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At first sight
Story written on February 19, 2011 by kins40.
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As daylight broke, their bodies fell for the last time back into the sheets. They remained wrapped up in each other, only a breath separating them and the lovers fell into a deep slumber.
Outside the rain started falling, little drops soon replaced by a torrential downpour. They slept through the storm.
Bette awoke first. She opened her eyes and a smile appeared on her lips. The beautiful blonde was there right in front of her, fast asleep, strands of messy hair covering her face.
Her mind shot back to the previous night, tears threatened as she recalled Tina’s plea, how it had shot through her heart like a dagger.
She was reminded of this beautiful statue she had seen in Rome a few years back when she visited the church of Santa Maria della Vittoria. The statue was of the Ecstasy of Teresa D’Avila. A wonderful sculpture of a woman in flowing robe, lying back with a look of rapture on her face as an exquisitely beautiful angel pierces her heart with a golden spear, filling her heart with Divine Love. Tina’s plea had done just that. Her heart had filled with love for this woman instantly.
She leaned in and kissed her brow softly. Tina stirred at the contact and her eyes opened. They were looking straight at each other. Bette found herself staring at the most intense pair of brown eyes she had ever seen. The rim of her iris was a deep brown but it lightened to a light Hazel hue as it neared her pupil. To her, her eyes seemed perfectly normal.
"Hey! You’re awake!……..morning!" Bette said softly but her tone betraying the huge smile she had on her lips.
"Good morning to you too!" Tina whispered also smiling. She reached up her hand and touched her fingers to Bette’s lips. She leaned in and kissed her softly.
"Are you hungry?"
"Yeah!…quite a lot actually…"
"Then how about I make us breakfast and you get in the shower….and then we’ll see where the rest of this day takes us?" Bette suggested.
They separated very reluctantly and winced in pain a little bit at the numbness in their limbs. They had not moved position from the time they had fallen asleep and their limbs had gone to sleep somewhat. It was a beautiful sort of pain as they remembered why they were feeling that way.
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How terrifying to fall and not be able to see
More please!
Oh my gosh…you did not let this happen!! Please bring Bette back with the car quickly! Please tell me that some good can come of this! I can hardly wait for more! Thank you!!
I hope Bette sees that Tina is need of her help. Please don’t let Tina be really hurt of die.
This is how life always happens isn’t it. You have the best days of your life and then you fall. Will Tina’s sight come back from this hit? Will she like what she physically sees when she sees Bette? Will any of that even happen? Only you can answer my many questions. Please answer them soon. This is such a great story.
Please give us another great chapter. Can’t believe you left us with Tina bleeding on the ground. I hope she regains her sight.
I’m at a loss for words. Wow. That was *good* Going on your A/N, I’d expected it to be something like Tina getting so scared she called Dana to come and get her or sth like that. Anyway, I hope Bette is able to help Tina by bringing her to the hospital in time. Please don’t kill Tina!
I btw must admit that what ladydove said went through my mind for nanosecond as well – will Tina regain eyesight? That would have quite the impact, her whole life is built on the fact that she’s blind now and although she’d probably be happy to see again, it will also feel so strange and maybe in those first few days or months she would long to be blind again. Anyway, I don’t know nearly enough about science, biology or anatomy to know whether that’s even possible with blindness.
That was both beautiful and heartrending. Whatever happens, I wish this story would go on, and on, and on and on….
Ladydove, I have the answer to one of your questions: “Will she like what she physically sees when she sees Bette?” Come on, my friend… I really have no idea what Kins has in store for us, but one thing I know for certain is that if Tina ever recovers her sight, she might surely go blind again because of Bette’s dazzling beauty… Don’t you agree? ;) Thanks a lot for the update Kins, and please let Tina be okay. K
Oh damn, please tell me you already have the next chapter ready to post. Please make Bette look up and see her lying there bleeding. Maybe this will be the shock to the system that will restore her sight. Personally, I think the force of the airbag hitting her in the face is what caused her blindness and now the force of the fall and hitting her head will cause her to see again, hopefully. Bette please look up the sidewalk for Tina or at least get out of that car and go look for her, she has already been gone to long. Great update. Thanks for posting. PPVVS
OMG,please….Let them be o.k.They suffered enough.Great story.Thank you for the update.
The trust that Tina has with Bette is just beautiful. I hope something good comes out of the fall Tina just had. Please post soon.
Awesome fic! Your descriptions of blind people’s world are thorough and heartfelt, thanks.
i was wondering how you were going to have tina fall and hit her head… and hopefully her eyesight returns… love this story..pps
OMG Kins40…! You left us here?!? So cruel…! LOL thanks for another great chapter :-) I’m looking forward to know what happen next..PPVS. Btw still can’t believe Bette let Tina walk by herself on that condition (slippery, raining, etc) regardless how familiar Tina is with her place, however … I believe you won’t let something bad happen, right?? :-) PS: call me silly, but after you left us on the ending of previous chapter, I thought Tina miraculously gain her vision back. But now.. Would it happen?? …. Anxiously waiting for your next post :-)
OMG u leave us again ahhah. Please let Tina be ok, get Bette back and help Tina. Please post more, thanks!
Good Golly! What more can happen to poor Tina? PPS!!
Are you killing me here?.. You’ve melted me like an Ice Cream in their first time “together”..And after that?..You’ve put a knife in my chest for doing this to Tina?… OH MAN…Now you have no choice but to update!…I want to see if she’s ok ..Or at least this accident can help bring her eye sight again? pps?…