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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 10
"I love being inside you baby. So tight and sooo wet. Cum for me, sexy. Cum all over my fingers"
"Jesus! Oh God! Oh fffffuuuckkk"
Tina slammed her hips back into Bette’s one last time and felt the orgasm wash over her. She arched her back and cried out with her release as Bette rubbed her clit and kept her orgasm going. It felt like an eternity before Tina finally came down, collapsing against the mattress with a deep breath.
Bette feel beside her, spent and smiling as she admired the thin sheen of sweat covering her lover’s body. As Bette slowly regained her breathing, her eyes wandered down Tina’s tired body, frowning when she saw the red mark covering her lover’s thigh.
"Oh my God . . baby . ." Bette quickly got back to her knees and very lightly grazed her fingers over the tender spot. She knew it would soon form into a bruise, guilt instantly filling her body.
"Mmm?" Tina mumbled lazily with her eyes closed, her breathing beginning to slow along with her heart rate. She had never before experienced anything like that and even thought she was exhausted, she craved more.
"I’m so sorry, sweetheart" Bette whispered softly, guilt and sadness clear in her tone as she leaned down to place feather soft kisses on the area, "So, so sorry"
Confused, Tina turned onto her side and watched as Bette gently caressed her hip, a single tear falling onto the creamy flesh. Tina saw the reddened area and realized the reason for her lover’s tears, her heart broke at how remorseful Bette looked.
"Bette, baby it’s okay. I’m okay"
"No it’s not. How can you even say that? Look at your hip" Bette hated that she hurt Tina, hating herself for getting so carried away. Ava might have enjoyed their rough play but Tina obviously wasn’t used to it. Her body couldn’t handle the roughness, it was much too delicate. Bette should have known better, the regret was eating her alive.
"Sweetie, you didn’t hurt me" Tina heard the tone in Bette’s voice and knew she had to reassure the brunette before Bette ended up holding back from her. Bette had already been afraid to hurt her so Tina feared that Bette would never want to be rough with her again., ruining whatever progress they made. Tina couldn’t have that, she found that she loved wild passionate sex more than she enjoyed the tender lovemaking she had grown so accustomed to.
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(47 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
i love this story very mutch it’s so intense and amazing thank you!!!
I think this relationship is going to be very freeing for Bette and Tina both. Now, if they just get time to enjoy themselves without interference from outside parties… that will be impossible though, their careers don’t really allow them to live in a vacuum and the people in their lives probably won’t allow it either. The paparazzi have nothing on Alice Pieszecki anyway! ;P Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Excellent! I loved the pillow talk as it felt genuine and authentic and expressed honesty between then. It great that they can have honest and frank discussions regarding the many facets of the lives. If they keep that up they will go far. Thank you!
this chapter was amazing. and i liked the line “Their future arguments would be interesting ones that much was certain.” can’t wait.
I hope there’s no other outside interference. I am loving their journey.
I hope there’s no other outside interference. I am loving their journey.
loved it… dammm it was good….. can’t wait to see helenas face when she sees how happy tina is and looks… ava needs to get lost… and fast…pps
That was awesome and hot, love it. Please post more, thanks!
as always beautiful…. standing ovation :P
I love that you inspiration is still in the heights because that means that we going to ENJOY it very much,like in this chapter,so a BIG THANKS in advance!.I absolutely LOVE to see or read in this case, how Bette loses her head and she blinded with DESIRE to take Tina, to give it to her hard,and see how that also give a BIG pleasure to Bette, for me that is HOT as HELL.The concern of Bette and the SWEET TALK after sex, SHOWS the true and deep LOVE between them, that was VERY WELL WRITING and NICE to read!You REALLY have much IMPROVED the way of telling and writing your story! PPVS
Yeah good idea Betteto be each other’s “dirty” little secret. Is a good thing right now. :P
Can we send Helena ti Timbuctwo?
Beautiful, I adore this story, just as I have every other story you have written. You manage to write a wonderful Bette and Tina journey, different every time, but with the same passion. I can’t get enough :)
Only you can put sentimental and sexy in the same sentence. That could’ve been a tongue twister. Speaking of which, is Ava going to be an even bigger problem now that she’s a drunk? Will Sam try kick Bette’s butt? Awesome, sexy and beautiful. Thanks Miss Liah😘
Absolutely wonderful. It’s like a beautiful love story. I love this story. Thank you for writing it so amazingly.
I love your story.Thank you for another amazing update.PPS and please not too much drama.