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At first sight
Story written on February 6, 2011 by kins40.
The light splashing of the water was all that could be heard in Bette’s back garden. She had been swimming up and down for 30 minutes or so and had maintained the steady rhythm: 1,2,3 breathe right, 1,2,3 breathe left, her arms were reaching as far ahead of her as possible opening her lungs increasing her breathing capacity and stamina. The fingers of her hand were kept tightly together to form a perfect paddle which she used effortlessly to pull herself in the water. Her stomach muscles were engaged as she was cutting easily through the water. Her legs were straight, her kicking motion coming from her hips for added power. This was poetry in motion. Swimming had become second nature to Bette almost therapeutic, she could let her mind wander and think things out. Her best ideas always came to her when she was exercising. Endurance exercise had this effect on her, when you reach that plateau of comfort and you can let your mind escape. For this limited time you are at one with yourself, almost like an out of body experience.
She was thinking about the upcoming evening. She was actually looking forward to it. She’d see her friends again and catch up. Whether or not tonight she’d connect with someone was irrelevant, she just wanted to chat, laugh and drink….not too much though, she had to work this weekend!
She finished her last lap and went back inside to get ready.
Tina had eaten, cleaned up and was finishing her shower. All the injuries she sustained during the car accident had left no visible marks on the outside, the slight burns she had sustained had left no visible scars, the doctors had reassured her. She had lost a lot of weight at first, bedridden and in casts, but the physiotherapy and the return to fitness had sculpted her body back to its former glory. She was an exceptionally good looking woman. Long flowing blond locks, surrounding an angelic face with high cheek bones. She was of average height with a slight, yet toned, frame. Running had kept her in good shape and she felt great.
She exited her shower and went to get ready. Dana would be here soon.
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(26 votes, average: 4.65 out of 5)
Don’t stop there! I can’t wait to see Bette’s reaction about waht Tina just said to her. Great story
Bravo.I love your story.PPS
Oh my gosh…you have to come back and give us Bette’s reaction!! This was cruel! I still love your story!!
Thanks for the daily updates. Love the way Bette comes to Tina’s rescue.
Now that was just mean…What a place to stop. Loving your story and can’t wait for Bette’s reaction.
She’ll just have to feel her way instead :) Can’t wait to read your next chapter
Please, more one update, today. haha
This story is just starting and I love it already. I just want to say this: Thank you so much for sharing your insight about what it is like to be born or to become blind. One can tell you know a lot about the issue, and all the details you are giving us about Tina’s experience and daily routine are very interesting to me. I always love Tibette’s stories of course, but this one is doubly fascinating because of that element. And I thank you for that. PPS! K.
This is a great fic. I hope Bette isn’t scared off by Tina’s blindness, also I hope Tina is ok with the save. PPS
This is getting so good. Thank you for the post!
This is getting so good. Thank you for the post!
awesome writing i can’t wait for more chapters!!!!
You big tease :)PPS can’t wait to see how Bette handles this.
It´s an amazing story. I love the thoughtful yet humorous way you describe Tinas little mishab.
Wow, Tina is certainly brave! It would really take guts to
my message got cut off! She really has guts to be stepping out into something totally new and unknown. I’m glad she has Dana. She seems like she’s a great friend. I can’t wait to see what Bette’s reaction is to what Tina just told her..
your killing us here… stopping when you should still keep writing… ok… write fast…pps
My heart goes out to Tina when she said that she is blind. Can’t wait for the next post. Thank you for sharing. You are awesome!
This is really good. Excellent writing. Love the story.
Their first meeting is awesome!.. And how cool is Tina?.right.. “Tina said simply” Blind …I am blind. PPS NOW?…
This story is just–wow.
Thats awesome and Bette is there to resuce Tina and finally they meet!