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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 6: THE PROJECT
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Kit observed the discomfort on the blonde’s face, and she remembered how she felt most than 20 years ago when Maxine asked her about her being raped by her own father, but things changed when she realized how good the support of other women was for her recovery.
Kit: “yes, we had a meeting yesterday, and we all agree on supporting you, look, there is nothing to be ashamed, it’s not your fault, and we’ll stand by your side”
Tina: “Kit, I know your good intentions, but I don’t like other people to know about my business, especially about this embarrassing situation”
Kit: “I understand, Tina, but you’re not the only one, however, because of you already filed the complaint, that will prevent others to become victims”
Tina: (sighing) “hmm, so is no a coming-back, on my filing that complaint, right?”
Kit: “no, girl, you must keep going, no shame Tina, on the contrary, be proud of yourself for being brave enough to denounce that bastard”
Tina: “can I ask you something?”
Kit: “sure”
Tina: “among all those people who know about this, is your sister included?”
Kit: (smiling softly) “yes, she knows, why”
Tina: “oh…, well, she’s so different from you”
Kit: “each person is different from the others”
Tina: “yes I guess…, well, that’s all”
Kit: “do you wanna talk about that?”
Tina: “hmm, there is nothing to talk about, Kit; I don’t really know your sister”
Kit: “yet, you think she is very different from me”
Tina: “yeah, well, is that I’ve heard comments about her”
Kit: “and I guess they were not good”
Tina: “it’s not that, comments about me maybe not very nice too”
Kit: “Tina, one advice, sometimes things are not what they seem, don’t judge people by what others say about them, instead, get to know them”
Tina: “fine, Kit”
Tina left Kit’s house, taking the subway toward her house; her mind was full of thoughts, Elizabeth Porter, that beautiful woman that attracts her like a moth to a flame, why can’t she take away that brunette from her mind, her voice, her scent, that strong feeling that run all over her body when she is close, that night in Brenda’s bathroom…’oh my God…’, how many hours each day, since that night, she has fantasized about what could have happened in that bathroom, if circumstances were different… ‘fuck Elizabeth Porter, fuck you…, why you make me feel in this way…’
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Hi proteonomics,
Sorry to hear about your troubles with the chapter and the picture. This picture looks great.
There are and will be a lot of hurt feelings between Bette and Tina and they will feel betrayed by Maxine when they discover she kept things secret and did everything to keep them apart. But Maxine had her reasons, but still there will be a lot of anger and hurt.
Both Tina and Bette are in difficult positions and Tina feels abonded and not being cared about by Bette, it is a mess. Isn’t there a way Bette can explain to Tina why she ” choose” Aaron’s side? Tina could be on board to catch those bastards. Maybe Bette can give hints via there chats?
Fantastic chapter and i am looking forward to the next one!!!!
Hi Bibi:
Yes, my friend, I was shocked when my documents were missing, but now everything is set for future chapters.
Respect to the feelings of Tina and Bette about Maxine, they will find out much later, and maybe it will be for good, in the meantime, the feelings between them are the ones driving the story and only when they are at peace (????????????) they could go over other issues.
The reaction of Tina is not only about Bette, but it’s also mainly about herself, and the next chapter you’ll realize Bette’s plan.
Yes, Bette could give Tina some clues, but Tina doesn’t want to hear anything from Bette this is becoming a power struggle between them, hope they’ll behave (hahaha).
Don’t worry about the current mess; a roller coaster is just started ????????????.
Thank you very much, my friend, for reading and commenting.
P
Thanks for posting sorry you had problems.
Wish Bette could join in with Tina on sorting this out they work so much better together.
Looking forwarded to more and not even mentioning the word ‘cliffhanger’!
SG
Hi SG:
Yes, I will like them to work together but they have to struggle with their feelings first, and find each other again, it has been 10 years and they are not even sure they were Alex and Randy (OMG, I’m not really talking about the new show, lol, just kidding ????????????), just give’em time.
Oh, and the cliffhanger thing, wasn’t about you, I had a couple of PM warning me.
Thanks again, for following this story
P
proteonomics:
Sorry to hear about your trouble, it’s also happened to me once. And after that I changed my way, that’s why I always wrote online, at least it wouldn’t disappear when my computer was broken.
Back to the story…what a chapter, 24 pages, lots of details and explanations. My mine is fighting whether to blame Maxine or not. It’s bad to keep such a secret from the girls, but she had her reason. she might just try to protect the girls but I still think it”s not her place to do so. In fact, its none of her business to interfere. I knew as a mother, she will be worried about her daughter, but what if Tina and Bette never met? They would be so sad and wouldn’t she carried the guilt for the rest of her life?
