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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 13: WET DREAMS
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Bette: “precisely, Tina didn’t wanna talk, and yesterday morning, she and I…, well, we were still distanced.”
Alice: “come on…, you knew it was a matter of touching the ground with her.”
Helena: “and I guess you touched more than ground.”
Bette: (getting angry) “you know, you’re right there was much more, but that’s private, nobody’s business; now tell me, Helena, why are you so interested in her?”
Helena: “I’m not.”
Bette: “you were making so many questions about her, why?”
Helena: “I did it for someone else.”
Bette: “let me guess hmm…, Louise?”
Helena: “yes, but it was supposed to be a secret.”
Bette: “why is Louise interested in Tina?”
Helena: “I don’t think it’s a romantic interest…, though…, she is very beautiful and bold, she’s very hot, you know.”
Bette: “shut up…, shit, you all have to stop ogling her, thinking and talking of her in that way…, she’s with me and this is private.”
Alice: “wow, you never talk like that about any girl…, so, you have slept with her?”
Bette: “no…, not your business.”
Helena: “well, Kit isn’t very happy.”
Alice: “she’s very protective of Tina.”
Bette: “you both make me sick…, I have to talk to Louise.”
The elevator’s door opened and a brunette girl with blue eyes emerged, it was Leigh, Nadia’s girlfriend and, as the wounded girl, an occasional ex-fling of Bette.
Bette: “hi, Leigh, are you just arriving or have you been here since early.”
Leigh: “I came with her, I was backing her from our apartment, we were talking by phone since she left Lower Manhattan, even when she was attacked…, I knew what happened.”
Bette: “I’m very sorry, Leigh.”
The door of the elevator opened again and Kit walked to them.
Kit: “hello, Leigh, are you calmer?”
Leigh: “yes, thank you.”
Kit: “okay, stay here, these ladies and I have some business to do”
The four women entered the office at the end of the corridor. Kit looked around before closing the door and noticed something.
Kit: “where is Tina?”
Bette: “she left toward home.”
Kit: “Bette, we don’t know if someone is watching the clinic, how could you let her go without protection?”
Bette: “I told her to stay, but she insisted on going home alone, she already boarded the subway, she texted me.”
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Hi proteonomics,
What a incredible chapter!!!
So it was Nadia who was shot, i am happy she will recover but this also means that the girls should be very careful and watch their backs. Tina was right that her office was bugged. Tina should tell Bette about everything she discovered and share it with her and the others.
With that information they can get rid of the three assholes and save the jobs of the employees.
Bette and Tina are have flasbacks from their past lovers, Alex and Randy. I wonder when they will find out that they are the others lost love.
You are a little tease, they finally are ready to make love and then you stop them. However the phone sex and dream were hot!
And Louise finally told Bette that Tina is her sister and you leave me hanging till you post the next chapter!
Thank you my friend for posting this chapter like you promised!!! ????
I will wait patiently for the next chapter!
Hi Bibi:
I’m glad that your comment has been restored, now I can answer you.
Yes, Tina knew that Aaron would bug her office.
Tina and Bette are now in cloud 9, hardly they’ll have time to talk about Tina’s findings because they still have more “urgent” matters to take care and the waiting is excruciating.
Yes, they have flashbacks, because they have similar feelings that 10 years ago.
When they would find they are the other’s lost love? Starting the next chapter, just cross fingers.
I didn’t stop the lovemaking, it was the three stooges (Alice, Helena, and Shane) ????????????
I don’t think that Bette could endure another phone-sex, she wants the “real thing”
Now, this is the point where I wanted to be when Louise tells Bette that Tina is Louise’s sister. I would post in one week (if everything goes as I expected)
Thanks, my friend for reading and commenting.
P
Hi proteonomics,
What a incredible chapter!!!
I am not allowed to post my chapter because i used a inappropriate word??? So i send you my comment via Messenger!
