Shane’s life. Maybe Bette should come clean but hopefully the ending will be different than her dreams. What exactly did happen to her last lady friend?
I’m glad I’m not wasting my time on the wrong clues. :) I thought the bags were from Kit’s office. Shane then still needs what Kit can give her. Will she be lurking around Kit’s office in the near future? Right now it’s already a bit crowded there. :D Dana was what??? She was…feeling dizzy, but with the last strengt in her she hit a person really hard, before she fell to the floor…?! :D What (or actually who) will Kit find when she arrives to her office? Are Mark and Gomey already gone? Will Alice be able to hide herself a little bit longer? Bette’s nightmare may have ended, but in real life a nightmare seems to be starting for her! Bette needs to do a bit of explaining to Tina, a little bit earlier then she anticipated herself. And something tells me Shane and Carmen won’t be getting up in time to practice. :P
Hi, this is the first time I’m reading this story, read all the chapters up until now. I must say, I’m very intrigued and anxious for more. For the record, I’m a Shane-fan, and secondly a Sharmener. Keep up the good work and update soon!
You are amaziing, this is such an awesome story. It`s my favorite – you know that already, but I can`t say it enough ;) Liked the Shane scenes, as always. Can`t wait what is gonna happen next, wanna know where this Nikki thing is going. So please post soon!
good as always!!