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As I Sat Sadly By Her Side – 3
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Dana didn’t know what to do. Everything Al had said to her was right, she did lie to her, and when she asked for answers she gave none. She quickly walked out the door, mumbling a sorry as she left. The rain was heavy as she got outside, lightening and thunder filling the air, but somehow Dana was oblivious to it all, and started walking slowly back to Shane’s.
Alice watched Dana walk away through her window, despising and loving the woman at the same time. She remembered fully well what Dana had done to her, and she really wasn’t over hurting just yet. But Dana’s eyes had held nothing but sincerity and Alice knew, despite her better judgement that she was beginning to want Dana back.
Shane sat on her couch, watching old reruns of Saturday Night Live in an attempt to curb her boredom. Her pocket started vibrating and Shane took out her phone, noticing it was Alice who was calling her.
“Hey Al, what’s up?”
“Shane, I think Dana’s walking to your place now. Um, would you be able to take care of her tonight? We had a fight and I just don’t want her to be by herself.” Alice hated to impose on Shane at the last minute, but she had been sitting there for the last fifteen minutes with the worst possibly scenarios running through her head and was worried about Dana.
“Sure Al,” Shane replied as she walked out her front door to check whether Dana was anywhere in sight. She wasn’t. And neither was her Subaru. “***** her Subaru is gone. She mustn’t have wanted to speak to anyone.” Shane herself was beginning to get worried. She knew Dana, and she was one to ask for help when she needed it. “Do you want me to go around to her place?”
Al tossed up what she should do in her mind, deciding that she could probably comfort Dana more than Shane could.
“No, no it’s alright. I’ll go,” she sighed, realising how awkward this would get. “Thanks anyway Shane, I’ll ring you later for an update.”
“Ok Al, I’m here if you need me.” With that the two friends said goodbye, and Alice grabbed her keys and drove through the storm to Dana’s apartment.
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Lovely, love the way the story is going. The dialog was well done and you have got to post soon cause I really want to know what happens when Alice finds Dana.
I liked that Alice called Dana out. I was standing up on my chair, cheering her on. I think she’s going to buckle, but at least she had her moment. :-) Thanks for the update. I’m looking forward to seeing what happens at Dana’s house.
Totally addicted to this story. I was so happy to see another chapter so soon. Great job. Can’t wait to see what happens next….
more of the good story…*huge grin*
That had to be said, good Alice, now let Dana gain her pardon, with a lot of work ;P. Thanks.
something big is going to happens to one of them and I think that it might be bad pleas post soon this is great I love it
This is one of those “remember to breathe” stories: really, I think I held my breath all the way through reading it, so though I was disappointed it wasn’t longer, it’s probably just as well! Nice chapter, please post again soon.
poor Dana….but then again poor Alice…soo much pain btwn these two and you voice it soo well….post soon!!