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Martha’s Rehabilitation Clinic
A fleet of grey flew across the lawn towards the little guest house that lay across the lawn. The girl checked over her shoulder as she entered through the door and closed it quickly behind her. “It’s about time,” said a voice from behind her. A lady in white pressed herself up against the wall of the shack. The girl closed her eyes and sighed.
“I was, detained,” she said and turned around. Thunder rumbled outside. “Besides it sounds like a storm is coming. Maybe I’d better go back,” the girl started making for the door.
“And maybe I could forget about being quiet,” said the lady in white. The girl felt her grip on the handle fall away. She turned around relunctantly.
“Then let’s get to it then,” she said and began to take off her shirt.
LA Modern Day
The phone rang persistantly and finally a sleepy hand bent over the end table to clutch the ringing menace. “Hello,” Tina said into the phone. Just then she heard a faint whimper followed by a slightly muffled crying. Great, she thought, Angelica’s awake.
“Hello, I’d like to talk to Ms. Porter if I may,” said the voice on the other end of the phone.
“Just a second,” Tina responded now a little more annoyed. “Babe, it’s for you,” she said handing the phone off to Bette and taking the baby she was nursing from her. Tina cuddled Angelica into her arms and started walking her around the room gradually bouncing her up and down as she went. Bette took the phone looking awkwardly at Tina and the baby mouthing “who is it” only to be answered by a shrug and Tina yawning as she motined toward the phone.
“Hello,” Bette spoke into the reciever.
“Ms. Porter?” the voice asked.
“Yes, who is this?” Bette asked looking over at the digital alarm clock now flashing 5:27 a.m. She yawned herself before sitting straight up in bed.
“Terribly sorry. This is Harold Carvington and please forgive the earliness of my call. I am in route to Los Angeles from new York now and I wanted to arrange a meeting with you for noon regarding the CAC.” the voice, now identified as Mr. Carvington, said.
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fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)