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Archipelago
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“No I suppose it couldn’t be to easy for them, could it. They love you and want you to be happy and that’s all that really matters,” Alice lost in her train of thought. The glass to the booth was tapped and Alice broke from her daze. “Right then, caller you’re on the air.”
Bette hung up the phone as Tina came out of the kitchen. A large wooden spoon was hanging out of her hand as she shoved it towards Bette’s mouth. “Mmm, tasty,” she said as she licked the red sauce around the surface.
“No one make a better spaghetti sauce than me,” Tina smirked heading back into the kitchen. “Who was on the phone?” she called out behind her.
“Oh, that was Harold. He was just calling to check up on me, since I didn’t come in today,” Bette answered back. She placed the phone back on the charger and started walking into the kitchen where Tina was bent over a large pot of bubbling marinara.
“That was nice of him,” she said dipping her spoon back into the mixture.
“Yeah, he also wanted to make sure I was coming in tomorrow. He said he’s bringing a special guest with him and he wanted me to meet him,” Bette explained wrapping her arms around Tina’s waist. They rocked with each other as Tina stirred the sauce half-heartedly, her attention divided between her cooking and her lover’s lips.
Jenny packed her bag slowly, carefully folding her clothes and placing them as perfectly as she could on top of each other. She wasn’t really all that sure why she was doing it in this fashion until she remembered where she was going. Her mother was an obsessive cleaner and everything she touched had to be left in pristine condition. Jenny looked down at her suitcase with her clothes neatly arranged. Her family photos laying next to the suitcase were to be the last thing layed neatly on top of the pile.
“So, how long are you going to be gone for?” Shane asked walking over to her bed and plopping onto the matress. She looked distant and only partially showed interest in her departing room mate. The clothes shook but did not move as Jenny watched them carefully.
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Yay aussie ur back and i didnt have to wait!! Ok so now i have to read the story I’ll be right back.LOL
God, your good ! I can’t believe this is your first fic. You left us hanging with Shane/Carmen , I can’t wait to read the next one!! 5 stars!!!
great story,your one of the better fanfic writers i’ve came across, you seem to know the characters well. hope to read more soon
oh, and forgot to add, just a suggestion, and this is the only fault i could find, maybe leave a double space when you change scenes, i got a little confused
An Archipelago is a series of small islands surrounded by a huge body of water, luvs_the_l-word. I felt that information I gave were small islands surrounded by a bigger story.
RedFrog I shall put in Double Spaces next time since you believe it would allow the story to flow better. Thank you for the constructive criticism.
and i forgot to mention that your grammar was excellent!!
Okay so i lied, i wasn’t going to come right back but hey at least i came back to tell you how amazing this story is and just out of curiousity how did you come up with the title and what does it mean? i have a feeling that I will be asking that question over and over again. Can’t wait for your next installment please post soon!!!
i was reading it again (cuz i just cant get enough of ur stories) and i noticed something does the mysterious black book in the beginning have anything to do with the black book that jenny’s mom had? just another question and thanx for answering my other one i jus love ur titles!!