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Apogée 22
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“Not bad Shane… you missed though, that’s the most important part of this drill.” Crystal said still looking through the binoculars at the target on the next rooftop. Shane tried to slow her breathing,
“Why does it matter? I’m a pickpocket not a marksman or woman, whatever.” The teen said slowly,
Crystal looked at the sun that was slowly setting in front of her eyes.
“Kit wants you to be prepared for anything Shane, and trust me you want these skills if you’re going to have anything to do with the anyone in the Porter family tree.” Crystal said a little knowingly, Shane face twisted quickly.
“Wait, am I getting in over my head? Because I don’t need more shit on the pile I’ve got.” The teen said exhausted, Shane had been training everyday for eight hours or more and the teen wasn’t really sure why Kit was paying her for nothing. Crystal smiled and reached out her hand for Shane to take,
“You won’t be in over your head as long as I’m training you,” The trainer pulled Shane to her feet as they ran the drill over and over until the teen got it right.
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“Eleven-fifteen fuck!” Shane checked her watch then the clock in the gym praying to God that one of them was wrong. It had taken her four hours to complete the drill without complaints from Crystal and Nikki said she’d be waiting for the teen behind the orphanage at eleven.
Shane sprinted to her bike and made her way through town as fast as humanly possible, Nikki was already going to be pissed about Shane being so late the teen didn’t want it to be any worse than it already was.
The teen peeled around the last corner and sped down the last stretch of street to the home, it was only a few blocks and Shane could see the lights and hear the sirens as soon as she’d turned. There was a sick feeling in the teen’s stomach and her heart beat wildly, her head was telling her she was only being stupid but her heart was telling her something was wrong.
Red and blue light swept the brick buildings, and a crowd was already beginning to form. Shane pulled up along the street where a rather large and round cop stopped her from parking.
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I’m so glad you came back to this story. Hope your travels were fun. I nominate Sonny and Dunne to be next on the ht list :). Great chapter, thank you.
I have missed this story. Bette and Tina part was to short though. Leave them tell each other that they love each other. I am totally digging Shane history and is starting to hate the she is going to jail or get killed. Post soon.
well well well! FINALLLY someone got off their lazzzzy bum and posted 00Lword!! i kid lol but hooray i’ll excuse the dansih and the shortness cuz uve been a busy bee writer!lol nice job as always cant wait for the next chap which i know will be posted asap :P x0x
well ur back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more B & T and your fav words longer can u remeber that lol
I think you already know what an amazing writer you are… and an amazing woman. I’ll always have time to read your stories… your words bring life to all your characters. I must admit though I’m a little more then happy to hear of Jenny’s death… one less carnival freak, lol. I’m sad at the lack of Alice/Dana but I’ll get over it. It’s a good thing Carmen was the one making the chioce of which pen to use… not sure I’d make the right choice. You really have me hooked on this flashback of Shane and Nikki… was Sonny the one who attacked Nikki? I am so curious as to what will happen with all the characters and how it will all end…. or will there be a sequel? I hope you give me a little hint… after all you know a big secret about mine. I can’t wait for the next chapter. I love you, sugar.
It’s so great to see an update. I was really missing this fic. Not too much Danish in this update, but still a great job. I may be really, really over analyzing this, but…Alice seemed really suspicious. First she shows up behind Dana in the alley. Then she has blood on her, and she was the only other one, that I know of, that knew that Jenny woke up. Hmmm. Very interesting. Alice isn’t evil, is she? It’s not a big huge ploy, is it? I hope that I’m really wrong, and reading way too far into this. I guess I’ll have to wait and see, won’t I? Great job. It’s good to have you back in action…so to speak. I can’t wait for more.
Sonny did it and I hope that Shane kills the bastard. Someone took out Jenny and I do believe that Tina may have found her alibi.
Sooooooooooooooo…let me start off with a great big fatty mo, I hate you too :D So very much in fact…that as I read this in it’s magnificent entirity…I felt the distinct urge to yank my toe nails out, one by one, and put them on an alter of scrifice to the almighty ClozzyD…but then…I remember that you had very little Danish in it…and zero Danish lovin’…which means that I get to keep my toe nails….so until that happens…they stay where they are…anyways, this was fucking fantastic as always. It is rare that I find myself giving a shit about characters who’s names aren’t Dana and/or Alice, but you have done it my friend. The Shane story line is really cool babe. So great job as always. Can’t wait for the next and also, TLWOY needs an update…pretty please??? I love you and hate you at the same time…how does that even happen??? Oh well. Later butt head. The super hot hot hottie, poopular, whitty, who wouldn’t want to be me? 1/3 of suzieshitinthecloset….the new AlShaDane…And I’m spent!
Oops…ok damn it. How many times am I going to do that? Having two different pen names is apparently more then I can handle. LMAO. Sorry CD and people who are reading and slightly confused. lol. The comment above was from me and not all three of us crazy bitches….ok. that’s it. (_*_)…eat that CD
wow…great update. cant wait for another! keep it up
Kill Sonny! Nice to hear from yo uagain, I nealr forgot about this sotry, but I’m glad I didn’t amazing as always…
Really glad to see you writing again! I know B/T is not your favorite, but they’re mine, so hope you have some more stuff happening for them soon. Interesting back story on Shane. Someone I know (female)was just diagnosed with a blood disorder that sounds a lot like Shane’s. Something with “bran” in it. I know you mentioned this before, but is that what her condition is? Or something like that? Or just a secret? Welcome back and thanks for writing!
It’s about damn time you came back with this story!!! I was missing this story like crazy!!! LoL..I have a feeling that Sonny raped Nikki…Who the hell shot Jenny? How is Bette going to get out of this with the death of Josh? I guess I won’t find out until the next chapter…Thanks and PPS!!!
Good to see you back and this is good chapter. Sad for Shane. Let see some more of B&T. OK post soon please, thanks!
Thank you for updating… been waiting a long long time… Love you and love that update. You rock!
Great chapter ClosetDana.I hope Shane puts a cap in that dumb fuck! Sonny’s ass..
Definitely needing some more B&T. ;) Sonny most definitely hurt Nikki and I hope Shane finds him and…well you can fill in the blank. I’m having a really stupid moment, but what does the title mean? I looked up the word but forgot what it means since I don’t use it once a day or anything.