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Awful
Tina: Then he just left the room after he had freed me. I was crying. Then I thought that he maybe wanted to hurt Patricia so I got out of bed even though my body hurted. I saw him sitting next to Trisha I told him to get away from her and he got upset he walked over to me and hit me with his fist, and then he walked out. He told me I could have my ugly daughter and that he already had his time with her. Patty was crying. Then I surely knew I had to get away. I filled a suitcase with her stuff. I wanted to take Nathaniel with me to but I knew Eric would never hurt him and that he would come looking for me if I took him. So I walked to the door. Eric told me that when I walked out the door I could never come back. As if I wanted to stay… I walked out with Patricia and then I called you. The rest you know. I just feel so bad Trish saw Eric hitting me and that he probably hurt her…
Tina was crying her heart out and Bette was hugging her.
Bette: Did he ever hit you before?
Tina: No, he never hurted me before then.
Tina’s crying stopped slowly.
Bette: Tina?
Tina: Yes?
Bette: I love you.
Tina looked up.
Tina: I love you to.
Bette moved closer to Tina and they kissed.
Bette: I will never hurt you.
Tina: I know…
They kissed again. Patricia walked in and giggled.
Patricia: Kissy, kissy!
Tina and Bette moved apart and smiled.
Tina: Yes, we are kissing.
Patricia walked up to the women and sat down on the couch. She hugged her mother.
Patricia: You cried, Mummy. Why?
Tina: Nothing, baby, Nothing…
Patricia: Is it because of Dad?
Tina got tears in her eyes.
Bette: Go to the bedroom Tina. I will handle this.
Tina stood up and walked away. Bette moved closer to Patricia.
Bette: Your Mummy is sad right now but that will get better okay?
Patricia: Okay, Bette.
Bette: Did he ever hurt you?
Patricia: I can’t tell you.
Again that same answer. Bette decided that this little girl needed a child psychiatrist. But for now she had to let the girl feel good and safe.
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(34 votes, average: 4.18 out of 5)
Wow! I have to say that it’s sad what happened to Tina and I want to see Eric in jail forever! He said that he loved her and he raped her… Monster! Love the story!
Wow what a story. It’s official, I’m addicted. I hope Eric gets what he deserves! I also hope Nathaniel gets to do ballet too.
I hope the WEHO dykes kick his ass and abuse him so he can know what it feels like. Put him in jail and throw away the key.
Brilliant story, well written. PLease tell me that Tina gets her son! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Its such a powerful plot line.
Wow, that was intense! I’m impressed! I feel so bad for Tina and especially for Patricia…
DAMMMMM.. that bastard… ok now lets nail his balls to the wall… will read on when i get some more time… (I’m at work…lol…)
Great story.Let Eric suffer.PPS.
What happened to tina and patty was a hard read. I would love to see Eric in every aspect of pain for the rest of his life and beyond that. Great job on the story. You got me.
Great story! Can’t wait to see how it’ll continue, sad that Patricia was molested, there’s nothing worst than that. Please post soon, again very interesting story!
What a tragic begining to a beautifully written story. Keep up the good work.