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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 20
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"Hey, you okay?" Kit asked with concern as she placed her hand over one of Bette’s.
"I will be. I’ll explain later" Bette turned her head and gave Kit a soft smile when she saw the worried look on her sister’s face. She squeezed Kit’s hand in reassurance before looking back to the stage.
The host walked off stage and the crowd cheered even louder than before as the lighting on stage turned off. Big waves of fog floated over the glossy flooring of the stage and flickers of light went off here and there.
There were five large thin white walls lined up across the stage and with each flicker of light people could see silhouettes of women standing behind each wall. Tina’s song began playing as the lights flickered more frequently and the women began dancing sexily to the beat of the song.
The way the silhouette in the middle moved, Bette could easily tell it was Tina. Bette knew every curve of Tina’s body, she could spot it anywhere.
As the first set of lyrics began to spill out of the speakers, Bette held her breath. She watched the way Tina, still behind the wall, brought the microphone to her lips and played the role.
At the first hook of the song, the lights stopped flickering and remained steady, lighting up the entire stage. The walls were being lifted up and away from the stage, revealing Tina and her dancers all dressed in very sexy outfits.
Tina’s blue dress tightly clung to her body and it was cut up on her sides revealing small portions of her sexy, creamy skin. Her hair was wild and curly, framing her beautiful face that was sprinkled with glitter.
Tina danced on stage and kept up the act that she was singing, she didn’t miss a beat and little by little Bette began to relax. She never doubted Tina’s inability to pull it off, she just never really trusted technology.
As they reached the middle of Tina’s song, the music along with the lyrics began to skip and Bette’s heart dropped. Even from her seat, Bette could see the panic on Tina’s face as she struggled to play it off, not to make it seem obvious that the voice currently stuttering wasn’t hers.
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heart wrenching!! But fuck Bette you should have told her the truth. Than bitch Ava needs a smacking!!
Omg😭
DANG,
I want Ava to pay for the tricks she is playing.
The hart time is over.Great story.PPS
Freakin’ Ava…she needs a taste of her own medicine.
Well, the damage is done… things are out in the open now, except for Ava’s role in Tina’s performance going awry. Tina’s career can be resurrected/redeemed by a few strategic live performances, killer acoustic sets would dispel all the rumors about lip syncing. Bette could set that up and it’d be fine. As far as the broken promise, though… Bette is going to have to work a lot harder. She needs to stop being so impulsive and fully let go and trust Tina. She’s still hanging on to the bad remnants from her time with Ava and it’s not doing her relationship any favors. I think Tina can get past it all, though. She probably needs her own closure with Ava. She can forgive her and forget her. Tina will be better off without her rat of a cousin in her life anyway. Thanks for posting, Liah. :)
i really can’t believe tina went ahead with the lip sync. that was so disappointing cos i would have thought she was a lot smarter than that. she should have trusted bette to know that bette would know enough and that her woman would only mean good for her. I hope that tina’s singing career can be restored to pre-lip sync incident. As for the report on ava and bette, too bad bette. it’s just time to face the music. I thought Tina reassurance to bette was really thoughtful.
Oh shit thats sad
Okay let me say, I’m actually glad for once that my gf’s loud tuba-like snoring has kept me up bcuz i was able to read ur update. Ha! That was an awesome chapter! Bad Bette for keeping secrets.I know you won’t be splitting b&t up bcuz if you do… lady, I’ll be calling u ‘cray cray crazy!’. -_^ ill be keeping an eye on you! thanks for the update. Great writing n really enjoy this story.
Thanks for the update. Sad to see this story end, but that’s life. Ditto to the above comments. Hopefully Bette has learned a valuable lesson on trust and Tina can learn forgiveness. And, hopefully those men in white coats will find Ava and take her back to the looney bin. Awesome writing. Thanks for the story.
Great update. I know it is wrong to think of evil doings for people like ava but she needs a serious ass- kicking or career takedown however you choose to do it. I hope Tina just accidently runs into ava and let the little bitch brag about what she has done to Tina and when and that she will get Bette back. If that happens let Tina strike without thinking and beat her ass within an inch of her life and make her admit to what she has done, on purpose to sabotage Tina and Bette’s relationship. She is stupid enough to admit it to Tina when she thinks she has won. Gosh, please let someone find out the truth, most of all Tina. Thanks for posting.
all caught up… ava needs to go down… some one had to see her that night… some where there has to be a tape… and what about the two who were up there… that guy roger… he should be grilling them and finding out what went wrong… great story… will hate to see it end… i have a feeling sam may come through and tell every thing that ava planned to the media… can’t wait for more…
U hope someone saw the skank and busts her publical, turn abouts…
Read all your updates on this story. Oh My! What is not to love about this story. Can’t wait for the next update. thank you.
Dang! :-$ so the story is almost reaching the ending and then you-Liah… Left us with this heart breaking chapter ending.. full of cursing towards Ava and… Technology might fail Tina’s lipsync performance… But please let it captured all that bad deeds of Ava’s!! CCTV!? Argh… :-/ anyway thanks for the update Liah! PPVS?!? :-)