As for Aaron…Again, being such an asshole in the story, he’s sexism and should be punished. I could understand why Bette tried to be fair to both of her colleagues, but the things he’s done were nothing but evil, regardless of men or women. Bibi was right, it was indeed such a mess, please fix it soon.
What a great story, my friend, though Bette was still not my favorite, probably also because of the new show. I have fate that you will fix it and let them be happy together! Thanks for a great chapter!
CJ
Hi CJ:
Don’t blame Maxine, if she did something, it was for a good reason, and don’t blame for what Dawn Dembo did, that was just Dawn’s mischief, some people can’t understand how bad they hurt others just by playing tricks to them.
On the other hand, Maxine has to protect Bette and Tina, they were underage, minors and in a country in internal war, a place where human trafficking is every day’s business, moreover, Maxine had to protect especially Tina, well it’s a little complicated for now, you’ll find out later in the story.
And even though Maxine tried to avoid them to meet each other, destiny is unrelenting; but they would know each other sooner or later, they are in the same circle of friends and family, even if they didn’t meet 10 years ago, they would find each other, as they are doing now in current time.
Now, Bette has her own plan, just wait less than 1 week and you’ll read about it, but Tina is very stubborn.
And about the end of the story, forget about that, as people say, ‘there is much bread to be sliced and a war to be continued’…. ????????????, we are not even in the middle of the story.
Thanks for your kind words, my friend.
P
Wow…. Tina is hurt that things did not go her way. But they did not go against her either. The mediation committee found that the projects submitted by Aaron and Tina were nothing alike, therefore no thief has occurred. Tina still owns her work. And Aaron owns whatever he’s got which looks like perhaps some ideas and nothing more. Aaron has lost big time here. And it was all done without calling Aaron a thief. Tina needs to think this through. If Bette really did not care, she could have ruled that yes, they were the same and Tina could have had to share her project with Aaron. No, Aaron has not been punished, but now everyone is on notice that he is the thief of intellectual property. Patience Tina, patience. The wheels of justice sometimes turn slowly, but eventually results in fairness.
Really good chapter….Tina is going to figure out that Alex is not dead. And hopefully, we (your reading audience) are going to find out why Tina and her mother are in danger. Wait – her mother? Is Tina’s mother alive? Or is this a reference to Maxine Kennard? And why did Maxine need to keep Tina and Bette from knowing about each other while they were growing up?
Keep ’em comming….Love this story.
Hi Martha:
Yes, things weren’t as good as Tina was planning, regards to her work and her new feelings for Dr. Porter, but that will pass.
Yes, Bette tries to protect Tina and has her own plans, just wait a few days.
Now, indeed Aaron has stolen Tina’s files, but just the first ones, let’s say the pre-project, and that is what Bette has in her hands, Tina’s submitted project included the pre-project (modified of course) and all the technical development, obviously, Bette will see that Aaron’s is a cheap copy of Tina’s document and that he is the thief, but that will be seeing later, Bette was to play her cards carefully until she could destroy the document with the fake signature of her mother.
Yes, Tina’s biological mother is alive, and now is not far from her, but she hasn’t seen her yet. A clue, Maxine promised Tina’s mom that she will rescue her baby daughter and will take care of her.
Maxine, wanted to keep Tina hidden from Bette, because Bette could tell the rest of family and friends about Tina, and her evil father (Melvin) would perhaps, find about that baby; but Maxine isn’t opposed to Tina and Bette as a couple, on the contrary(????????????); wow, too many things are coming in the future chapters, I know.
Thank you, Martha, for liking this story, and for your kind words.
P
Every time I read a new chapter, I dislike Melvin more and more. It is no wonder that he is friends with Aaron, They are sleazy and immoral. I hope they are not part of a pedophile ring. They give me the creeps.
Bette and Tina are still dancing around each other. I wonder what big reveal you will have for Tina that Alex is not dead and she is actually Bette. They are going to be mad at Maxine when they find out.
Hi JS:
Yes, Melvin, Aaron and the other two creepy men, are very bad news. Aaron is on a different level than the others, but still, he is a bad man. But you already mentioned something that is written for the next chapter, Bette’s plan against Aaron.
The dance of Tina and Bette has just started, it will be a spinous dance with ups and downs, sweets and bitters, and big surprises for both of them.
Thanks for following this story, and I hope you like it.
P