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Ashes, ashes… Chapter 24
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“Say more about that,” Ronnie prompted.
“When I found out about her affair with Candace, I totally…lost it. And the way things ended, it was so messy and dramatic and with lots of loose ends,” Tina shrugged. “Maybe if we’d taken the time to calmly work through our issues, we could have had a much more amicable separation.”
“Which is exactly what you’ve started doing. Working through things together.”
“I know. After all of the chaos, once we finally started talking and being honest with each other, it was almost…straightforward.”
“No drama,” Ronnie smiled.
“No. Just… sad. And freeing.”
“Freeing. That’s an interesting choice of words.”
Tina chewed her lower lip, and for a moment she seemed to be lost in thought. But finally, she looked up to meet Ronnie’s intense, intelligent gaze. “There was always thishuge burden. Like, ‘You’re this perfect couple, why can’t you just make it work?’ And it’s freeing to finally understand that we couldn’t make it work because we didn’t work. It wasn’t that we didn’t try, or didn’t care about each other. We just we weren’t supposed to spend our lives together. Not as partners, any way.”
“But you plan to remain in touch? As friends?”
“We’re going to try. There’s so much history between us. And genuine caring. It would be a shame if we lost it all because there’s one piece that we can’t have.”
–
The sun was just starting to set as Tina maneuvered her car up the winding drive to
Her heart still ached with grief, and Angelica’s absence in her life felt like a chasm that would never be mended. But Tina knew that she was going to get through the hurt. And even though she couldn’t imagine it yet, she understood that there would come a time when she would feel whole again. Whole enough to share herself with someone else.
“
“In the kitchen, Darling,”
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So they’ve utterly put a fork in it? Forever and ever? You know, with somethings even if you put a stake in its heart, should the stake be removed it can rise again. OK, so maybe vampires aren’t the best analogy, but it’s all I’ve got.
WHAT? Ok..I guess I made some huge assumptions after the last chapters when things went so well for Bette and Tina. I thought they would be getting back together and now she tells Ronnie that they can’t and won’t be getting back together…WHAT? Uh…..
No no no no no… *stomps foot* and walks off in a huff. Wounded… absolutely wounded!
*chuckles* I think a few people missed the plot in the last post. I saw the comments then and thought wait did I read this incorrectly. I guess many want to see this couple together no matter what. But realisticly what happened in this story between them is worse than what happened between them in the show. I have said it already and I’ll say it again. The manner in which you develop these characters is exceptional.
I think that Helena will b good 4 Tina.
ha i like your Helena :P well no big surprise there..they need to move foward and go on with their lives. Post soon.
well, thanks a lot Ilene, you just broke my heart
I am wearing the biggest grin right now! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Thank you ffc.Please post soon!
You are an excellent writer but I am really sad they could somehow get back together.But it your story..I hope the show can somehow bring them together in the end..Post soon even if you are done with this story please write another..Thanks for all the time you take.
Ha….brilliant
It’s amazing to me how so many of us have taken the love of Bette and Tina, and have personalized that relationship, making it our own. So, when Tina tells Ronnie that she doesn’t want to spend her life with Bette, it feels (to me anyway) like any hope I had for a similar relationship is all but gone…and that feeling, like this story is heartbreaking….no matter how great your Helena is. Of course, all these feelings are here because of the incredible gift of your writing. Thank you…I think :)
WHAT!!! they were talking have they lost their god dam minds can’t be together WHAT!!!
Thank you.
I’ll always root for a Bette/Tina finale but the story you presented, it would have rang false if it happened. I loved the journey you took them on and while it may not be my happy ending, it was the right ending.
Obviously, as the author you have a right to end their relationship but I take it as a personal loss; as if I failed. I care so deeply about them and cannot accept them as not a couple. This is very disappointing and heartbreaking. And b/c you write so well, it is even more painful b/c you have a way to evoke such sad feelings.
Although a little sad, this is the proper direction to take your story. A reunification of Bette and Tina would have been unrealistic in this story. You are an exceptional writer, thank you for sharing your story.
Aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! but so well done! Pikagirl redux! Thanks!
Loving this! I love your Helena -you’ve captured her so well. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
LOL @ “I would hope that you wouldn’t let me sleep through that, Darling. You know how I hate to miss an epiphany,” Helena said softly.I watched hook recently so whenever anyone mentions epihpanies i think of the lines “i just had an apostrophe” “its an epiphany smee”.. lol… quality humour.. stunning chapter as always :)
A very well done chapter. I loved Helena’s line about hating to miss an epiphany. Oh yes, I heard what Tina said to the therapist and well, this story isn’t over yet, so I’m just going to hang in there and let you tell me how it ends. Great story, thanks.
you have written an amazing story – and I appreciate you developing these characters in a different way. I am a true TiBetteshipper and yet you write so well I finally let myself go with you instead of as Seahurst said projecting all my romantic wishes upon B&T and as you wrote in your story it was their own romantic fantasy that kept them from honesty with one another. If only IC and her group could write as well as you I would even endure the end of T&B on film – on second thought probably not.
What? I’m lost!
juz can’t take it…
I love it :DIn your fic, Tina & Helena belong together :D I love the way your leaning :D YAY!
As your story progressed I resigned myself to the fact that Tina and Bette would not be together in this story and having just read this chapter, you have just confirmed it. Even though I find your story sad it is just beautiful to read. For Tina and Bette to feel whole again and move forward in their lifes they have to take these steps apart, so which ever way you are going to go with them I’m sure it will be written with tenderness. Thank you.
Excellent Chapter. I’m glad I’m reading some stories where they can’t be together. Preparing me for the real end. I even like Helena on the show because U made her Cool in this atory first. Thanks.
I must say that I have mixed emotions about this. I like where you’re heading with this as I like the Helena you’ve created. I also like that it seems both Tina and Bette can finally move forward and not get stuck in their past. However, I’m still a TiBetter at heart. Would there be a chance that Tina will realize in the end that she really does want a life with Bette, no matter how wonderful Helena is? Having said that, I’ll gladly read whatever you have in store for us. Thanks!