So Louise tells Bette that Tina is her sister, but does Tina know? I don’t think Tina knows this. I don’t think Tina knows about all the interrelationships of all the personnel at the company. All she knows is that Bette and Kit are sisters and Melvin is their dad. I’m going to have to map this out on a family tree.
I can’t believe that you get these two together ready to make the final step toward physical intimacy and they get interrupted and stopped. I’m beginning to think they really need to just plan a trip out of town and leave their phones at home and not tell anyone where they are.
The phone sex was hot. The dreams were steamy……now that Bette appears to be the embodiment of Alex, does she think that she might be Alex? She certainly realizes that she is as attracted to her as she was to Alex and that there are certain similarities. Once again, why would she turn down Bette’s offer to have her picked up and brought to her apartment. With desire that hot, 8:30 is early in the evening. And these are two women who are in their late 20’s. Even though their days have been full, both should be rested and have not over consumed alcohol. Oh well…..tomorrows work should be interesting. Tina should definitely work at either headquarters with Bette or at least not in her own building. She should not be in the same building as Aaron.
These two need to take a couple of days off and get to know one another and share information. Otherwise, whatever the plan is with Melvin and Aaron is going to get further down the road to completion when Bette and Tina have the means to stop it.
I love this story….but I’m getting frustrated with this coitus interruptus scenario.
I look forward to the next episode …
Hi Martha:
Yes, Tina doesn’t know that Bette is Alex, and she doesn’t know about the extended network of friendship and familiarity in the company. Tina is someone very well known by the old generation but hidden and unknown by the youngers, and soon you will know why.
Now, remember these last three chapters (11, 12 and 13) are happening just in the same weekend, so don’t be mad at me, is just a short time. But they’ll be together soon (crossing fingers).
Okay, now you’re close, why Tina ‘s been so shy to get Bette in her bed? Would it be because of the short time of being with her (just one weekend)? Is it because she still doesn’t trust Bette? Is it because she loves Bette very much and doesn’t want to make her incompletely loved because Tina still remembers Alex? Is it because Tina doesn’t feel confident that she would sexually give herself totally to Bette because she fears the phantom of Alex in her bed?
Okay, I leave you with this thought, but the truth will come up un the next couple of chapters.
I agree, Tina shouldn’t be in the same building than Aaron, and I belive Bette agrees with you too.
Fine, no more coitus interruptus scenario (I’m crossing fingers).
Well, I’m glad that you like this story and hope it would get better in each chapter.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P
I just knew through the whole of this great Chapter that you were going to leave me hanging over a cliff!!!
SG
Hi SG:
I’m very glad that you liked this chapter.
I’m really sorry, I didn’t want to leave you hanging over a cliff, but that cliff was going to be harder to wait than the one I’m living now.
Before I posted I had to make a brave cut because the chapter was going to be too long and the cliffhanger a little cruel, so, I decided to put that in the middle of the next chapter.
I hope to post soon, around in one week; just a little patience ????
Thank you for reading and commenting.
P
Patience has never been one of my virtues!
SG
Hola proteonomics
Me encanto el capitulo quisiera saber que va a pasar cuando tina descubra
que bette es alex y bette descubra que tina es randy si fuera por mi quisiera
que subieras el otro capitulo mañana pero como no es asi tendre que
esperar con ansias a que subas el otro capitulo sabes que esta historia me
encanta no podrias subir 2 capitulos
Hola Escorpion,
Que bien que te haya gustado este capitulo, y respecto a tu pregunta, que pasara cuando Tina descubra que Bette es Alex. Te voy a contar que yo creo que Bette va a descubrir primero que Tina es Randy, eso está a la vuelta de la esquina.
Si, en el siguiente capítulo, una de ellas va a saber quien es la otra, y en el subsiguiente, la otra va a saber la verdad.
Desde ese momento, toda tendencia de esta parte de la historia se va a alinear en la búsqueda de la verdad y la lucha por justicia.
Bueno, no te cuento mas, porque si no te estaría diciendo todo lo que va a pasar luego.
Gracias por seguir esta historia y por tus valiosos comentarios.
P