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Back In Shape- 4
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“They lie” Bette said. “I mean everyone needs to workout… for your health.” She quickly added.
Eric nodded, “I’m sure if my trainer would look like you I’d be very motivated” He put his hand on her thigh.
Bette stiffed taking his hand off, “You’ll cry after the first ten minutes.”
“Cries of pleasure” Eric smiled rubbing her thigh again.
“Eric, Tina is my… friend” Bette said trying to calm herself down.
“She doesn’t have to now…” He leaned in.
Bette got up “You’re married with a child!” She admonished. ‘And I’m a thirty one years old hypocrite.’ She thought.
“I never wanted a child!” He angrily said, “I wanted to save my marriage but all it did was put the final nail in!”
“Eric” Bette said shocked.
Eric shook his head just then they heard the doorbell.
“Saved by the bell” He bitterly said.
They ate silently Bette looking at Tina.
“This is good” Bette said.
“How hard is it to order food” Eric bitterly said.
“Is everything ok?” Tina asked him.
“Peachy” He smiled playing with his food.
Tina saw Bette glaring at him waiting to catch his eyes.
“So how was work?” Tina asked.
“Great, I’m handling another divorce. I swear to god I don’t know why people ever get married.”
‘You’re preaching to the choir’ Bette thought. “Well some people know they’re better apart” Bette said looking at Tina “And want to start their next chapter in life knowing it will be much better than the last one.”
“How do they know it?” Tina whispered.
“Because everything is better than to live a lie.” Bette replied “They know the relationship doesn’t work and they both will be much better people apart. They still have a chance for an happy endings.”
“How did Angelina Jolie put it? Happy endings are just stories that haven’t finished being written yet” Eric said laughing.
The next morning Bette woke up alone, she sighed looking around her apartment when she heard a knock.
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Oh sad! I hope Tina is strong enough to leave Eric without having to catch him cheating. She needs to make a different choice that includes being with Bette! Thanks for posting!
Oh, this chapter was definitely painful to read. What is it going to take for Tina to see how wrong Eric is for her and Dylan? Let’s compare…unbelievably sexy, wealthy, personal trainer that loves your son and you to death versus scumbag, cheatin, could care less about your son and you, Eric. Hmmm… I don’t know what the difficulty is… but I’m not in Tina’s shoes. I hope she figures it out SOON. PPS – Totally loving the story!
Tina needs to make a decision…soon…
Bette did the right thing, but now will Tina do the right thing too and leave Eric’s ass? I cant believe Tina didnt believe Bette when she told Tina Eric hit on her……… What is she oblivious? Please help Tina to wake up and realize she is better off without Eric! And Dylan seems to have taken to Bette too……
Hell and I felt bad about Tina cheeting I bet Eric has been cheeting for a lot longer than her. Hitting on a friend while Tina and the baby are both just feet away he is an ass. He has probably been planning to divorce her for a while but couldn’t figure out how without losing some of his belongings. PPS
The choice was already obvious to Tina. She just needs to act decisively; leave a lifeless marriage with Eric or risk losing a happy life with Bette. Thanks for the post. pps
I think Bette is wanting out too soon or is she trying to force Tina into seeing the reality of her situation? Scumbag should leave so Tibette can be happy together. Thanks for your great story!! PPS A Loyal Fan.
This chapter hurts. But Bette did the right thing. Why is it that the right thing usually almost makes us wish we were dead due to the pain that our heart is inflicting on us? Thanks for this chap! PPS
What an easy choice…Bette (need I say more) or Eric (the womanizing jerk). As painful as it was, Bette did the right thing. Now let’s hope that Tina does too (listen to your heart, girl), and kick Eric’s sorry ass to the curb!! This is a great story; thanks for the update…PPVS!!!!!
hoo thats hurt, so sad…i hope tna will fight for bette
Just caught up with the story, and I like it as much as I did the first chapter. Hopefully Tina will catch Eric cheating and she will not have to feel guilty for wanting a divorce. Does Tina work or does she have to rely on the jerk? She really needs to talk to Eric and learn that he does not want to be tied down with a chhild that he did not want. That bit of info should tell Tina everything she needs to know. Post when you can.
OMG eric is scumbag andplease let tina catch him cheating!!!bette did the right thing but still very sad sniff :)PPS
OUCH! Bette staying for dinner told her all she needed to know about Tina’s messed up marriage. Eric needs to go Geek! Please make it happen. PS
I love this story… have to tell you it’s very fammiliar to me, I can understand Bette’s pain perfectly… it’s a awful situation! Hope you post soon.
That was so sad!!!! I know Bette did the best thing for her and Tina. Now please let Tina catch Eric with one of his playmates. Thanks geek PPVS
What a terible situation to be in, there are no winners here. So sad for Dylan what a way to grow up. That’s the great thing about fiction we can mold it the way we want but in real life this kind of situation just sicks! Love the drama PPS
Just hope that Tina wakes up before one of the other Mc Hottie gets Bette/ It will be Tinas lost ERic can still do his cheating.
Bette did the right thing, even though it hurts…maybe she’ll hire a pi to follow Eric and prove it to Tina, or Tina hires the pi and then comes begging to Bette…but will it be too late??? PPS
It was VERY painful, but Bette did the right thing for both of them. Tina now needs to decide what is best for her and Dylan. She knows the truth about Eric, she just don’t want to believe it. I wonder how long it will take Dylan to miss Bette. It’s a good thing that he can not talk yet. PPS:o).
First, I have to tell you that I love ALL of your stories. I apologize for not leaving comments on your stories earlier. I love this story so far. And I think this chapter is the best because you’ve managed to capture the emotion and intensity between Bette and Tina perfectly. The story is incredible. Please post soon.
This scene reminds me of the song ‘9crimes’ by Damien Rice. Love your stories but you’ve outdone yourself. I really like the underlining sadness in this short one. Keep it coming! Did I say quick?
Oh damn this is sad