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“You can take my car,” Paul offered.
“It’s alright, I have my bike, is that alright with you?” Leo said looking at Tasha.
“I have a bike back home, let’s go,” Tasha said.
Leo and Tasha rushed out of the restaurant and quickly drove to Tina’s apartment. Leo ran after Tasha who bolted up the stairs, leaping over stairs at a time.
“Tina!” Tasha cried knocking on the door desperately.
The door swung open and a tear-ridden Tina opened the door panting, evidently she had been waiting by the door, and bolted when she heard Tasha. Kit, Alice, Shane, and Helena were crowding behind her looking at Tasha hopefully.
“Bette is alive,” Tasha smiled.
A loud cry was heard. It was a mixture of a sigh of relief and a desperate sob.
“Where is she!” Tina panted trying to run out the door.
“Hold Tina,” Tasha said pushing her back inside, “this young man found her and took her to the hospital.” Tasha paused, effectively quieting the room, “she’s in very critical condition.”
“Oh my God,” Tina sobbed, “where is she? I need to see her!”
“I will take you,” Leo said, “but I think you should sit down first, I need to tell you what happened.”
They all sat down, looking at Leo nervously. Tina at first refused out of sheer desperation, but Kit managed to convince her to sit.
“How is my sister?” Kit said.
“You’re her sister?” Leo said in surprise.
“Yeah, she didn’t mention me?” Kit said then dropped her tone in fear, “or she couldn’t?”
Leo gulped and said, “I’m Leo Parker, and I found Bette very severely injured on the bridge. She managed to get out of the car before it fell over. There was a lot of blood and she wasn’t breathing, so I did CPR and managed to get her breathing, then I rushed her to the hospital. She was immediately taken to the ICU.”
“Please,” Tina begged, “how is she?”
Leo hesitated and said, “her minor injuries are a dislocated shoulder and a scar on the side of her head.”
“Those are the minor ones?” Helena said.
“Oh my God,” Tina cried hugging Kit.
“Please, Leo, tell us. It doesn’t matter how bad it is, we need to know the truth,” Kit sobbed.
“She had severe head trauma, and she has lost the majority of her memories,” Leo said.
Another sorrowful cry filled the room.
“But, she does remember you,” Leo said pointing at Tina, whom he recognized from her physical appearance, “you’re Tina right?”
“Yes!” Tina jumped up, “she remembers me?”
“Well,” Leo said looking at the various pictures on the wall indicating a long period of time, “not everything. She said she remembers meeting you and everything about you up until your seventh date, when she told you she loved you.”
“Oh my God,” Tina breathed her knees buckling.
“Tina!” Tasha cried catching Tina as she wobbled.
“Sit her down! Oh my God, are you okay?” Alice cried.
“Not you too please!” Shane sobbed.
Tina grabbed her head and said, “I’m fine. I’m fine. She forgot our whole lives together.”
“She forgot all of us,” Alice said, tears streaming down her face.
“Did she…” Kit trailed off to try to control her tears, “did she remember me?”
“No, I’m sorry,” Leo said, “she didn’t mention a sister.”
Kit broke into tears as Tasha rubbed her shoulders comfortingly.
“We have to go see her!” Shane said standing up.
“Maybe she’ll remember us once she sees us,” Alice cried.
“Wait,” Leo said sighing, “that’s not all.”
“That’s not all?” Helena said.
“Oh my God, what else!” Shane cried.
Leo took a deep breath then said, “she sustained heavy nerve damage. She’s paralyzed from the waist down.”
Tina let out a loud cry of distress as everyone else dropped their heads in tears.
“Shit,” Tasha said wiping away the tears she had been trying to hide, “there’s nothing they can do?”
“She agreed to an experimental surgery, and started it this morning,” Leo said, “I’m so sorry to have to tell you this, but there is a good chance Bette won’t make it.”
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Yes fate is a funny thing and urgh I feel so bad for Tina…I know you’re a TiBetter so I expect Bette to make it out of the surgery! Great chapter!
Thank you for writing your stories and posting them here. It’s nice to go here and read stories from writers old and new and it surely help to keep the site alive. :)
Okay, I’m sure you won’t let her die so that’s good. Tina should be with Bette like right now. PPVS (tomorrow)
Bette will survive……..right???????? And as right now…. I love Leo. Now, let’s get the ladies to the hospital. BTW, I am somewhat upset how they are concerned that Bette doesn’t remember them than if Bette is OK. Just sayin’.
I really like this story!!! I so can not wait to see where you to us. Great Chapter!!! Thank you PPS
Well it is, I, who is honoured to have a chapter dedicated to! :0) I may not always comment but rest assured that I read all your post as I am both astounded at the variety of your imagination as well as the speed at which you are able to write your many stories. Looks like your B&T will have to learn to date all over again and I am quite sure I will enjoy that, in fact I am sure I will even if it is silently! ;0) Keep up the good work and thank you for your very kind shoutout! Kx
Damn! Love the fate thing! Hope bette will go through insane struggle to walk again, If ever! For the live of drama;) tnx for posting and… Yep, PPS!
This is a very interesting read. Let Tina go to Bette and be her inspiration, I’m a little worried reading that B may not survive the surgery.
Oh shit this is so sad and please let Bette be ok, now let Tina and the gang come to see her. Please post more, thanks!
she remembers meeting you and everything about you up until your seventh date, when she told you she loved you.”… Did I forget to tell you that I love amnesia stories?… :-D
Smart girl yes, experience with the justice system, a natural born skeptic, a study of people, and experience with law enforcement for more than 20 yrs, you learn a lot. Can hardly wait to see what you do with this. As a TiBette(r) I just know you will let Bette live and get her memory back so that she can be with Tina and her family again. Great update. Thanks.
Really great update!Now.. Tina needs to go to her woman!!
It’s really weird, fate. What’s even more weird is that all of them are worried about Bette remembering them than if she’s ok. I know, maybe it’s shock, but that struck me. PPS
Wondeful update…can’t wait for the next update. thank you.
Girl, you are breaking my heart with this cliffy. PPS, very soon. Loved it.
Oh God, this is insanity! But Bette will make it, I know she will!
Hi Tibetter24, Many thanks for another great and intense chapter. Is was great that Leo was able to connect Bette to Tina and the gang so quickly. I think fate is lending a helping hand after the accident. Or perhaps it is just balancing things out; the ying and the yang. I hope Bette gets throught the surgery and then with Leo, Tina and family’s support learns to walk again. I get the sense that it will be a tough road however with love and care she will succeed. I can’t wait to read more so how you post real soon. One of the most enjpyable aspects of this adventure is the increase in tension. Just when things look brighter there is another setback. This is so true to life. I do adore this style of writing. Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.
Bette will survive-o.k.?!?Love your story,PPS
great chapter, please say bette makes it, i don’t like doing my sad face, its way to much effort! Love this!