“Al never planned to stay over there permanently Dane, this is her home.”
Dana didn’t know where to take this conversation. On one hand she didn’t want to know anything about this, but on the other she had to know everything.
“So she’s here, but this other girl is over in Canada?” Dana said slowly, trying to work out some situation in her head which would end with her with Alice… it wasn’t working too well.
“It’s a guy Dane, Philip.” She wasn’t sure why, but knowing that Alice had fallen for a guy just made it so much worse. “And he is in Canada for the moment but…” Shane trailed off, not knowing whether she should tell Dana. Dana however had heard the ‘but’ and grabbed Shane’s shoulders, pulling her around so that they were face to face, just inches apart.
“But what Shane.”
“But he’s moving out here in two weeks,” Shane said quietly. “He’s moving in with Alice.” Dana then let go of Shane and sat still for a moment in shock, before running out of the house into the rain.
Dana arrived at Alice‘s apartment not ten minutes later. Her natural instinct to run had gotten the better of her at Shane’s, and she now stood knocking on Alice‘s door, drenched to the bone and shivering. She had no idea what she was going to say to Al, deep down she was just secretly hoping that Alice would take her in her arms and tell her it was all a misunderstanding. Somehow she doubted it though.
“Dana?” Al had opened the door to find a soaking wet Dana, and quickly hurried her inside, trying to find a blanket to dry her with. “What on earth have you been doing? Incase you didn’t realise it there is a huge storm going on outside, which is when a normal person would use a car to get around!”
“Why didn’t you say something about him to me yesterday Al?” Dana asked, completely oblivious to what Alice had been saying. “Didn’t you feel at all guilty letting me say all that stuff to you whilst keeping me in the dark about your new Canadian *****?” Dana hadn’t meant for her words to sound so harsh, so brutal, but the more she talked the angrier she got, until she was almost yelling. All her emotions from the past few months, which she had bottled up inside of her had suddenly burst out, and while one part of her mind was telling her she had no right to say these things, the other side didn’t give a *****.
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Lovely, love the way the story is going. The dialog was well done and you have got to post soon cause I really want to know what happens when Alice finds Dana.
I liked that Alice called Dana out. I was standing up on my chair, cheering her on. I think she’s going to buckle, but at least she had her moment. :-) Thanks for the update. I’m looking forward to seeing what happens at Dana’s house.
Totally addicted to this story. I was so happy to see another chapter so soon. Great job. Can’t wait to see what happens next….
more of the good story…*huge grin*
That had to be said, good Alice, now let Dana gain her pardon, with a lot of work ;P. Thanks.
something big is going to happens to one of them and I think that it might be bad pleas post soon this is great I love it
This is one of those “remember to breathe” stories: really, I think I held my breath all the way through reading it, so though I was disappointed it wasn’t longer, it’s probably just as well! Nice chapter, please post again soon.
poor Dana….but then again poor Alice…soo much pain btwn these two and you voice it soo well….post soon!!