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At first sight
Story written on February 6, 2011 by kins40.
"So Porter? Alice started "seen anyone who takes your fancy?"
"Alice!" warned Shane, "Bette can look after herself, leave it alone!"
"I’m just saying…..blondie over there has been staring in this direction for the past hour or so!" Alice continued pointing her thumb at Bette. "Easy pickings if you ask me…..she hasn’t moved her gaze at all…..it’s quite amazing really!"
Bette looked across the dance floor and spotted who Alice had been talking about. The blonde was indeed looking at her but somehow seemed to be engaged in conversation with the brunette sat next to her. Her girlfriend probably she thought. Bette looked away and back again…the cute blonde was indeed staring straight at her.
Tina had settled into the noisy environment. Dana had made a good choice and those seats were facing away from the blaring loudspeakers and conversation was easier. She was enjoying herself listening to Dana describing the goings on around them.
"I need to go to the bathroom," Dana declared. "Do you need to go?"
"No, I’m ok…..go on ahead! I’ll hold the fort!" Tina chuckled.
"Won’t be long…..don’t move and do not leave with anyone!" Dana half warned.
"Yes mom!" Tina replied pouting.
With those famous last words, Dana disappeared into the club in the direction of the toilets. As she expected, the queue was a mile long.
Back at their table, Tina felt a presence near her.
"Hello beautiful" came the coarse voice "haven’t seen you here before?"
Tina turned her head and unbeknownst to her was staring straight into the large woman’s breasts.
"Oooooooh! You work fast…like what you see? the voice said now with crude undertones.
At Bette’s table, the friends were now observing the scene.
"Blondie is under attack" Alice chirped! "and by one hell of a hundred miler!"
"What’s a hundred miler?" Helena asked.
"Someone you can tell is gay from at least a hundred miles away!" came the reply.
Before Alice could finish her sentence, Bette was on her feet and headed in the direction of the blonde. She could see the distinct uneasiness on the blonde’s face and the sole cause of this was the proximity of this really large and aggressive looking woman.
"There you are sweetness!" Bette exclaimed looking at the blonde, "they are playing that song you like…and you did promise me a dance!"
Without waiting for a reply, Bette grabbed Tina’s hand and dragged her away from the table and onto the dance floor. Tina stumbled behind Bette and before she could protest she found herself enveloped by two strong arms. She was about to open her mouth when Bette spoke.
"Listen, I am really sorry about that but you had to be blind to not see that that woman was about to eat you alive" Bette spoke softly into Tina’s ear.
"I am…." Tina said simply
"you are what?" Bette replied
"Blind…….I am blind!" is all Tina could say.
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(26 votes, average: 4.65 out of 5)
Don’t stop there! I can’t wait to see Bette’s reaction about waht Tina just said to her. Great story
Bravo.I love your story.PPS
Oh my gosh…you have to come back and give us Bette’s reaction!! This was cruel! I still love your story!!
Thanks for the daily updates. Love the way Bette comes to Tina’s rescue.
Now that was just mean…What a place to stop. Loving your story and can’t wait for Bette’s reaction.
She’ll just have to feel her way instead :) Can’t wait to read your next chapter
Please, more one update, today. haha
This story is just starting and I love it already. I just want to say this: Thank you so much for sharing your insight about what it is like to be born or to become blind. One can tell you know a lot about the issue, and all the details you are giving us about Tina’s experience and daily routine are very interesting to me. I always love Tibette’s stories of course, but this one is doubly fascinating because of that element. And I thank you for that. PPS! K.
This is a great fic. I hope Bette isn’t scared off by Tina’s blindness, also I hope Tina is ok with the save. PPS
This is getting so good. Thank you for the post!
This is getting so good. Thank you for the post!
awesome writing i can’t wait for more chapters!!!!
You big tease :)PPS can’t wait to see how Bette handles this.
It´s an amazing story. I love the thoughtful yet humorous way you describe Tinas little mishab.
Wow, Tina is certainly brave! It would really take guts to
my message got cut off! She really has guts to be stepping out into something totally new and unknown. I’m glad she has Dana. She seems like she’s a great friend. I can’t wait to see what Bette’s reaction is to what Tina just told her..
your killing us here… stopping when you should still keep writing… ok… write fast…pps
My heart goes out to Tina when she said that she is blind. Can’t wait for the next post. Thank you for sharing. You are awesome!
This is really good. Excellent writing. Love the story.
Their first meeting is awesome!.. And how cool is Tina?.right.. “Tina said simply” Blind …I am blind. PPS NOW?…
This story is just–wow.
Thats awesome and Bette is there to resuce Tina and finally they meet!