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Back In Shape- 4
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“God Bette” Tina cried.
“Oh fuck… Tina….” Bette breathed “Oh… OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”
Tina was seconds behind her biting hard into Bette’s shoulder as she came, both jerked and moaned.
They breathed hard foreheads against each other. “Take me to bed” Tina whispered.
Bette nodded taking her hand.
“I know you wouldn’t lie” Tina said. They were lying tangled within each other.
“You’re never going to leave him are you?” Bette whispered.
“What?” Tina said as if she didn’t hear.
Bette sighed moving away from Tina she got dressed.
“Hi what’s wrong?” Tina asked.
Bette turned her back to Tina “I want out” She whispered her voice cracking.
“What?” Tina asked feeling the room starting to close on her.
Bette turned around “Two months ago you gave me a way out and I didn’t take it… I want to take it” Bette said tears in her eyes.
“You don’t mean it” Tina said feeling a lump forming in her throat.
“I thought I could handle it. I really did” Bette said through her tears. “I tried, I told myself it’s ok because I don’t love you. I tried so hard not to love you… then I told myself it’s ok to love you but to not let it get to me.” Bette sighed.
“Bette…” Tina sadly said.
“I want to kiss you in public I want to hold your hand I want not to worry if I leave a mark while we’re making love… I thought I could share you but its too much” Bette said fully crying, “It’s too much Tina I love you too much to keep sharing you… I need you to let me go. I don’t like the person I’m becoming… I think yesterday was a wake up call. You’re married and you’re not going to change it.” Bette said wiping the tears.
“I’m not sure I can let you go” Tina whispered feeling her heart breaking to a million pieces.
“I tried not to want more but it kills me Tina. Can’t you see how much you’re hurting me?” Bette said the pain evident on her face. “Please… I don’t even recognize myself” Bette said starting to cry “I can’t do this anymore…”
“I’m so sorry” Tina said tears falling.
Bette gave her a sad smile “I would tell you to choose but you already did”
“Bette…” Tina said her voice cracking.
“I wish you happiness Tina… I really do.” Bette said tears forming again. “I’m sorry you can’t be happy with me” She whispered.
Tina stood in the door looking at Bette “I was happy with you Bette. The happiest” She said walking out leaning on the door she let the tears flow knowing that inside Bette was doing the same.
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Oh sad! I hope Tina is strong enough to leave Eric without having to catch him cheating. She needs to make a different choice that includes being with Bette! Thanks for posting!
Oh, this chapter was definitely painful to read. What is it going to take for Tina to see how wrong Eric is for her and Dylan? Let’s compare…unbelievably sexy, wealthy, personal trainer that loves your son and you to death versus scumbag, cheatin, could care less about your son and you, Eric. Hmmm… I don’t know what the difficulty is… but I’m not in Tina’s shoes. I hope she figures it out SOON. PPS – Totally loving the story!
Tina needs to make a decision…soon…
Bette did the right thing, but now will Tina do the right thing too and leave Eric’s ass? I cant believe Tina didnt believe Bette when she told Tina Eric hit on her……… What is she oblivious? Please help Tina to wake up and realize she is better off without Eric! And Dylan seems to have taken to Bette too……
Hell and I felt bad about Tina cheeting I bet Eric has been cheeting for a lot longer than her. Hitting on a friend while Tina and the baby are both just feet away he is an ass. He has probably been planning to divorce her for a while but couldn’t figure out how without losing some of his belongings. PPS
The choice was already obvious to Tina. She just needs to act decisively; leave a lifeless marriage with Eric or risk losing a happy life with Bette. Thanks for the post. pps
I think Bette is wanting out too soon or is she trying to force Tina into seeing the reality of her situation? Scumbag should leave so Tibette can be happy together. Thanks for your great story!! PPS A Loyal Fan.
This chapter hurts. But Bette did the right thing. Why is it that the right thing usually almost makes us wish we were dead due to the pain that our heart is inflicting on us? Thanks for this chap! PPS
What an easy choice…Bette (need I say more) or Eric (the womanizing jerk). As painful as it was, Bette did the right thing. Now let’s hope that Tina does too (listen to your heart, girl), and kick Eric’s sorry ass to the curb!! This is a great story; thanks for the update…PPVS!!!!!
hoo thats hurt, so sad…i hope tna will fight for bette
Just caught up with the story, and I like it as much as I did the first chapter. Hopefully Tina will catch Eric cheating and she will not have to feel guilty for wanting a divorce. Does Tina work or does she have to rely on the jerk? She really needs to talk to Eric and learn that he does not want to be tied down with a chhild that he did not want. That bit of info should tell Tina everything she needs to know. Post when you can.
OMG eric is scumbag andplease let tina catch him cheating!!!bette did the right thing but still very sad sniff :)PPS
OUCH! Bette staying for dinner told her all she needed to know about Tina’s messed up marriage. Eric needs to go Geek! Please make it happen. PS
I love this story… have to tell you it’s very fammiliar to me, I can understand Bette’s pain perfectly… it’s a awful situation! Hope you post soon.
That was so sad!!!! I know Bette did the best thing for her and Tina. Now please let Tina catch Eric with one of his playmates. Thanks geek PPVS
What a terible situation to be in, there are no winners here. So sad for Dylan what a way to grow up. That’s the great thing about fiction we can mold it the way we want but in real life this kind of situation just sicks! Love the drama PPS
Just hope that Tina wakes up before one of the other Mc Hottie gets Bette/ It will be Tinas lost ERic can still do his cheating.
Bette did the right thing, even though it hurts…maybe she’ll hire a pi to follow Eric and prove it to Tina, or Tina hires the pi and then comes begging to Bette…but will it be too late??? PPS
It was VERY painful, but Bette did the right thing for both of them. Tina now needs to decide what is best for her and Dylan. She knows the truth about Eric, she just don’t want to believe it. I wonder how long it will take Dylan to miss Bette. It’s a good thing that he can not talk yet. PPS:o).
First, I have to tell you that I love ALL of your stories. I apologize for not leaving comments on your stories earlier. I love this story so far. And I think this chapter is the best because you’ve managed to capture the emotion and intensity between Bette and Tina perfectly. The story is incredible. Please post soon.
This scene reminds me of the song ‘9crimes’ by Damien Rice. Love your stories but you’ve outdone yourself. I really like the underlining sadness in this short one. Keep it coming! Did I say quick?
Oh damn this is sad