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At first sight
Story written on February 19, 2011 by kins40.
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Bette helped Tina to the bathroom and she made her own way to the kitchen where she got breakfast underway.
Tina came out of the shower and instantly smelt the aroma of fresh coffee and the unmistakable sweetness of homemade pancakes. Her stomach growled. She carefully made her way down the corridor and heard Bette in the kitchen. She followed the sound but her progress was interrupted by a piece of furniture she had not known was in her way. She hit it with her bare foot and let out a small cry.
"Ouch…damn….Bette! …….Bette! Baby!" she called out.
Bette came running out when she heard her call out to her.
"T…..are you ok?" Bette was now looking at Tina bent over holding her foot in her hand, trying to rub away the stinging pain. She reached over to her. "Here….let me help you!"
Bette lifted Tina off the floor and brought her to the sofa. She sat her down and began rubbing her foot for her. She apologised for not warning her about the dresser at the end of the corridor.
"Well …I suppose you will have to make it up to me in kindness!" she said cheekily. Bette was more that happy to oblige and made a move to kiss the blonde but she was stopped in her track by a very hungry young woman demanding her first instalment in pancakes and coffee. She still managed however to plant a small kiss on the blonde’s lips.
They devoured their breakfast as they talked about their plans for the day. Tina suddenly realised that in her hurry to pack her bag yesterday she had forgotten to pack her white stick and asked if Bette could drive her to her apartment to retrieve it.
They cleaned up and Bette showered. They were soon on their way to Tina’s. The familiar smell of rain was in the air together with the coolness that the storm had brought. It surprised Tina as she walked out of the house with Bette. The pavements will be slippery, all the more reason to be cautious and retrieve her cane.
As they arrived near Tina’s apartment building, Tina felt confident enough that she would only need to go up by herself. She was very familiar with her surroundings there and would only require Bette to wait for her in the car. She’d only be a few minutes.
Tina exited the car and felt her way to the bottom of the sandstone steps. She heard Bette’s car pull away as they had agreed that Bette would turn the car around as they were heading back to her house.
She stepped forward and hit the first step with her foot. She lifted her leg to step up when the first tile gave way, having been finally dislodged by the heavy rain the night before.
It happened in a split second, the blonde lost her footing and fell forward heavily, smacking her head hard in the stony edge of one of the steps above.
The pain did not have time to register as she lost consciousness immediately. Rain drops fell and dotted the sandstone with dark pink coloured circles. The rain increased in intensity rapidly and water was no running down the steps mixing with the blood pouring from Tina’s head.
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How terrifying to fall and not be able to see
More please!
Oh my gosh…you did not let this happen!! Please bring Bette back with the car quickly! Please tell me that some good can come of this! I can hardly wait for more! Thank you!!
I hope Bette sees that Tina is need of her help. Please don’t let Tina be really hurt of die.
This is how life always happens isn’t it. You have the best days of your life and then you fall. Will Tina’s sight come back from this hit? Will she like what she physically sees when she sees Bette? Will any of that even happen? Only you can answer my many questions. Please answer them soon. This is such a great story.
Please give us another great chapter. Can’t believe you left us with Tina bleeding on the ground. I hope she regains her sight.
I’m at a loss for words. Wow. That was *good* Going on your A/N, I’d expected it to be something like Tina getting so scared she called Dana to come and get her or sth like that. Anyway, I hope Bette is able to help Tina by bringing her to the hospital in time. Please don’t kill Tina!
I btw must admit that what ladydove said went through my mind for nanosecond as well – will Tina regain eyesight? That would have quite the impact, her whole life is built on the fact that she’s blind now and although she’d probably be happy to see again, it will also feel so strange and maybe in those first few days or months she would long to be blind again. Anyway, I don’t know nearly enough about science, biology or anatomy to know whether that’s even possible with blindness.
That was both beautiful and heartrending. Whatever happens, I wish this story would go on, and on, and on and on….
Ladydove, I have the answer to one of your questions: “Will she like what she physically sees when she sees Bette?” Come on, my friend… I really have no idea what Kins has in store for us, but one thing I know for certain is that if Tina ever recovers her sight, she might surely go blind again because of Bette’s dazzling beauty… Don’t you agree? ;) Thanks a lot for the update Kins, and please let Tina be okay. K
Oh damn, please tell me you already have the next chapter ready to post. Please make Bette look up and see her lying there bleeding. Maybe this will be the shock to the system that will restore her sight. Personally, I think the force of the airbag hitting her in the face is what caused her blindness and now the force of the fall and hitting her head will cause her to see again, hopefully. Bette please look up the sidewalk for Tina or at least get out of that car and go look for her, she has already been gone to long. Great update. Thanks for posting. PPVVS
OMG,please….Let them be o.k.They suffered enough.Great story.Thank you for the update.
The trust that Tina has with Bette is just beautiful. I hope something good comes out of the fall Tina just had. Please post soon.
Awesome fic! Your descriptions of blind people’s world are thorough and heartfelt, thanks.
i was wondering how you were going to have tina fall and hit her head… and hopefully her eyesight returns… love this story..pps
OMG Kins40…! You left us here?!? So cruel…! LOL thanks for another great chapter :-) I’m looking forward to know what happen next..PPVS. Btw still can’t believe Bette let Tina walk by herself on that condition (slippery, raining, etc) regardless how familiar Tina is with her place, however … I believe you won’t let something bad happen, right?? :-) PS: call me silly, but after you left us on the ending of previous chapter, I thought Tina miraculously gain her vision back. But now.. Would it happen?? …. Anxiously waiting for your next post :-)
OMG u leave us again ahhah. Please let Tina be ok, get Bette back and help Tina. Please post more, thanks!
Good Golly! What more can happen to poor Tina? PPS!!
Are you killing me here?.. You’ve melted me like an Ice Cream in their first time “together”..And after that?..You’ve put a knife in my chest for doing this to Tina?… OH MAN…Now you have no choice but to update!…I want to see if she’s ok ..Or at least this accident can help bring her eye sight again? pps?…